Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也补充了具体对象，但“match my new classmates' face, their identity with their names”表达不自然，且“face”和“identity”意思重复。可以使用“connect names with faces”或“associate names with faces”，并补充一个简短原因或例子。

例: Yes, I’m quite good at remembering people’s names, especially my classmates’. I usually connect a person’s name with their face, which helps me remember it.

提案: 你说明了记名字的方法，但“associate their face and their names”搭配不够自然；“a people”应改为“a person”或直接用“people”。“It sounds a little bit difficult”与后文的意思衔接不清，可以直接解释多交流如何帮助记忆。

例: I try to use people’s names when I talk to them and connect each name with a face. The more I talk to someone, the easier it is to remember their name.

提案: 回答直接，感受、原因和例子都比较完整，连接也自然。可以把“not introduce myself much”改成更地道的“not introduce myself to many people”，并适当精简后半句，避免信息重复。

例: I might feel a little annoyed at first, but I wouldn’t take it personally. I’m fairly quiet at social events and don’t introduce myself to many people, so it’s understandable if someone forgets my name.

提案: 回答有明确立场，但重复了前面“容易记住名字”的内容；“associate their face with their identity”不够自然，“since I said”也不适合这里的表达。建议简洁回答，并用“connect names with faces”说明原因，删除重复的结尾。

例: No, I rarely forget people’s names. I usually connect a person’s name with their face, which makes the name easier to remember.

× I can easily match my new classmates' face, their identity with their names.

✓ I can easily match my new classmates' faces and identities with their names.

“classmates”是复数，后面表示他们各自的“脸”和“身份”时，通常应使用复数“faces”和“identities”。修改后的句子也用“and”连接两个并列对象。

× By simply talking to people more, I can associate their face and their names easily.

✓ By simply talking to people more, I can easily associate their faces with their names.

“associate”表示“把某事物与另一事物联系起来”时，常用结构“associate A with B”，不能用“associate A and B”。此外，“their”指代复数的people，因此这里用“faces”更恰当。

× It sounds a little bit difficult, but if you get to know a people it becomes much easier.

✓ It sounds a little bit difficult, but if you get to know a person, it becomes much easier.

“a”后面应接单数可数名词。“people”通常表示“人们”，是复数形式；此处指一个人，应使用“a person”。

× No, I hardly forget others' names since I said I can easily associate their face with their identity.. So it's not very common for me.

✓ No, I hardly forget others' names since I said I can easily associate their faces with their identities. So it's not very common for me.

“their”指代复数的“others”，这里说的是他们各自的脸和身份，因此用复数“faces”和“identities”。同时，句末重复的句号已改为一个句号。