Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再说明原因或举例。注意“be good at”后面接动名词，表达“记住某人的名字”可用“remember people's names”。开头的“Now actually”不自然，可改为“Actually”。

例: Actually, I’m not very good at remembering people’s names. I usually remember someone’s face but forget their name, especially when I meet several new people at once.

提案: 你的方法不够清楚，而且“will”后应接动词原形。可以说明你会把名字记在哪里，以及如何复习；用“First”或“Then”连接步骤，让回答更具体、连贯。

例: I usually write a person’s name in my phone after we meet. Then I read it a few times and try to use it when I see them again.

提案: 回答与问题的逻辑不够清楚：别人记不起你的名字时，你为什么会开心？请明确表达真实感受，并补充原因。注意使用现在时谈一般感受；避免句子未完成，可用“because”连接原因。

例: I feel a little disappointed when people can’t remember my name, especially if we’ve met several times. However, I understand that people can be forgetful, so I don’t take it too personally.

提案: 先直接回答“经常”还是“不经常”，再解释你通常在什么情况下会忘记。注意“if I remember it not a long time”表达不自然，可说“if I’ve only just met someone”；“ask a fault”不符合此处语境，可改为“ask them to remind me”。

例: Not very often. If I’ve known someone for a while, I usually remember their name, but I sometimes forget it shortly after meeting them. In that case, I politely ask them to remind me.

× Now actually, I think I'm not good at to remember somebody's names.

✓ Actually, I don't think I'm good at remembering people's names.

介词 at 后面应接动名词（动词-ing形式），不能接 to remember，因此应改为 remembering。这里把 somebody's names 调整为 people's names，以对应问题中“记住人们的名字”这一意思。

× Either way I will writing it and remembering it again and again.

✓ Either way, I will write them down and remember them again and again.

情态动词 will 后面必须接动词原形，不能接 writing。并列结构中两个动词也应保持一致，因此使用 write 和 remember。这里用 them 指代复数的名字。

× I was feeling really happy because it means somebody will care about me I really need this feeling and

✓ I feel really happy because it means somebody will care about me. I really need this feeling.

问题询问的是通常情况下的感受，因此用一般现在时 I feel 比过去进行时 I was feeling 更合适。

× I was feeling really happy because it means somebody will care about me I really need this feeling and

✓ I feel really happy because it means somebody will care about me. I really need this feeling.

原句把两个完整句子直接连在一起，缺少适当的标点或连接词；句末的 and 也没有连接后续内容。可将两部分拆成两个完整句子，并删除多余的 and。

× Actually no, I won't forget somebody's name when I remember it, but if I remember it not a long time I will forget it sometimes or just ask a fault.

✓ Actually, no. I don't forget somebody's name once I remember it, but if I don't remember it for a long time, I sometimes forget it or just ask a fault.

问题询问是否经常忘记名字，表达习惯或一般情况时应使用一般现在时。原句中的 I won't forget 和 I will forget it sometimes 改为 I don't forget 和 I sometimes forget 更符合这里的语境。

× Actually no, I won't forget somebody's name when I remember it, but if I remember it not a long time I will forget it sometimes or just ask a fault.

✓ Actually, no. I don't forget somebody's name once I remember it, but if I don't remember it for a long time, I sometimes forget it or just ask a fault.

表示持续一段时间时，时间长度前通常需要加介词 for，例如 for a long time。原句中的 not a long time 缺少合适的介词和否定结构，因此改为 for a long time，并将否定放在动词前。