Weather— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What's the weather like where you live?
受験者
I live in Hanoi, which is in the north of Vietnam, and the weather is generally hot, especially during summer. Sometimes the heat can be a bit exhausting because it makes it difficult to stay comfortable when I go outside. However, I think I'm quite used to it since I've lived there for such a long time.
試験官
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
受験者
I definitely prefer cold weather, I find it much more comfortable because I can wear different types of clothes and I don't feel tired because of the heat. Actually, I really want to visit a place with snow someday because I've never experienced it before. I think seeing snow in real life would be a memorable experience.
試験官
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
受験者
I prefer dry weather because it's much more convenient for my daily life. I usually go to school by myself, so whenever it rains I honestly just want to stay at home. Although I know I can't skip school. Rainy weather also makes traveling around much more inconvenient.
試験官
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
受験者
Yes I am. I usually check the where the forecast in the evening while having dinner because I often watch the news with my family. Besides that, I also check the weather app on my phone especially before going out so I can prepare suitable clothes or bring an umbrella if needed.
試験官
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
受験者
I think climate change has caused a lot of noticeable changes. For example, the weather has become more unpredictable with hotter summers, heavier rain and more extreme weather events. I also think it affects pupils daily lives because people have to deal with uncomfortable weather conditions more often than before.
試験官
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
受験者
Yes, definitely. I'd love to visit places with climates that are completely different from Hanoi, for example. I really want to travel to countries where it snows because it would be a totally new experience for me. I think experiencing different weather conditions is one of the most interesting parts of travelling.
評価
総合
Part 1
What's the weather like where you live?
スコア: 82.0提案: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và đủ ý nhưng có thể ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó dùng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ nhiệt độ, mùa) và dùng liên từ để kết nối. Tránh lặp ý ("hot" và "heat" nhiều lần) và giữ không quá 4 câu.
例: I live in Hanoi, in northern Vietnam, and it's generally hot, especially in summer. Temperatures often reach around 35°C, which can make being outside uncomfortable. However, I'm used to it after many years living there.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
スコア: 88.0提案: Ý rõ ràng và có lý do, kết cấu tốt. Có thể cải thiện bằng cách dùng liên từ đa dạng và một ví dụ cụ thể về hoạt động bạn muốn làm trong thời tiết lạnh (ví dụ trượt tuyết) để tăng tính cụ thể và tự nhiên. Giữ 3 câu là đủ.
例: I prefer cold weather because it's more comfortable and lets me wear varied clothing. For example, I'd love to visit a snowy place to try skiing or build a snowman, since I've never experienced snow. Seeing snow would definitely be a memorable experience.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
スコア: 80.0提案: Nội dung rõ nhưng hơi dài và lặp ý (inconvenient, want to stay home). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ giao thông, đồ ướt) và dùng liên từ để liên kết. Tránh câu ngắt quãng không cần thiết.
例: I prefer dry weather because it's more convenient for daily life. For instance, rain makes commuting to school harder and my clothes and books can get wet. Therefore, I usually check the forecast and bring an umbrella if needed.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
スコア: 90.0提案: Trả lời rõ ràng, có thông tin thời điểm và mục đích. Có thể gọn hơn bằng cách nối các ý với liên từ và sửa lỗi nhỏ ("check the where the forecast" → "check the weather forecast"). Giữ câu ngắn, mạch lạc.
例: Yes. I usually check the weather forecast in the evening while watching the news with my family, and I also look at a weather app on my phone before going out so I can choose suitable clothes or bring an umbrella.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
スコア: 84.0提案: Ý chính và ví dụ đã có nhưng câu cuối thiếu chính xác ngữ pháp và không cụ thể ("pupils daily lives"). Nên dùng từ chính xác (people/students) và nêu một hoặc hai hệ quả cụ thể (bệnh tật, thiệt hại nông nghiệp, gián đoạn học tập). Dùng liên từ để nối ý rõ ràng.
例: I think climate change has made the weather more unpredictable, causing hotter summers and heavier rain. As a result, people face more heat-related illnesses and farmers often suffer crop losses, which also sometimes disrupts school schedules.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
スコア: 86.0提案: Trả lời tốt và hợp lí, nhưng lặp ý (snow mentioned twice) và tiếng Anh có thể mạch hơn nếu tóm gọn. Thêm một hoạt động cụ thể bạn muốn làm khi đến nơi có khí hậu khác để làm câu trả lời sống động hơn.
例: Yes, definitely. I'd like to visit snowy countries to try activities like skiing and to see snow for the first time. Experiencing different climates is one of the most interesting parts of travel for me.
文法
× I usually check the where the forecast in the evening while having dinner because I often watch the news with my family.
✓ I usually check the weather forecast in the evening while having dinner because I often watch the news with my family.
The original sentence contains a word order and word choice error: 'check the where the forecast' is ungrammatical. The correct phrase is 'check the weather forecast.' This is a sentence structure/word choice mistake; replace the incorrect sequence with the proper noun phrase. Suggestion: learn common collocations such as 'check the weather forecast' and read sentences aloud to notice misplaced words.
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