Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and add one brief specific reason. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I love flowers. My boyfriend gives me a bouquet every month, and I especially enjoy their vibrant colours and sweet fragrances because they brighten my flat.

提案: Correct grammar (use singular/plural and articles), be direct and add one specific detail about how that friend shows her love of flowers.

例: Yes, one of my close friends loves flowers. She arranges fresh blooms in vases at home every week and often posts photos of them on social media.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise supporting reason and a short example to be specific.

例: Not many. I live in a busy urban area with few gardens, so most greenery is limited to potted plants on balconies and a few street trees.

提案: Use correct verb tenses, avoid repetition, and be specific about when and how often you take photos.

例: Yes, I often photograph them when I receive monthly bouquets from my boyfriend so I can keep a visual record of the different arrangements.

提案: Give a direct answer, then add a specific context or example (occasions or platforms) and use smoother phrasing.

例: Yes, people often send flowers for birthdays, anniversaries and funerals. I also see many people sharing floral photos and delivery posts on social media platforms like Instagram.

× Yes, my boyfriend give me a monthly flowers and I love vibrant colors and fragrances of flowers.

✓ Yes, my boyfriend gives me flowers every month and I love the vibrant colors and fragrances of flowers.

The verb 'give' must take an -s in the third person singular present: 'gives'. 'A monthly flowers' is incorrect: 'every month' or 'monthly' alone is correct and 'flowers' does not need an article. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'vibrant colors' to sound natural.

× I think my one friend loves flowers because her boyfriend gives her flower too.

✓ I think one of my friends loves flowers because her boyfriend gives her flowers too.

The phrase 'my one friend' is unnatural; use 'one of my friends'. 'Gives her flower' needs plural 'flowers' to match context. Also keep pronouns consistent; 'her' is correct referring to the friend.

× No, there's not a lot of flowers here because I live in a city.

✓ No, there aren't a lot of flowers here because I live in a city.

With the plural noun 'flowers' the negative contraction should be 'there aren't' (there are not). Using 'there's' is incorrect because it contracts 'there is' for singular.

× Yes, because my boyfriend gives me flower every month and I am taking photos of it for my memories.

✓ Yes, because my boyfriend gives me flowers every month and I take photos of them for my memories.

Use 'gives' for third person singular (correct) but 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'I am taking photos of it' is incorrect: use simple present 'I take photos' for habitual action and replace 'it' with 'them' to refer to plural 'flowers'. 'For my memories' is awkward but acceptable; consider 'to remember them' or 'as memories'.

× Yes, in my social media I see a lot of people sending flowers to others.

✓ Yes, on my social media I see a lot of people sending flowers to others.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'social media' rather than 'in'. The present tense 'I see' is fine for habitual observation, but preposition choice needed correction.