Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，也用“depends”给出了两种情况，但“hear the person's name every day”和“remember”重复较多，句子也偏长。可以先直接说明总体情况，再用一个简短对比解释；注意单复数和代词保持一致，例如用“a name”或“their name”。

例: It depends on how often I meet the person. If I see them regularly, I can usually remember their name quite easily. However, I may forget it if I’ve only met them once.

提案: 回答没有充分说明你会采用什么方法，主要重复“每天听到就能记住”。可以补充一个具体策略，例如初次见面时重复对方的名字、把名字和某个特征联系起来；避免重复同一信息，并注意句末完整收尾。

例: I try to repeat the person’s name shortly after I hear it, because that helps it stick in my mind. If I’m worried I’ll forget it, I also connect the name with something distinctive about the person.

提案: 你表达了能理解别人忘记名字的态度，但“hear my name well two times”和“relatively code”意思不清，且“could I couldn't”出现自我修正，影响流畅度。可直接说自己不会介意，并解释大家偶尔都会忘记名字；如果想说名字难记，请用“unfamiliar”或“difficult to pronounce”等准确表达。

例: I don’t really mind, especially if we’ve only met once or twice. I sometimes forget other people’s names too, so I understand. My name may also be a little unfamiliar to some people.

提案: 回答给出了熟悉程度不同的对比，但“my parents friends' names”“if I made”和“some very rare people”等表达不自然，条件句也较多、结构较乱。可以先回答是否经常忘，再用“经常见面的人”和“只在线上聊过的人”作对比，并使用“people I get along with”等自然表达。

例: I sometimes forget the names of people I don’t know very well. For example, I usually remember my parents’ friends’ names because I see them regularly and get along with them. However, I may forget the names of people I’ve only chatted with online.

× If I hear the person's name every day, I think it's easy for me to remember the names, but if I seldom hear this person's name I think it's very difficult for me to remember.

✓ If I hear that person's name every day, I think it's easy for me to remember it, but if I seldom hear that person's name, I think it's very difficult for me to remember it.

前面说的是单数的“the person's name”，后面却用了复数“the names”，指代数量不一致。谈论一个人的名字时，应使用单数名词和相应的单数代词，例如“that person's name”和“it”。

× I think I can bear it because I could I couldn't remember their names too.

✓ I think I can bear it because I couldn't remember their names either.

否定句中表示“也”通常用“either”，而不是“too”。“could I couldn't”看起来是说话时的自我修正；整理成完整句子时，保留正确的“couldn't”即可。

× For my parents friends' names, I will remember it forever if I made or maybe get along well with them.

✓ I will remember my parents' friends' names forever if I meet them or get along well with them.

“names”是复数，不能用单数代词“it”指代，应直接保留“names”或用复数代词“them”。另外，“my parents' friends' names”表示“我父母的朋友们的名字”，所有格需要标明。

× For my parents friends' names, I will remember it forever if I made or maybe get along well with them.

✓ I will remember my parents' friends' names forever if I meet them or get along well with them.

这是描述将来可能情况的条件句。主句可以用“will + 动词原形”，但“if”引导的条件从句通常用一般现在时，因此应说“if I meet ... or get along ...”，不能把“made”和“get”混用。

× ...but if for some very rare people, if we only chat online or maybe we don't have a conversation, I think it's very difficult.

✓ ...but for people I rarely meet, if we only chat online or don't have a conversation, I think it's very difficult to remember their names.

“but if for some very rare people”缺少完整的句子结构；“if”不能这样直接接在“for”短语前。可以改成“but for people I rarely meet”（但是对于我很少见到的人），并补出“to remember their names”以明确“很困难”的内容。