Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer more directly with a natural topic sentence: “No, it isn’t.” Avoid unnatural phrases such as “I feel really hard” and “back remembered.” Explain that you have difficulty associating names with faces, and add one concise example. Use “remember people’s names” rather than “remember about the people named.”

例: No, it isn’t easy for me because I have trouble connecting a person’s name with their face. For example, I sometimes forget the names of new classmates even after meeting them several times.

提案: Use a clear structure and correct the grammar: say “I try to give them a nickname” and “whose pronunciation is similar to their real name.” Avoid repeating “nickname” and “name,” and use a linking phrase such as “That way” to show the result. Give a specific example if possible.

例: I usually give people a nickname that sounds similar to their real name. That way, it is easier for me to remember them. For example, I might call someone named Daniel “Dan.”

提案: State your feeling clearly, then explain your reaction. Replace “that’s me I’m not important” with “I feel as if I’m not important to them,” and avoid switching between “him or her” and “you.” The answer should sound natural and balanced by mentioning that you understand because you sometimes have the same problem.

例: I feel a little disappointed when people forget my name because it makes me wonder whether I made a good impression. However, I understand because I sometimes forget names too. I usually introduce myself again and remind them of my name politely.

提案: Avoid the contradiction between “Not at all” and “once or twice.” Say “Not very often” instead. Correct “I will ask what’s your name to I reintroduce yourself” to “I ask them their name again and reintroduce myself.” Use the plural “names” and provide a concise explanation of how you try to remember them.

例: Not very often, although I may forget someone’s name once or twice. When that happens, I politely ask for their name again and reintroduce myself. I also try to repeat people’s names during conversations so I can remember them better.

× No, I don't say that it is easy for me because I just feel really hard to connect the name with the face.

✓ No, I wouldn't say that it is easy for me because I find it really hard to connect a person's name with their face.

The original sentence uses feel hard incorrectly. Use find it hard + to-infinitive to describe difficulty. The sentence also needs a clearer object after connect.

× So I'm just back remembered about the people named.

✓ So I have trouble remembering people's names.

Remembered cannot be used after am in this sentence. After have trouble, use a verb in the -ing form: have trouble remembering. People's names is the natural plural possessive form.

× I will try to give them like the nickname and also the nickname pronunciation is similar like his real name so in this way, it will help me to remember the name about him

✓ I will try to give them a nickname whose pronunciation is similar to their real name. In this way, it will help me remember their name.

Use a before the singular countable noun nickname. Similar is followed by to, not like. Their is more appropriate than his when the person's gender is unknown, and remember their name is the correct expression.

× I will try to give them like the nickname and also the nickname pronunciation is similar like his real name so in this way, it will help me to remember the name about him

✓ I will try to give them a nickname whose pronunciation is similar to their real name. In this way, it will help me remember their name.

The original sentence joins several complete ideas with and and so without suitable punctuation or structure. Separate the ideas into two sentences and use whose to connect the nickname with its pronunciation.

× Sometimes I feel really sad because that's me I'm not important for him or her but I also have the same issue about I can't remember their name.

✓ Sometimes I feel really sad because I think that means I am not important to them. However, I have the same problem because I cannot remember their names either.

The pronouns him or her are awkward after a general reference to a person; them is the natural gender-neutral pronoun. Their names should be plural because the sentence refers to multiple people.

× Sometimes I feel really sad because that's me I'm not important for him or her but I also have the same issue about I can't remember their name.

✓ Sometimes I feel really sad because I think that means I am not important to them. However, I have the same problem because I cannot remember their names either.

The original sentence contains several ideas joined without the necessary connectors or punctuation. Use that means to introduce the result and because I cannot remember to introduce the reason.

× If I forget them I will ask what's your name to I reintroduce yourself because I have the bad memory, but I'm trying to remember all the name with my friends.

✓ If I forget someone's name, I will ask them what their name is so that I can introduce myself again. I have a bad memory, but I am trying to remember all my friends' names.

Use myself because the subject I performs the action of introducing. Yourself refers to you, not I. The phrase ask them what their name is uses the correct pronouns for indirect questions.

× If I forget them I will ask what's your name to I reintroduce yourself because I have the bad memory, but I'm trying to remember all the name with my friends.

✓ If I forget someone's name, I will ask them what their name is so that I can introduce myself again. I have a bad memory, but I am trying to remember all my friends' names.

In an indirect question, use normal statement word order: what their name is, not what's your name. Also, ask them must be followed by the person being asked.

× If I forget them I will ask what's your name to I reintroduce yourself because I have the bad memory, but I'm trying to remember all the name with my friends.

✓ If I forget someone's name, I will ask them what their name is so that I can introduce myself again. I have a bad memory, but I am trying to remember all my friends' names.

Use a before the singular countable noun memory in a bad memory. Do not use the before the plural possessive phrase my friends' names.

× If I forget them I will ask what's your name to I reintroduce yourself because I have the bad memory, but I'm trying to remember all the name with my friends.

✓ If I forget someone's name, I will ask them what their name is so that I can introduce myself again. I have a bad memory, but I am trying to remember all my friends' names.

Name must be plural in all my friends' names because the speaker is referring to the names of multiple friends. Use someone's name when referring to one forgotten name.