Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答的核心意思不够清楚，且“their occasion”“in a lot of person”和“remember date all”表达不自然。先直接说明是否容易记住名字，再比较小范围和多人场合，并给出具体原因。注意使用复数形式 names。

例: It depends on the situation. I can usually remember the names of a few people I meet, but it’s much harder when I’m introduced to a large group. I sometimes mix up their names if I don’t get a chance to talk to them individually.

提案: 你给出了有效的对比和例子，但“new runs”应换成准确的词语，“I tried”与一般习惯不一致，最后的表达也不够自然。可以用“repeat the name”和“when I first hear it”描述记忆方法，并说明这样做的效果。

例: I’m better at remembering people’s faces than their names. For example, I sometimes recognize a classmate at school but can’t recall their name. When I meet someone new, I try to repeat their name shortly after hearing it, which helps me remember it.

提案: 你表达了“如果只见过一两次，我不会介意”的观点，但句子重复且语法不清。建议直接回答感受，再用“if we’ve only met once or twice”解释原因；“we are not familiar with us”可改为“we don’t know each other well”。

例: I don’t really mind if someone forgets my name, especially if we’ve only met once or twice. We probably don’t know each other very well yet, so it’s an understandable mistake. However, I might feel a little disappointed if a close friend forgot it.

提案: 回答中提到了用手机保存名字，这是具体且相关的内容，但前半句难以理解，后面的语法也不连贯。先明确回答“偶尔会”或“不常会”，再说明你会把新认识的人的名字存进手机通讯录；注意使用“their name”和“look it up”。

例: I occasionally forget people’s names, especially when I meet several new people at once. To avoid that, I save their names in my phone contacts after we meet. If I see them again and can’t remember their name, I can look it up on my phone.

× If a few new friends, I mean I can remember their name

✓ If I meet a few new friends, I can remember their names.

条件从句缺少主语和谓语。可以补上“I meet”，构成完整的条件从句。另外，后面用“their names”与复数“a few new friends”保持一致。

× I can remember their name

✓ I can remember their names.

“their”在这里指几位朋友，因此“name”应使用复数“names”。

× in a lot of person, a lot of people

✓ when I'm around a lot of people

“a lot of”后面需要接名词；表示很多人时，应使用复数“people”，不能使用单数“person”。

× I can't really remember date all

✓ I can't really remember all their names.

结合上下文，这里谈的是记不住人名。“all”应放在“their names”前；而且指多个人的名字时，“name”应使用复数。

× when I see some new runs in school, I know this is my classmate

✓ When I see some new friends at school, I know they are my classmates.

这里按上下文将“runs”理解为“friends”。“some new friends”是复数，因此后面应使用“they are my classmates”，而不是“this is my classmate”。

× So I tried to repeat it while I first hear and it should help me remember

✓ So I try to repeat the name when I first hear it, and that should help me remember it.

这句话描述的是平时使用的方法，应使用一般现在时“try”，而不是过去时“tried”。此外，“hear”后需要补上宾语“it”；“when”也比“while”更适合表示第一次听到名字的时刻。

× if the people first meet me

✓ if people meet me for the first time

泛指人们时通常不加定冠词“the”。表示“第一次”时，常用短语“for the first time”。

× we are not familiar with us

✓ we are not familiar with each other

句子表达的是双方彼此不熟悉，应使用“each other”（彼此），而不是“us”。

× I think it's a simple simple thing, hey, can't remember my meme because if we only meet once or twice

✓ I think it's understandable if they can't remember my name, because we've only met once or twice.

原句中“can't remember...”缺少明确主语，且“because if”连接方式不正确。可将原因从句写成“because we've only met once or twice”。此处根据上下文将“meme”理解为“name”。

× because we only meet once or twice

✓ because we've only met once or twice

这里描述的是到目前为止见过一两次，使用现在完成时更合适。现在完成时的结构是“have/has + 过去分词”，因此应使用“met”。

× Actually not when I meet someone, some new friends meet through the inch our widget and I can let this let them name in my widget.

✓ Actually, not often. When I meet new friends through the internet, I can save their names on my phone.

原句有重复和不完整的表达，难以构成清晰完整的句子。可以将意思整理为两个完整句子：“not often”回答是否经常忘记，“When I meet...”说明如何保存名字。此处将不清楚的“inch our widget”按上下文理解为“the internet”，将“widget”理解为“phone”。

× And I if I see her I will find it on my phone

✓ If I see them, I will look up their names on my phone.

前文谈的是复数“new friends”，所以应使用“them”和“their names”，不能改用单数“her”。“look up their names”也能清楚表达在手机上查找名字的意思。