Flowers— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap akıcı ama tekrarlara ve dilbilgisi hatalarına dikkat etmelisiniz. Kısa, doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından 1-2 destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin. Fiil formlarına (ör. "water" vs "watering") ve çoğul/tekil uyumuna dikkat edin. Gereksiz tekrarları azaltmak için eşanlamlı ifadeler kullanın.

例: I adore flowers, especially lilies. I enjoy keeping them at home and watering them regularly so they stay healthy.

提案: Cümle yapısında özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat edin ("loves" yerine "love"). Ayrıca daha spesifik detay vererek cevabı güçlendirebilirsiniz: hangi çiçekleri seviyorlar, bahçede ne tür düzenlemeler var gibi. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizin akışını iyileştirin.

例: Yes, my mother and grandmother love flowers. My grandmother has a large garden where she grows roses and tulips, and my mother often brings cut flowers into the house.

提案: Gramer ve sözdizimine dikkat edin: "There are a lot of different kinds of flowers" gibi doğru yapı kullanın. Cevabın mantığı tutarlı değil; kendi ilgisiyle çevreyi ilişkilendiriyorsanız bu ilişkiyi netleştirin ve somut örnekler verin (parklar, balkon bitkileri, bahçeler vb.).

例: Yes, there are many different kinds of flowers around where I live, such as roses, marigolds and daisies, because many neighbors maintain small gardens and balconies.

提案: Zaman uyumuna dikkat edin; sorulan soru genelde alışkanlık hakkında olduğundan geniş zaman kullanın ("I take"), geçmiş zamanla çakışan ifadeleri düzeltin. Cevabı çeşitlendirmek için neden fotoğraf çektiğinizi ve ne yaptığınızı (paylaşma, arşivleme) belirtin.

例: Yes, I often take photos of my flowers to track their growth and to share the best shots on social media.

提案: Genel olarak iyi bir cevap; daha doğal bir ifade için gereksiz tekrarları azaltın ("express their" iki kere). Ayrıca bir örnek durum veya popüler çiçek türü ekleyerek cevabı zenginleştirin.

例: Yes, sending flowers is common in Turkey, especially for celebrations or to show gratitude; people often send roses or mixed bouquets for birthdays and special occasions.

× I also love to watering them.

✓ I also love watering them.

The verb pattern after 'love' can be either to+infinitive or gerund. 'Love to watering' mixes both and is incorrect. Use 'love watering' or 'love to water'. Suggestion: say 'I also love watering them.'

× My favorites are lilies and I love to keep flowers.

✓ My favorites are lilies, and I love to keep flowers.

This sentence mainly needed punctuation to separate two ideas; grammatically 'favorites' and 'lilies' are plural and correct. However, if intended meaning is 'My favorite flowers are lilies', a clearer correction is 'My favorite flowers are lilies, and I love to keep flowers.' Suggestion: use 'My favorite flowers are lilies' for clarity.

× I got my own flowers.

✓ I got my own flowers.

This sentence is grammatically correct as past tense. If intended as current possession, use present perfect: 'I have got my own flowers' or 'I have my own flowers.' No change required unless meaning differs.

× My grandmother and mother also loves flowers.

✓ My grandmother and mother also love flowers.

Compound subject 'My grandmother and mother' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. Suggestion: use plural verb form with compound subjects.

× My grandmother has a garden and she keeps a lot of flowers in there.

✓ My grandmother has a garden, and she keeps a lot of flowers there.

Using 'in there' is unnecessary; 'there' is sufficient. Also add comma to join clauses. Suggestion: use 'there' for location and avoid redundant prepositions.

× There is a lot of kinds of flowers where I live because I love to keep flowers.

✓ There are a lot of kinds of flowers where I live because I love to keep flowers.

The phrase 'a lot of kinds of flowers' is plural, so use 'There are' not 'There is'. Also consider clearer phrasing: 'There are many kinds of flowers where I live.' Suggestion: match 'there be' with the true number (singular/plural).

× Yeah, I took photos of them because I love to see them growing and I take photos of them while they're growing.

✓ Yeah, I take photos of them because I love to see them growing, and I take photos of them while they're growing.

Mixing 'took' (simple past) with present habits 'I love' and 'I take' causes tense inconsistency. If speaker means a habitual action, use present simple 'I take'. Suggestion: keep present tense for habits: 'I take photos...'.

× Yeah, it is a culture in Turkey.

✓ Yeah, it is a cultural practice in Turkey.

'A culture' is awkward; 'a cultural practice' or 'it's part of the culture in Turkey' is more natural. If saying 'it is a culture' meaning a cultural norm, say 'it's part of the culture in Turkey.' Suggestion: use 'a cultural practice' or 'part of the culture.'

× When they want to express their feelings or they want to express their gratitude, they send flowers to each other and I think it is so kind of them.

✓ When they want to express their feelings or their gratitude, they send flowers to each other, and I think it is very kind of them.

Repeating 'they want to express' is unnecessary; combine with parallel structure. Also 'so kind of them' is informal; 'very kind of them' is better. Suggestion: use parallel noun phrases and join clauses with a comma before 'and.'