Memory— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“face and names”应为“faces and names”，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意单复数和冠词的使用。

例: I'm not very good at remembering things, especially faces and names, so I find it helpful to take notes on my phone. This makes it easier for me to recall important information.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

例: Yes, I once forgot to bring my passport to the airport, which caused a lot of problems.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不连贯的问题，如“Where most importantly”不合适。建议使用清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Most importantly, I need to remember to drink enough water every day. Also, I make sure to check in with my family and friends even when I'm busy.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“Will I find is helpful too?”不符合英语习惯。建议使用完整且自然的句子，并正确使用介词。

例: I also find it helpful to take notes on my phone. For example, I use calendar apps to help me keep track of important dates.

× I'm not really good at remembering things, especially face and names, so I find it is helpful to take notes on my phone which makes it easier for me to remember important information.

✓ I'm not really good at remembering things, especially faces and names, so I find it is helpful to take notes on my phone which makes it easier for me to remember important information.

这里“face and names”中“face”应使用复数形式“faces”，因为指的是多个人的脸。名词复数形式错误属于复数问题。

× Yes, I once got bring my passport to the airport which caused a lot of. Problem.

✓ Yes, I once forgot to bring my passport to the airport which caused a lot of problems.

句中“got bring”是不正确的过去时表达，应使用“forgot to bring”表示过去忘记带护照。且“a lot of. Problem”中“Problem”应为复数“problems”，表示许多问题。

× Where most importantly, I need to remember drinking enough water every day and. I need to check in with my family and my friends even when I'm busy.

✓ Most importantly, I need to remember to drink enough water every day and I need to check in with my family and my friends even when I'm busy.

句首“Where”无意义且句子结构混乱，应去掉。动词“remember”后应接动词不定式“to drink”而非动名词“drinking”。句中断句错误，需合并为完整句子。

× Will I find is helpful too? Taking notes on my phone.

✓ I also find it helpful to take notes on my phone.

“Will I find is helpful too?”句子结构错误，且“will”用法不当。应使用一般现在时表达习惯行为。

× For example, I use calendar apps to help me keep track on that date.

✓ For example, I use calendar apps to help me keep track of that date.

动词短语“keep track”后应接介词“of”，而非“on”，这是介词使用错误。