Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如"I am a person who are good"应为"I am a person who is good"。内容较简单，缺少连贯的连接词，且例子不够具体。建议注意主谓一致，使用连接词如"for example"后补充更多细节，使回答更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I consider myself good at memorising things. For example, I can still remember the names of my kindergarten classmates even after many years, which shows my strong memory skills.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如"I've sometimes forgot"应为"I've sometimes forgotten"，且表达重复，逻辑不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并注意时态和语法的正确使用。

例: No, I haven't forgotten anything very important. However, I occasionally forget small tasks, such as handing in homework on time.

提案: 回答内容较为笼统，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议使用连接词如"such as"来列举具体内容，并丰富细节，使回答更具体和连贯。

例: In my daily life, I need to remember many deadlines, such as those for tests, homework, and projects, which are all related to my studies.

提案: 回答语法和表达不完整，句子结构混乱，缺少清晰的逻辑和细节。建议使用完整句子，明确说明使用应用程序的方式和效果，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: To remember important things, I usually use smartphone applications that send me reminders about deadlines, so I never miss any important tasks.

× Yes, I think I'm a person who are good at memorizing things.

✓ Yes, I think I'm a person who is good at memorizing things.

主语是单数的"a person"，关系代词"who"指代单数，因此谓语动词应使用单数形式"is"，而不是复数形式"are"。

× I can memorize my kindergarten students name until now, and I can remember some trivial things in my daily life.

✓ I can memorize my kindergarten students' names until now, and I can remember some trivial things in my daily life.

"students"是复数，表示多个学生，名词所有格应加撇号和s，变成"students'"，表示学生们的名字；"name"应使用复数形式"names"，因为指多个学生的名字。

× But I've sometimes forgot some small things like forget to hand homework or forget some daylight about learning.

✓ But I've sometimes forgotten some small things like forgetting to hand in homework or forgetting some details about learning.

"forgot"是一般过去时，与现在完成时"I've"不搭配，应使用过去分词"forgotten"；"forget"作为动名词应改为"forgetting"；"hand homework"应为"hand in homework"；"daylight"用词不当，应为"details"（细节）。

× But I think in general I don't have.

✓ But I think in general I don't have any.

句子缺少宾语，"don't have"后应加宾语"any"，使句子完整。

× I don't ever forget something very important.

✓ I never forget anything very important.

"don't ever"表达否定频率不自然，改为"never"更合适；"something"应改为否定句中的"anything"。

× I have to remember a large number of deadlines about my test or my homework or project, and generally I have to remember a lot of things about my study.

✓ I have to remember a large number of deadlines for my tests, homework, or projects, and generally I have to remember a lot of things about my studies.

"deadlines about"应改为"deadlines for"；"test"和"project"应使用复数形式；"study"作为不可数名词时意思不同，复数形式"studies"更合适，表示学习的各个方面。

× To remember important things in my daily life, I usually use smart application to help me keep in mind all the deadlines in my daily life and by using those apps, I can be noticed by those apps and I can clearly.

✓ To remember important things in my daily life, I usually use smart applications to help me keep in mind all the deadlines, and by using those apps, I can be reminded by them clearly.

"smart application"应为复数"smart applications"；"be noticed by those apps"用词不当，应为"be reminded by those apps"；句子末尾"I can clearly"不完整，应补充动词使句子完整。