Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，并修正语法：说“remembering people's names isn't easy”，而不是“remember people's name is not easy”。“记不住名字”和“记不住脸”的表达前后矛盾，建议明确说明你容易忘名字，但能记住脸。最后的“extremely impressed”不符合语境，可改为“embarrassed”。

例: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I usually recognize their faces, but I sometimes mix up their names. For example, I once forgot the name of a new classmate when he greeted me, which was a little embarrassing.

提案: 回答中表达了重复名字、观察面孔这两个方法，但后半部分难以理解，影响整体连贯性。使用“repeat the person's name to myself”和“associate it with their face”等自然表达，并用一两句说明这些方法如何帮助你记忆。

例: I usually repeat the person's name to myself a few times and try to associate it with their face. If possible, I also use their name during our conversation, which helps me remember it later.

提案: 观点明确，也给出了理由和个人经历，但句子过长且语法错误较多。将“forgotten names is”改为“forgetting names is”，将“Myself often fail”改为“I often fail”，并把名字难记的原因拆成简洁的句子。

例: I don't get angry because I think forgetting names is quite normal. I sometimes forget other people's names too, especially when they are long or difficult to pronounce. So I understand that it can happen to anyone.

提案: 先直接回答“是的，我经常忘记别人的名字”，并使用一般现在时“forget”，而不是“forgot”。后面的经历表达不清晰；建议选一个具体、容易说明的例子，并用“although”或“but”连接名字和面孔的记忆情况。

例: Yes, I often forget people's names, even shortly after meeting them. For instance, when my roommates introduced themselves to me, I quickly forgot their names, although I could still recognize their faces.

× No actually remember people's name is not easy.

✓ No, actually, remembering people's names is not easy.

动名词短语作句子主语时，动词通常使用 -ing 形式。因此应将 remember 改为 remembering。

× No actually remember people's name is not easy.

✓ No, actually, remembering people's names is not easy.

这里泛指人们的姓名，应用复数 names，而不是单数 name。

× Whenever I meet new people, I can't always remember their face but I tend to mix up their names.

✓ Whenever I meet new people, I can't always remember their faces, but I tend to mix up their names.

their 指代前面的 new people，表示多个人的脸，因此 face 应改为复数 faces。

× This made me feel extremely impressed.

✓ This made me feel extremely embarrassed.

impressed 表示“印象深刻的”，通常不符合忘记同学名字后感到尴尬的语境。这里用 embarrassed（尴尬的）更恰当。

× In fact, I would keep repeating that people's name and keep looking at his face.

✓ In fact, I would keep repeating people's names and looking at their faces.

people's names 和 their faces 都泛指多个人的名字和脸，应使用复数形式。

× In fact, I would keep repeating that people's name and keep looking at his face.

✓ In fact, I would keep repeating people's names and looking at their faces.

his 是男性单数代词，不能自然地指代 people。此处用 their 指代 people 更合适；同时，重复 people's names 时不需要加 that。

× Sometimes it made other people confused as to why I keep staring at him but the one layer were a little of a lot of people.

✓ Sometimes it made other people confused as to why I kept staring at them.

句子前半部分使用过去时 made，描述当时的情况时，后面的 keep 也应使用过去式 kept。原句后半段“the one layer were a little of a lot of people”含义无法辨认，因此未作猜测性修改。

× I don't get angry because forgotten names is a very normal thing.

✓ I don't get angry because forgetting people's names is a very normal thing.

这里需要表达“忘记别人的名字”这一行为，应使用动名词 forgetting，而不是过去分词 forgotten。动名词短语作主语时通常视为单数，所以搭配 is。

× Myself often fail to remember people's names, which has caused many embarrassing situations because some people's names are very long and have difficult pronunciations it makes it very hard for people to remember name.

✓ I often fail to remember people's names, which has caused many embarrassing situations because some people's names are very long and difficult to pronounce. This makes it very hard for people to remember their names.

myself 是反身代词，不能在这里单独充当主语；应使用主格代词 I。

× Myself often fail to remember people's names, which has caused many embarrassing situations because some people's names are very long and have difficult pronunciations it makes it very hard for people to remember name.

✓ I often fail to remember people's names, which has caused many embarrassing situations because some people's names are very long and difficult to pronounce. This makes it very hard for people to remember their names.

原句把两个完整的意思直接连在一起，形成句子连接错误。应在 pronunciations 后断句，或使用恰当的连接词。这里拆成两个句子，使结构更清楚。

× Myself often fail to remember people's names, which has caused many embarrassing situations because some people's names are very long and have difficult pronunciations it makes it very hard for people to remember name.

✓ I often fail to remember people's names, which has caused many embarrassing situations because some people's names are very long and difficult to pronounce. This makes it very hard for people to remember their names.

这里泛指人们要记住的姓名，应使用复数 names，而不是单数 name。

× Yes, I often forgot people's name as they remember clearly when I was in primary school for the time.

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names.

often 表示经常发生的习惯，应使用一般现在时 forget，而不是过去式 forgot。原句后半部分语义不清，无法可靠判断并修改。

× Yes, I often forgot people's name as they remember clearly when I was in primary school for the time.

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names.

people's name 泛指多个人的名字时，应使用复数 names。原句后半部分语义不清，无法可靠判断并修改。

× My roommates introduced themselves of two men me, but at the moment, I forgot Layer names.

✓ My roommates introduced themselves to me, but at that moment, I forgot their names.

introduce oneself 后面表示“把自己介绍给某人”时，应使用介词 to，不能用 of。

× My roommates introduced themselves of two men me, but at the moment, I forgot Layer names.

✓ My roommates introduced themselves to me, but at that moment, I forgot their names.

Layer 看起来是转录错误；根据前面的 My roommates，此处应使用 their 指代室友。

× Only remember Layer Face.

✓ I only remember their faces.

原句缺少明确的主语。完整句子应补上 I；根据上下文，Layer Face 应为 their faces。