Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly in the present tense and avoid repeating the same idea. Use accurate expressions such as “remember people’s names” and “meet many different people.” Add one clear, specific example and connect it with “for example” or “because.” Avoid unclear or irrelevant words such as “Bachchan” and “method people.”

例: No, I’m not very good at remembering people’s names. I meet many new people every day, and their names can be difficult to remember. For example, when I attend a social event, I sometimes remember someone’s face but forget their name.

提案: State clearly how you remember names instead of describing the difficulty of remembering them. Correct the grammar in phrases such as “people who have a close relationship with me” and avoid vague or incorrect wording like “tournament people.” Give a practical method, such as repeating a name, associating it with a face, or writing it down, and include a specific example.

例: I usually remember people’s names by repeating them during the conversation. I also try to connect the name with the person’s face or something about their personality. For example, if I meet a new colleague called Maya, I might say, “Nice to meet you, Maya,” so I can remember her more easily.

提案: Express your feeling directly at the beginning, for example, “I don’t feel offended” or “I feel slightly disappointed.” Then explain why people may forget names. The current answer contains many unclear phrases, repetitions, and incomplete sentences, so use simpler grammar and one relevant example. Make sure the example supports your opinion and avoid switching between “my choice” and “my name” without a clear meaning.

例: I don’t usually feel offended when someone forgets my name because remembering names can be difficult. However, I may feel a little disappointed if I have met the person several times. For example, if a colleague forgets my name, I simply remind them politely and continue the conversation.

提案: Give a direct frequency answer, such as “Yes, quite often” or “Only occasionally.” Use the present simple for regular habits: “I often forget people’s names” and “I meet many people every day.” Avoid repetition and improve accuracy with plural forms such as “people’s names.” Add a concise, clearly described example using a linking phrase like “for instance.”

例: Yes, I forget people’s names quite often, especially when I meet several people at the same time. I can usually remember their faces, but I sometimes forget their names later. For instance, after a group discussion at work, I remembered the conversation but not everyone’s name.

× Generally speaking, it is not easy to remember a person's name because every person had different name.

✓ Generally speaking, it is not easy to remember people's names because every person has a different name.

This describes a general situation, so the present-tense form has is needed instead of the past-tense form had.

× Generally speaking, it is not easy to remember a person's name because every person had different name.

✓ Generally speaking, it is not easy to remember people's names because every person has a different name.

The singular countable noun name needs the indefinite article a because it refers to one name in general.

× It is very difficult before member name because every day we met different Bachchan and different individuals have different names have different names.

✓ It is very difficult to remember names because every day I meet different people, and they have different names.

The original sentence contains an incomplete verb phrase, repeated words, and unclear connections between ideas. Use to remember after difficult and connect the two complete clauses with and.

× It is very difficult before member name because every day we met different Bachchan and different individuals have different names have different names.

✓ It is very difficult to remember names because every day I meet different people, and they have different names.

The sentence describes a regular habit, so meet is the appropriate present-tense form instead of met.

× For example, in the last day I method people and they have different names.

✓ For example, the other day I met some people, and they had different names.

The phrase the other day refers to a completed event in the past, so both verbs should be in the past tense: met and had.

× For example, in the last day I method people and they have different names.

✓ For example, the other day I met some people, and they had different names.

In the last day is not the natural prepositional expression for a recent past event. Use the other day.

× Well, generally speaking, tournament people in Nepal is very difficult task for me.

✓ Well, generally speaking, remembering people's names in Nepal is a very difficult task for me.

When an activity functions as the subject of a sentence, use the -ing form. Remembering acts as the subject here.

× Well, generally speaking, tournament people in Nepal is very difficult task for me.

✓ Well, generally speaking, remembering people's names in Nepal is a very difficult task for me.

The singular countable noun task needs the article a.

× I remember only those people who has closed the relationship with me, for example, my family's colleagues and friends and etcetera.

✓ I remember only those people who have a close relationship with me, such as my family members, colleagues, and friends.

The relative pronoun who refers to plural people, so the verb must be have, not has.

× I remember only those people who has closed the relationship with me, for example, my family's colleagues and friends and etcetera.

✓ I remember only those people who have a close relationship with me, such as my family members, colleagues, and friends.

Relationship is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a.

× Well, general speaking, uh, different people have different mindset and they have different ability to recall in the name of other person.

✓ Well, generally speaking, different people have different mindsets, and they have different abilities to recall other people's names.

Generally is the adverb needed to modify speaking. The adjective general cannot be used in this expression.

× Well, general speaking, uh, different people have different mindset and they have different ability to recall in the name of other person.

✓ Well, generally speaking, different people have different mindsets, and they have different abilities to recall other people's names.

Because the sentence refers to different people and their individual mental perspectives and abilities, the plural forms mindsets and abilities are appropriate.

× Well, general speaking, uh, different people have different mindset and they have different ability to recall in the name of other person.

✓ Well, generally speaking, different people have different mindsets, and they have different abilities to recall other people's names.

Recall is normally followed directly by its object. Therefore, use recall other people's names rather than recall in the name.

× So if you don't bother me because every person has their own choice.

✓ So I do not mind because everyone has their own choice.

The original sentence begins with if but does not contain a complete conditional structure. Replacing it with a complete statement makes the meaning grammatical and clear.

× My choice on this record, my name Aisha, Aisha extra if they don't name remember my name, it is it to me because umm, I don't.

✓ As for me, my name is Aisha. If people do not remember my name, it does not bother me because I do not mind.

The original contains several incomplete and incorrectly ordered clauses. Dividing the ideas into complete sentences gives each sentence a subject, verb, and clear structure.

× My choice on this record, my name Aisha, Aisha extra if they don't name remember my name, it is it to me because umm, I don't.

✓ As for me, my name is Aisha. If people do not remember my name, it does not bother me because I do not mind.

The singular subject name takes the singular verb is. The corrected sentences also match each subject with the appropriate verb.

× US many times I forget people name because everyday I met many people so I have no ability to remember every person names.

✓ Yes, many times I forget people's names because every day I meet many people, so I cannot remember every person's name.

People and persons are plural, so the possessive forms should be people's and every person's. The nouns must agree with the number of people being discussed.

× US many times I forget people name because everyday I met many people so I have no ability to remember every person names.

✓ Yes, many times I forget people's names because every day I meet many people, so I cannot remember every person's name.

The sentence describes a repeated present situation, so meet is needed instead of the past-tense form met.

× US many times I forget people name because everyday I met many people so I have no ability to remember every person names.

✓ Yes, many times I forget people's names because every day I meet many people, so I cannot remember every person's name.

The singular noun name needs the possessive determiner person's in every person's name. The plural noun names is used after people's.

× So I forgot people names sometimes.

✓ So I sometimes forget people's names.

This describes a repeated habit, not one completed past event. Use the present-tense verb forget.

× So I forgot people names sometimes.

✓ So I sometimes forget people's names.

The frequency adverb sometimes is naturally placed before the main verb forget in this sentence.

× For example, the last day I held a conversation I'm with a group of people and and I don't remember the whole group of names.

✓ For example, the other day I had a conversation with a group of people, and I did not remember any of their names.

The sentence refers to a completed event in the past, so use had and did not remember instead of present-tense forms.

× For example, the last day I held a conversation I'm with a group of people and and I don't remember the whole group of names.

✓ For example, the other day I had a conversation with a group of people, and I did not remember any of their names.

The correct preposition is with in the phrase have a conversation with someone. The repeated and has also been removed to create a clear connection.

× For example, the last day I held a conversation I'm with a group of people and and I don't remember the whole group of names.

✓ For example, the other day I had a conversation with a group of people, and I did not remember any of their names.

Their correctly refers back to the plural noun people. The original phrase the whole group of names does not use an appropriate pronoun for the people mentioned.