Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更简洁、语法更准确，并用一个主题句开头，然后用一两句具体细节支持。避免重复（如重复使用“remind”）。可以把手机提醒作为具体例子，并说明它如何帮助你。

例: I'm not very good at memorising things. To cope with this, I usually set reminders on my iPhone, which alerts me at the right time so I don't forget tasks.

提案: 回答应更直接并提供一具体例子或结果，减少模糊用词（如 'maybe'、'MMM'）。用连接词使逻辑更清楚：先回答，然后说明原因并给例子。

例: I rarely forget important things because I rely on my phone reminders. For instance, I schedule reminders for bill payments and meetings, so I receive alerts and never miss them.

提案: 句子结构混乱，信息不集中。回答应先说出主要需要记住的事项（如学习要点、生日、工作任务），然后用连词分条说明每项如何记住。注意语法（e.g. 'I study' → 'I have to study'，'make a short note after study' → 'make short notes after studying'）。

例: I need to remember study material, important dates and lab tasks. For example, I make short notes after studying key concepts and set calendar reminders for friends' birthdays and lab deadlines.

提案: 回答要更准确并给出清晰的具体例子；避免重复和口头语（如 'MMM'、重复 'on my'）。末句应完整描述具体事件（例如上次提醒做了什么）。

例: I use my iPhone reminders and calendar to remember important things. For example, yesterday I set a reminder to print an important document, and the alert helped me finish it on time.

× No, I'm not good at some to remembers something and so I always set a reminder to remind me.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering things, so I always set a reminder to help me.

句子结构混乱：使用了不正确的短语 "good at some to remembers something"。应使用固定搭配 "good at + -ing" 表示擅长/不擅长做某事，且动词用动名词形式。建议记住固定搭配并把多余或重复的词去掉。

× For example, I always set a reminder on my iPhone to remind the things I need to do.

✓ For example, I always set a reminder on my iPhone to remind me of the things I need to do.

动词不定式短语与宾语搭配不当：应使用短语 "remind someone of something" 或者 "remind someone to do something"。原句缺少 "me" 作间接宾语，并需在 "remind" 后加介词 "of" 来引出名词短语。

× MMM, I think the answer is no, because my memory's not so good. So I always set the important things as a reminder on my iPhone.

✓ MMM, I think the answer is no, because my memory isn't very good. So I always set important things as reminders on my iPhone.

现在时使用与名词单复数不一致："set the important things as a reminder" 中 reminder 应与 things 在数上一致，且定冠词 "the" 不必要。建议将 reminder 改为复数 "reminders"，并移除不必要的定冠词或使用更自然的表达。

× It will remind me what I need to do, so maybe not forget something.

✓ It will remind me what I need to do, so I might not forget anything.

单复数与句子结构问题：原句缺少主语和正确的情态动词形式，"maybe not forget something" 不自然。改为 "I might not forget anything" 更符合英语表达，注意 anything 与否定/可能性的搭配。

× I have study, I need to remember the key knowledge on all the important concepts and so I always make a short note after study the knowledge.

✓ I study, and I need to remember the key points of important concepts, so I always make short notes after studying.

时态与动词形式错误："I have study" 不正确，应该用一般现在时 "I study" 或 "I have studied"。此外 "after study the knowledge" 中应使用动名词形式 "after studying"。建议复习一般现在时和动名词的用法，并简化表达。

× But in the labs I should need the birthday of my friends or family, so I always set a.

✓ But in the lab I also need to remember my friends' or family's birthdays, so I always set one.

介词和短语结构错误："in the labs" 若指通常在实验室里应使用单数或去掉定冠词，此外 "need the birthday of my friends" 的介词搭配不自然，应该用 "remember someone's birthday" 或 "friends' birthdays" 的所属格。句尾不完整，补为 "set one" 指设置一个提醒。

× MMM, my memory is not so good. So I always set a reminder on my on my iPhone to remind me not to forget the important thing.

✓ MMM, my memory isn't very good. So I always set a reminder on my iPhone to help me remember important things.

句子结构与重复问题：有重复词组 "on my on my iPhone"，且 "remind me not to forget the important thing" 不如 "help me remember important things" 自然。建议避免重复并用更地道的表达方式。

× For example, last day I said remember to remind me printed some important.

✓ For example, the other day I asked someone to remind me to print some important documents.

过去时与表达不完整："last day I said remember to remind me printed some important" 语法混乱，缺少明确主语和动词形式，并且 "printed" 用错时态。应使用短语 "the other day" 或 "last week/day"，动词用过去式或过去完成式，并补全宾语（如 "documents"）。建议练习正确的过去时句型并注意完整句子结构。