Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ตอบคำถามให้ตรงประเด็นด้วยประโยคเปิดที่ชัดเจน เช่น “No, I find it difficult.” คำว่า “a short term” ใช้ไม่ถูกบริบท ควรพูดว่า “a poor memory for names” หรือ “short-term memory” และเล่าเหตุการณ์ตัวอย่างให้เข้าใจง่ายโดยไม่พูดซ้ำ

例: No, I find it difficult to remember people's names because I have a poor memory for them. For example, I sometimes forget the name of someone I met at a department store, even if they introduced themselves the day before.

提案: อธิบายวิธีจำชื่อให้ชัดเจนและเรียงลำดับความคิด ใช้ “repeat the name several times” แทน “repeat that name a lot of time” และยกตัวอย่างที่สอดคล้องกัน เช่น ทวนชื่อหลังจากได้ยินหรือใช้ชื่อนั้นในบทสนทนา ระวังการผันกริยา เช่น “I think”

例: I usually repeat a person's name several times after they introduce themselves. I also try to use their name in our conversation, which helps me remember it. For example, if I meet a new colleague, I might say, “Nice to meet you, Anna.”

提案: เริ่มด้วยการบอกความรู้สึกโดยตรง แล้วอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ ประโยค “they didn't have a lot of something that care to me” สื่อความหมายไม่ชัด ควรใช้ “it makes me feel that they aren't paying attention” นอกจากนี้ ควรหลีกเลี่ยงการเปลี่ยนไปพูดว่าตนเองจำชื่อคนอื่นได้ เพราะไม่ช่วยขยายคำตอบหลัก

例: I feel a little hurt when someone forgets my name because it can seem as though they weren't paying attention when we met. However, I understand that people meet many others and may not remember every name.

提案: คำตอบยังไม่สมบูรณ์และช่วงท้ายเข้าใจยาก ควรตอบก่อนว่า “I often forget names if I only meet someone once” แล้วเปรียบเทียบกับคนที่พบเป็นประจำ ใช้ “see them every day” แทน “see day in every day” และตรวจสอบให้ประโยคตัวอย่างจบสมบูรณ์

例: I sometimes forget people's names if I only meet them once. However, I usually remember the names of people I see regularly, such as my colleagues or classmates, because I have more chances to talk to them.

× I met the people, someone in the department store and they tell me their name for another day, for example, tomorrow.

✓ I met someone in a department store, and they told me their name for the next day, for example, tomorrow.

The first verb is in the past tense (met), so the verb describing what happened next should also be in the past: tell should be told. Use the next day rather than for another day to refer to the following day.

× For me, my way is repeat that name a lot of time or maybe a lot of days.

✓ For me, my way is to repeat that name a lot of times, or perhaps over several days.

A lot of is used with a plural countable noun in this meaning, so time should be times. Use over several days to express repetition across multiple days clearly.

× For example, I can remember someone that I met him every day or every month.

✓ For example, I can remember someone I meet every day or every month.

The relative pronoun that already refers to someone, so him is unnecessary. Also, use the present tense meet for a person you regularly see.

× For example, I can remember someone that I met him every day or every month.

✓ For example, I can remember someone I meet every day or every month.

This describes a repeated or regular situation, so use the present tense meet rather than the past tense met.

× That's why I thinks is try.

✓ That's why I think it is worth trying.

Use think, not thinks, with the subject I. The corrected sentence also includes it as the subject of is and uses the gerund trying after worth.

× A little bit sad because it's tell that they didn't have a lot of something that care to me very well, but I think I can remember very well for people.

✓ I feel a little bit sad because it tells me that they don't care about me very much, but I think I remember people very well.

The original begins with a fragment and has no subject and verb expressing the speaker's feeling. Begin with I feel to make it a complete sentence.

× A little bit sad because it's tell that they didn't have a lot of something that care to me very well, but I think I can remember very well for people.

✓ I feel a little bit sad because it tells me that they don't care about me very much, but I think I remember people very well.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb needs the -s ending: tells, not tell.

× A little bit sad because it's tell that they didn't have a lot of something that care to me very well, but I think I can remember very well for people.

✓ I feel a little bit sad because it tells me that they don't care about me very much, but I think I remember people very well.

The correct preposition with care in this meaning is about: care about me, not care to me.

× Not really if I can meet there every day or often.

✓ Not really, if I can meet them every day or often.

There refers to a place, but the sentence refers to people. Use the object pronoun them.

× For example, if I can see day in every day, I can remember their names in someday.

✓ For example, if I can see them every day, I can remember their names someday.

Use them as the object of see. The original also uses unnecessary prepositions before every day and someday; neither expression needs in.

× But if soon it for example met him, today met again.

✓ But if I meet someone soon—for example, if I meet him again today—I can remember his name.

The original does not form a complete conditional sentence: it is missing a clear subject and a complete main clause. Use if plus a subject and verb for the condition, followed by a complete result.