Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сразу ответьте на вопрос и поясните, от чего зависит запоминание. Исправьте сочетание “people's name names” на “people's names”; последнюю часть предложения уточните, поскольку “I can do” не выражает ясной мысли. Избегайте лишних вводных слов и повторов.

例: It depends on the person. I usually remember unusual names quite easily, but I sometimes mix up common ones, especially when I meet several people at once.

提案: Опишите способ в настоящем времени и приведите один понятный пример. Используйте грамматически верную конструкцию “one useful practice is to repeat…”; вместо длинного и неестественного “when I can communicate with these people” скажите “during our conversation”.

例: I find it helpful to repeat someone's name during our conversation. For example, if I meet Anna, I might say, “That's interesting, Anna,” which helps me remember her name.

提案: Ответьте о своих чувствах и объясните их одной ясной причиной. Фраза “my name is piece of cake” здесь не подходит: выражение “a piece of cake” означает, что что-то легко сделать. Уберите непонятный фрагмент “I have freely is a name” и не повторяйте “because”.

例: I feel a little hurt when people forget my name, especially if we've met more than once. Still, I understand that people can be busy or meet many new people.

提案: Дайте прямой ответ: например, “Not very often” или “Yes, occasionally”. Исправьте “it's really interesting question” на “it's a really interesting question”, не повторяйте “when I” и используйте подходящее выражение: “over the moon” означает «очень счастливый», а не «хорошо запоминать». Завершите мысль; текущий ответ обрывается на “when I counter”.

例: I don't forget names very often, but it does happen occasionally. I try to pay attention when I meet someone, and repeating their name helps me remember it.

× I can remember people's name names if they are very unique or maybe unusual.

✓ I can remember people's names if they are very unique or maybe unusual.

Use the plural form names because the sentence refers to names belonging to multiple people. Remove the repeated word name.

× I can remember people's name names if they are very unique or maybe unusual and I can remember it.

✓ I can remember people's names if they are very unique or maybe unusual, and I can remember them.

The pronoun it is singular, but its antecedent names is plural. Use them to refer to multiple names.

× One of the most useful practice it's just repeat people's names in the dialogue when I can communicate with these people and say his name or her name in the chat and after that I can remember for a long time this name.

✓ One of the most useful practices is to repeat people's names in the conversation when I communicate with them and say their names in the chat. After that, I can remember the names for a long time.

After one of the most useful, use a plural noun: practices. Also use the plural their names to refer to the names of multiple people.

× One of the most useful practice it's just repeat people's names in the dialogue when I can communicate with these people and say his name or her name in the chat and after that I can remember for a long time this name.

✓ One of the most useful practices is to repeat people's names in the conversation when I communicate with them and say their names in the chat. After that, I can remember the names for a long time.

The subject of the clause is one, so the verb should be is, not the contraction it's. Make sure the verb agrees with the main subject, not the plural noun practices.

× One of the most useful practice it's just repeat people's names in the dialogue when I can communicate with these people and say his name or her name in the chat and after that I can remember for a long time this name.

✓ One of the most useful practices is to repeat people's names in the conversation when I communicate with them and say their names in the chat. After that, I can remember the names for a long time.

Use the infinitive to repeat after is to describe the practice. The original structure, it's just repeat, does not connect the verb forms correctly. Also, remember the names is the natural word order; place for a long time after the object.

× One of the most useful practice it's just repeat people's names in the dialogue when I can communicate with these people and say his name or her name in the chat and after that I can remember for a long time this name.

✓ One of the most useful practices is to repeat people's names in the conversation when I communicate with them and say their names in the chat. After that, I can remember the names for a long time.

His or her does not agree with the plural reference to these people. Use their to refer to people of any gender when the reference is plural.

× One of the most useful practice it's just repeat people's names in the dialogue when I can communicate with these people and say his name or her name in the chat and after that I can remember for a long time this name.

✓ One of the most useful practices is to repeat people's names in the conversation when I communicate with them and say their names in the chat. After that, I can remember the names for a long time.

Place the object the names after remember, and put the time phrase for a long time after the object. This makes the word order clear and natural.

× My name is piece of cake.

✓ Remembering my name is a piece of cake.

The singular countable noun piece needs an article. The expression is a piece of cake also fits the intended meaning that remembering the name is easy.

× So it's really interesting question for me, but I can say that it happened once in a blue moon.

✓ So it's a really interesting question for me, but I can say that it happens once in a blue moon.

Use a before the singular countable noun phrase really interesting question. The tense change is addressed separately.

× So it's really interesting question for me, but I can say that it happened once in a blue moon because I tried to remember all people's names when I when I communicate or meet someone.

✓ So it's a really interesting question for me, but I can say that it happens once in a blue moon because I try to remember everyone's name when I communicate with or meet someone.

The question asks about a general habit, so use the present simple happens and try rather than the past forms happened and tried.

× After that I really over the moon when I counter.

✓ After that, I am really over the moon when I encounter someone.

The expression over the moon needs the verb be. Add am to form a complete clause. Encounter is used here as a verb; counter does not fit the sentence.