Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and make the contrast between remembering faces and names clearer. Use plural forms where needed, such as “faces” and “names,” and avoid saying it is easy if you usually remember faces better than names.

例: Not really. I tend to remember people's faces more easily than their names, especially when I meet a lot of new people at once.

提案: Explain a specific strategy you use. “Automatically” does not fit naturally here, and “when we met together over two times” should be expressed as “after we’ve met a couple of times.”

例: I usually remember someone's name after we've met a couple of times. I also try to use their name during our conversation, which helps me remember it.

提案: Make sure your response clearly describes how you feel when someone forgets your name. Your answer currently sounds as if you are happy about being asked your name; use a natural phrase such as “I don't mind” or “I feel a little disappointed,” then briefly explain why.

例: I don't mind too much when someone forgets my name, especially if we've only met once. I just remind them of my name and carry on with the conversation.

提案: Give a direct answer and correct the possessive and pronoun forms: say “people's names” and “them” rather than “she or he.” Use “after meeting them a couple of times” to describe when you remember their names.

例: Yes, I sometimes forget people's names, particularly after a brief introduction. However, I can usually remember them after meeting the person a couple of times.

× Actually, for me it's quite easy because I always remember face more than name.

✓ Actually, for me, it's quite easy because I always remember faces more than names.

Faces and names are plural because the speaker is referring to them in general, not to one specific face or name. Use plural nouns when making a general comparison.

× For me in autonomically, it can remember people names when we met together over two times.

✓ For me, I can automatically remember people's names when we meet more than twice.

Autonomically does not fit the intended meaning here, and in autonomically is not a correct adverb phrase in this sentence. Use automatically to describe how the remembering happens. Place the adverb before the main verb, as in automatically remember.

× For me in autonomically, it can remember people names when we met together over two times.

✓ For me, I can automatically remember people's names when we meet more than twice.

It does not refer clearly to the speaker and cannot naturally perform the action of remembering here. Use I because the speaker is describing their own ability.

× For me in autonomically, it can remember people names when we met together over two times.

✓ For me, I can automatically remember people's names when we meet more than twice.

The sentence describes a general habit, so use the present tense meet rather than the past tense met. Use the present tense for repeated or usual situations.

× I feel so good when someone that I already met and she or he asks me which my name and I'm so very happy and I want to have conversations with them.

✓ I feel very happy when someone I've already met asks me what my name is, and I want to have a conversation with them.

The original sentence joins the relative clause someone that I already met to a second subject, she or he, leaving the sentence structure unclear. The phrase which my name is also not formed as an indirect question. Use what my name is, and make someone the subject of asks.

× I often forget people names but when I meet she or he over two time I will remember

✓ I often forget people's names, but when I meet him or her more than twice, I will remember.

She or he is used as a subject pronoun, but these pronouns are the object of meet. Use the object forms him or her after meet.

× I often forget people names but when I meet she or he over two time I will remember

✓ I often forget people's names, but when I meet him or her more than twice, I will remember.

Time should not be singular when referring to multiple meetings. More than twice is a natural way to express the intended number of repeated meetings.