Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子基本清晰，但存在时态和表达冗余问题；回答可以更直接并使用连接词（例如 because）来增强逻辑；可以用更具体的例子说明记忆方法或成果。建议把回复控制在最多五句内，开头直接回应问题，然后补充原因和具体例子。

例: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things because I had to learn large amounts of legislation for my law qualification. For example, I used spaced repetition flashcards and regular summaries to retain sections of the code, which helped me pass the exam on the first try.

提案: 回答有明显语法错误（例如“really forget”应为“rarely forget”），且有重复词汇（“all all”）。需纠正错误并给出更自然的表达，同时可用一到两个具体例子支持观点。保持句子简洁并使用连接词如 because 或 so。

例: Rarely — I usually write down all my appointments and set alarms on my phone, so I rarely miss important events. For instance, last month an alarm reminded me of a client meeting I might otherwise have skipped.

提案: 内容相关且有逻辑，但有小语法错误（例如“seems”应为“seem”或调整结构）。回答可以更具体，说明如何管理日程或举例说明因守时获得的好处。使用连接词如 therefore 或 so 来增强衔接。

例: As a lawyer, I need to remember appointments with colleagues and clients, because punctuality affects my professional reputation. For example, I keep a synced calendar and set reminders, which helps me maintain trust and secure repeat business.

提案: 表达有多处语法和结构问题（例如“the major 1”不自然，应为“the main one is”；时态和单复数需一致）。建议按结构先给出主题句，再用一两句说明具体方法并举例。使用连接词 such as firstly 或 for example。

例: I use a few methods, and the main one is writing down important events in my digital calendar and setting multiple alarms. For example, I create an event with a one-day reminder and another alarm 30 minutes before a meeting to ensure I arrive on time.

× Yes, I think I am, especially when I was preparing my professional qualification examination before I qualified as a lawyer.

✓ Yes, I think I am, especially when I was preparing for my professional qualification examination before I qualified as a lawyer.

句中缺少介词“for”来搭配“preparing”。短语“preparing for something”是固定搭配，表示为某事做准备。建议记住常见搭配：prepare for sth.

× I have to memorize a lot of legislation and the policies.

✓ I had to memorize a lot of legislation and policies.

此句位于讲述过去准备考试的情景，时态应与上下文一致用过去时。原句使用现在完成时或一般现在时不符合语境。将“have to”改为过去式“had to”。另外“the policies”前可去掉定冠词以更一般地指政策。

× No, I really forget important things because I'll write down all all the appointments in my schedule and set up alarm clock on phone.

✓ No, I rarely forget important things because I write down all the appointments in my schedule and set up alarm clocks on my phone.

原句中逻辑与时态混乱：用“No, I really forget”与接下来的说明矛盾，应为“很少忘记”（rarely）。另外“I'll write”表示将来，与习惯性动作冲突，需用一般现在时“I write”。“all all”重复，需删去一个；“set up alarm clock on phone”缺冠词与复数，应为“set up alarm clocks on my phone”。建议注意副词表频率、时态和名词单复数及冠词的使用。

× In this routine I never miss any significant events.

✓ With this routine I never miss any significant events.

句首搭配不当。常用固定搭配为“With this routine”或“In this routine,”二者均可，但若用“In this routine”后面最好加逗号。原句语法上可接受但更自然的是用“With this routine”。此处属于句子结构/搭配调整以使表达自然。

× I'm a lawyer now. One of the most important things for me is to remember every appointment with my colleagues and clients.

✓ I'm a lawyer now. One of the most important things for me is remembering every appointment with my colleagues and clients.

在“one of the most important things is ...”结构中，后面跟动名词更自然，用“remembering”表示作为名词性的动作。虽然原句用不定式也可被接受，但用动名词更地道。建议熟悉固定表达的惯用形式。

× Never missing or being late for a meeting makes me seems reliable.

✓ Never missing or being late for a meeting makes me seem reliable.

主语是短语“Never missing or being late for a meeting”，视为单数，谓语应为“makes”，后接系动词“seem”需用原形，“seems”是第三人称单数形式，会与前面的“makes”结构冲突。正确结构为“makes me seem”。建议注意使役动词（make/makes）后接动词原形。

× I do have some useful methods and the major 1 is that writing down every significant events and appointments in my schedule and set up alarm clocks on my phone.

✓ I do have some useful methods and the main one is writing down every significant event and appointment in my schedule and setting up alarm clocks on my phone.

句中数处错误："the major 1"不自然，应为"the main one"。在“is writing down...”结构中，后面应使用动名词作表语。名词“events”和“appointments”在此处作为泛指可用单数或复数，但要与前后平行，建议改为单数形式并列或都用复数；“set up”作为并列动作，应改为动名词“setting up”以保持平行结构。最后注意冠词和数的搭配。