Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答开头应直接说明是否容易记住名字。后面的表达“people's name are similar to his”和“my brain is beneficial to remember”意思不清且语法不自然，建议说明具体原因，例如你会把名字和初次见面时的情境联系起来。避免重复和填充词，控制在几句之内。

例: Yes, I’m usually quite good at remembering people’s names. I try to focus when I’m introduced to someone, and I often remember the situation in which we first met.

提案: 你提到了把名字和脸联系起来，这是一个合适的方法，但回答还不够完整。“people's name”应改为“people's names”，“his face”可改为“their faces”；“professional”在这里应使用名词“profession”或“job”。可以补充一个具体例子，让回答更清楚。

例: I usually connect a person’s name with their face and their job. For example, if I meet a doctor called Anna, I might remember her as Anna the doctor.

提案: 回答表达了你会不开心，但“没有位置在她心里”不太符合这个情境，而且最后一句意思无法理解。建议使用更自然、明确的感受词，如“a little hurt”或“overlooked”，并说明原因，例如这会让你觉得对方没有认真听你介绍自己。注意用“they/their”指代不特定的人。

例: I feel a little hurt when someone forgets my name, especially if we’ve met several times. It can make me feel that they weren’t paying much attention when we first met.

提案: 回答直接，也给出了记名字的方法，但“good memories”应改为“a good memory”，“their name”应与复数“their names”保持一致。描述习惯时用一般现在时更自然，例如“I connect”。可以补充简短的具体说明，并减少“umm”等填充词。

例: No, I don’t often forget people’s names because I have a fairly good memory. I usually connect their names with their faces and jobs, which helps me recall them later.

× Yes, I think people's name are similar to his, you know?

✓ Yes, I think people's names are similar to his, you know?

people's 表示“人们的”，后面的 name 应使用复数 names。这里 are 与复数主语 names 搭配正确。注意名词所有格后面的名词也要根据表达的数量使用恰当的单复数形式。

× I often associate people's name with his face or professional UMM.

✓ I often associate people's names with their faces or professional information.

people's 指多个人，因此 name 应改为复数 names；为保持数量一致，face 也改为 faces。people 是泛指复数，使用 their 比 his 更合适。原句中的 professional 后缺少中心名词，因此补为 professional information，使短语结构完整。

× I think I will not be happy because it means I have no position in her heart and umm, it also means I have no TA texture temperature.

✓ I think I will not be happy because it means I have no position in their heart, and it also means I have no TA texture temperature.

这里谈的是泛指的“别人”，没有说明对方是女性，因此用 her 可能造成指代不当；可用 they 的所有格 their 来泛指。其他部分无法仅凭现有转录确认是否属于语法错误，因此不作修改。

× No, I usually remember their names because I have good memories and I will connect their name with their face and umm, occupation.

✓ No, I usually remember their names because I have good memories and I will connect their names with their faces and occupation.

their names 是复数形式，后文再次指这些名字时也应使用 names，而不是 name。与复数 names 对应，face 也应改为 faces。检查同一句中重复提及的对象，确保单复数形式前后一致。

× No, I usually remember their names because I have good memories and I will connect their name with their face and umm, occupation.

✓ No, I usually remember their names because I have good memories and I connect their names with their faces and occupation.

usually 表示习惯性行为，因此后面的 connect 通常也用一般现在时，而不是表示将来的 will connect。描述经常或固定会做的事时，注意保持一般现在时。