Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğrudan ve olumlu, ancak dilbilgisi hataları (örneğin "the lilies is") ve biraz abartılı genelleme var. Cümle yapılarını düzeltin, tekil/çoğul ve artikellere dikkat edin, ayrıca bir destekleyici neden ekleyin. Konuşma doğal ve akıcı olsun, maksimum 3-4 cümleyle net bir görüş ve bir neden verin.

例: Yes, I love flowers. I think lilies are the most beautiful because of their elegant shape and pleasant scent, which brighten up any room.

提案: Cevap açık ama cümle tam değil ve dilbilgisi sorunları var (gereksiz nokta, "take" yerine "takes", "balcony" önünde artikeller). Daha doğal bir yapı kullanın: konu cümlesi, bağlaçla destekleyici bilgi ve bir örnek detay ekleyin.

例: Yes, my mother loves flowers. We have many plants on our balcony because she enjoys gardening and waters them every morning.

提案: Cevap kısa ve doğrudan, fakat daha doğal ve zenginleştirilmiş bir cevap için bir neden veya miktar verin. Bağlaç kullanarak bir açıklama ekleyin ve uygun artikeli kullanın ("the balcony").

例: Yes, especially on the balcony. We keep several pots there because it gets good sunlight for the plants.

提案: Cevap anlamlı fakat son kısmı dilbilgisel olarak hatalı ve doğal değil ("I'm not taking"). Kısa bir olumsuz yanıt verin ve ardından basit bir sebep ekleyin; tercihleri belirtirken zaman uyumuna dikkat edin.

例: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I'm not very interested in photography.

提案: Cevapta anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları var (soru formu karışık, "gave it a flowers", zaman ve kelime seçimi yanlış). Daha düzenli bir cevap verin: genel durum, iki örnek ve doğru zaman/kelime kullanımı. Bağlaçlarla örnekleri bağlayın.

例: Yes, people often send flowers. For example, they give flowers to someone who is ill to wish them well, and they also give bouquets to graduates as a congratulation.

× Yes, I love flowers and I think the lilies is the most beautiful flower in the world.

✓ Yes, I love flowers and I think lilies are the most beautiful flowers in the world.

The noun 'lilies' is plural, so it must take the plural verb 'are' and match plural noun phrase 'flowers'. Use plural 'flowers' rather than singular 'flower'. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb number agree and keep noun number consistent (plural with plural verbs and plural noun forms).

× Yes, my mom loves flowers and. We have lots of flowers in our balcony because my mom loves it and take care of the flowers.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers. We have lots of flowers on our balcony because my mom loves them and takes care of the flowers.

There is an incomplete clause 'and.' which breaks sentence structure. Preposition 'on' is correct for 'balcony'. Pronoun 'it' is incorrect for 'flowers' (use 'them'). Verb 'take' must agree with singular subject 'my mom' so use 'takes'. Suggestion: finish clauses, use correct prepositions, matching pronouns, and subject-verb agreement.

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

This sentence is actually correct and needs no change. 'Are there' is the correct form for asking about existence of plural 'a lot of flowers'. No correction needed.

× Yes, especially in our balcony.

✓ Yes, especially on our balcony.

Although main issue is preposition, it also relates to structure. Use preposition 'on' with 'balcony'. Suggestion: learn common noun-preposition pairs such as 'on the balcony'.

× No, I don't like taking pictures that much, so I'm not taking.

✓ No, I don't like taking pictures that much, so I don't take them.

The phrase 'I'm not taking' is incomplete and unnatural here. Use simple present 'I don't take' to express habitual action. Also add object 'them' or 'pictures'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and complete the verb phrase with object when needed.

× Yes, if your health is not well, are you as sick? We gave it a flowers to the sick person.

✓ Yes, if your health is not good and you are sick, we give flowers to the sick person.

Original has incorrect question insertion and wrong tense 'gave' for general practice; 'are you as sick?' is unclear. Use 'if... and you are sick' and present simple 'we give' for general habits. Remove extraneous 'it' and use 'flowers' without article. Suggestion: use present simple for customs and ensure sentence clarity.

× Or you have a graduation party, we gave flowers to you too.

✓ Or if you have a graduation party, we give you flowers too.

Use 'if' to form the conditional sentence and present simple 'we give' for general custom instead of past 'gave'. Also the object order 'give you flowers' is more natural. Suggestion: use conditionals with 'if' for general situations and present simple for habitual actions.