Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答能直接表达“记名字不容易”，但后续内容不完整且难以理解，影响自然度和连贯性。注意使用正确结构，例如“find it hard to…”，并用一个具体原因或例子补充即可。避免重复使用“always”，也要确保句子完整。

例: No, I find it quite hard to remember people's names. I sometimes mix up the names of my nephews and their friends, especially when I meet several people at once.

提案: 回答方式切题，也有具体例子，但“image a flower casing someone”表达不清，且“I I will”重复。可以使用“picture”或“imagine”说明你会联想到什么，并在结尾点明这种方法如何帮助记忆。

例: I usually connect a person's name with a mental image. For example, if my friend's name is Rose, I picture a rose in my mind. That association makes the name easier to remember.

提案: 回答清楚表达了你的态度，并用自身经历解释原因，内容比较完整。注意一般现在时应使用“forget”，而不是“forgot”；“several chest”可能是“several times”，“remembered”应改为“remember”。结尾可以保留“我不会认为这是针对我”的意思。

例: I don't mind if people forget my name because I sometimes forget other people's names too. For example, I may meet someone several times before I can remember their name. I know it's usually just a common mistake, not something personal.

提案: 回答切题，也提供了具体情境，但“for example”位置不自然，第二句是残句。建议把原因和例子连成完整句子；注意使用“have known / have stayed in touch”，并将“embraced”改为表示“尴尬的”一词“embarrassing”。

例: Yes, I often forget people's names because I have a poor memory for names. Even if I've known someone for a long time, I sometimes can't recall their name when we meet again. It's quite embarrassing.

× I always find hard to remember others names.

✓ I always find it hard to remember other people's names.

“find it hard to do something”中需要用 it 作形式宾语，不能省略。另外，名词前应使用形容词 other；这里表达“其他人的名字”，应说 other people's names。

× I I will image a flower casing someone and that image helps me remember.

✓ I will image a flower casing someone and that image helps me remember.

主语“I”重复出现了一次，应删除一个。原句中的“image a flower casing someone”疑似语音识别错误，因此不对无法确定的部分作语法推断。

× I don't mind when people forgot my name because I often forget other people's name too.

✓ I don't mind when people forget my name because I often forget other people's names too.

这句话表达一般情况，应使用一般现在时。主句中的“don't mind”和后面的“often forget”都是现在时，因此“forgot”应改为“forget”。

× I often forget other people's name too.

✓ I often forget other people's names too.

“other people's”指其他人的，后面泛指多个人的名字，因此“name”应使用复数“names”。

× I sometimes meet my friends several chest before I remembered their names.

✓ I sometimes meet my friends several times before I remember their names.

这里描述经常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时。“remembered”应改为“remember”，与前面的“sometimes meet”保持时态一致。“several chest”疑似识别错误；若想表达“好几次”，应说“several times”。

× Even I've known someone or stay in touch for a long time. I sometimes can't recall her name when we meet again.

✓ Even if I have known someone or stayed in touch for a long time, I sometimes can't recall their name when we meet again.

“Even I've known...”不能独立构成完整句子。可用“Even if”引导让步条件从句，并将该从句与后面的主句连接。这样句子结构完整，也避免把从句单独写成残句。

× Even I've known someone or stay in touch for a long time.

✓ Even if I have known someone or stayed in touch for a long time, I sometimes can't recall their name when we meet again.

“have known”中的“known”是过去分词；与“have”构成现在完成时的并列动词也应使用过去分词，因此“stay”要改成“stayed”。