Name— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-20 23:51:45

会話

Part 1

試験官

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

受験者

I don't think so. I don't believe I have a good memory. It once took me a whole year to remember my classmates names in high school. Even now at work it's still not easy. Fortunately, everyone has name cards, so I can check who they are quickly.

試験官

How do you remember people's names?

受験者

I don't really use any special tricks. I simply link people's name to their faces, which helps me remember them much faster, and honestly it makes no difference to me whether the names are English, Japanese or Chinese. I treat them all the same.

試験官

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

受験者

I might feel a little disappointed, since my name is pretty easy to remember, but still I can totally understand. After all, when I forget someone's name, I feel pretty awkward too.

試験官

Do you often forget people's names?

受験者

Not really, I always make a point of remembering names because I think it shows respect. Also I'm learning Japanese and in Japanese culture you are supposed to use people's names so I try to keep that habit in my daily life.

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総合

総合: 6.5流暢さと一貫性: 7.0発音: 6.5文法: 6.5語彙: 6.5

Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

スコア: 82.0

提案: 回答切题,也用高中和工作中的例子说明了记名字不容易,最后补充了名牌这一实际帮助。注意所有格应为“my classmates’ names”。前两句表达意思重复,可合并,让回答更紧凑;也可以补充一个具体的记忆困难,例如名字和长相对不上。

例: No, I’m not very good at remembering names. In high school, it took me almost a year to learn all my classmates’ names because I often mixed them up. At work, I sometimes check people’s name tags to make sure I address them correctly.

How do you remember people's names?

スコア: 78.0

提案: 回答直接说明了你的方法,但“link people's name to their faces”应改为“link people’s names to their faces”或“associate a name with a face”。后两部分都在强调不同语言的名字对你没有影响,略显重复。建议用一个具体步骤或例子解释你如何把名字和脸联系起来。

例: I don’t use any special tricks; I try to associate each person’s name with their face. For example, when I meet someone, I repeat their name once during the conversation and picture it alongside their face. This works for me regardless of what language the name comes from.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

スコア: 84.0

提案: 回答自然,也通过换位思考解释了你能理解对方,内容完整。可以把“but still I can totally understand”改得更自然一些,例如“but I can understand why it happens”。另外,可简短说明名字容易记住的原因,或补充你通常会如何回应。

例: I might feel a little disappointed at first because my name is quite short and easy to remember. However, I understand that people meet many others and can easily forget a name. When it happens, I usually just remind them politely.

Do you often forget people's names?

スコア: 78.0

提案: 回答表达了明确观点,并给出尊重他人和学习日语两个理由。开头“Not really”与“always make a point of remembering”稍有冲突,可改为“I don’t often forget names”。“in Japanese culture you are supposed to...”范围较宽,建议说得更具体、谨慎,例如提到你在日语交流中会注意称呼对方。也可加一个日常例子。

例: I don’t often forget people’s names because I think using someone’s name shows respect. I’m also learning Japanese, so I try to address people by name when I speak with them. For instance, I make an effort to remember my classmates’ names and use them in conversation.

文法

1: Singular and plural issue(名词单复数问题)

× I simply link people's name to their faces, which helps me remember them much faster, and honestly it makes no difference to me whether the names are English, Japanese or Chinese.

✓ I simply link people's names to their faces, which helps me remember them much faster, and honestly it makes no difference to me whether the names are English, Japanese or Chinese.

这里的“people's”表示很多人,因此后面的“name”应使用复数“names”,与“their faces”所表达的复数含义保持一致。可以检查名词前的所有格或限定词所指的人数,并确保名词单复数相符。

重要語彙

Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
High— Tall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Pretty— Attractive; Quite; Beautify
Special— Exceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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