Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ตอบตรงประเด็นและมีเหตุผลประกอบ แต่ควรแก้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น ใช้ “It usually depends” แทน “It's usually depends” และ “the person's name” แทน “the person name” ใช้ “have a harder time remembering” ให้เป็นธรรมชาติ และตัด “I said” ที่ไม่จำเป็นออก นอกจากนี้ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำความหมายระหว่าง “remember” กับ “memorize”

例: It depends on the person and the situation. I find it harder to remember names that are difficult to pronounce. However, if I see someone regularly, their name usually sticks in my mind.

提案: มีวิธีอธิบายที่ชัดเจนและตอบคำถามตรง แต่ควรใช้ “multiple times” ไม่ใช่ “multiple time” และใช้รูปปัจจุบันให้สอดคล้องกัน เช่น “until I remember it” แทน “until I got it” ประโยคตัวอย่างการทักทายยังไม่เป็นธรรมชาติ ควรยกตัวอย่างประโยคที่พูดได้จริง และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมวิธีทั้งสองอย่าง

例: I usually repeat the person's name in my head a few times. I might also use it naturally in conversation, for example, by saying, “Hi, Maya, how are you?” That helps me remember it.

提案: คำตอบสื่อว่าคุณไม่ถือสา แต่มีจุดที่ทำให้ความหมายสับสน: ควรพูดว่า “I understand if they can't remember my name” ไม่ใช่ “I'll be totally understandable if they can remember my name” และควรแบ่งประโยคให้ชัดเจน ตัดคำซ้ำอย่าง “my name is blah blah blah” แล้วใช้ตัวอย่างการบอกชื่ออย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: I don't mind too much because I sometimes forget other people's names as well. If someone forgets mine, I just remind them by saying, “It's Ting Ting.”

提案: ตอบตรงคำถามและให้รายละเอียดเกี่ยวกับวิธีจำชื่อได้ แต่ควรใช้ “someone new” แทน “someone's new” และเปลี่ยน “your names” เป็น “their names” ให้สรรพนามสอดคล้องกัน ควรลดคำพูดติดปาก “like” และปรับ “talk to them a lot” ให้ชัดขึ้น เช่น ใช้ชื่อของเขาระหว่างบทสนทนา

例: Yes, especially when I meet someone new. I usually repeat their name in my head and try to use it in conversation. The more often I talk to them, the easier it is to remember their name.

× It's usually depends on the circumstances and the person name.

✓ It usually depends on the circumstances and the person's name.

Do not use it is before the main verb depends. Use It usually depends. Also, use the possessive form person's to show that the name belongs to the person.

× If the person's name is harder to pronounce, I have harder time to remember to memorize it.

✓ If the person's name is harder to pronounce, I have a harder time remembering it.

The singular countable phrase time needs the article a in this expression: have a harder time. After have a hard time, use a verb ending in -ing, such as remembering. Remembering and memorizing express nearly the same idea here, so one is sufficient.

× For me I usually just repeat the other person's name multiple time in my head until I got it.

✓ For me, I usually just repeat the other person's name multiple times in my head until I get it.

Multiple is used with a plural noun, so time should be times. The sentence describes a usual habit, so use the present-tense form get rather than the past-tense form got.

× For me I usually just repeat the other person's name multiple time in my head until I got it.

✓ For me, I usually just repeat the other person's name multiple times in my head until I get it.

The sentence describes a repeated habit in the present. Use get to keep the tense consistent with usually repeat, rather than the past-tense got.

× Or I just say hi someone's name, oh how are you someone's name until it's in my head.

✓ Or I just say hi to someone and ask how they are until the name is in my head.

The expression is say hi to someone, so the preposition to is needed. Use ask how they are to introduce the question correctly.

× I'll be totally understandable if they can remember my name because it happened to me a lot too so if they ever forgot my name I could just tell them Oh my name is Ting Ting my name is blah blah blah.

✓ I totally understand if they cannot remember my name, because it happens to me a lot too. If they forget my name, I can just tell them, Oh, my name is Ting Ting, or simply tell them my name.

Understandable means capable of being understood; it does not mean that the speaker understands someone. Use understand, the verb, for the intended meaning. The correction also uses present-tense forms to describe a general situation.

× Well, yes, especially if it's someone's new. I usually have to like repeat the name inside my head and I have to talk to them a lot just to remember your names.

✓ Well, yes, especially if someone is new. I usually have to repeat the name in my head, and I have to talk to them a lot just to remember their names.

Someone is the subject in the first clause, so say if someone is new rather than if it is someone's new. In the final clause, their should refer to them; your incorrectly changes the person being addressed.