Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接表达了“容易记住”，并给出了原因，但“people's name”应改为复数或单数一致的形式，如“people's names”或“a person's name”。“People's name is just like a picture...”和“You just need to remember it with your mouth”表达不自然，意思也不够清楚。建议使用更自然、具体的方法，例如把名字和外貌、声音或个人特点联系起来，并使用“because”和“For example”组织细节。

例: Yes, it is quite easy for me to remember people’s names. I usually connect a person’s name with their appearance or personality. For example, if someone has a bright smile, I try to associate that feature with their name. This helps me remember it more quickly.

提案: 答案没有完整的主题句，开头“their names with their characters”语法不完整，应改为“I remember people’s names by connecting them with their personalities or appearance”。例子中的“some people's name is Sinni”应改为“someone is called Sinni”或“one of my friends is called Sinni”。建议明确说明记忆方法，并用一个清晰、自然的例子支持观点。

例: I usually remember people’s names by connecting them with their personality or appearance. For example, my friend Sinni has a lovely smile, so I associate her name with that feature. This makes her name easier for me to remember.

提案: 答案回应了情绪，并解释了原因，但“make it mistaken”搭配错误，应改为“mistake it for someone else’s name”或“get it confused with other names”。最后一句过于冗长且不自然，“I tell them to remember my English name”更准确。建议先清楚表达感受，再说明名字普通，最后给出解决办法；避免重复使用“name”。

例: I don’t feel too upset because forgetting someone’s name is quite common. My name is fairly ordinary, so people sometimes confuse it with other names. When that happens, I simply remind them of my English name, which is easier for them to remember.

提案: 回答的主要意思比较清楚，但“people's name”应为“people’s names”，“I usually remember people's name I have good memory”缺少连接词和标点。可以改为“I usually remember people’s names because I have a good memory”。最后一句“not a good character for my husband”意思不清楚，可能想表达“我的丈夫觉得我记性太好”。建议使用“However”连接，并具体解释为什么这对丈夫不是好事。

例: No, I rarely forget people’s names because I have a good memory. In fact, I can often remember names even after meeting someone only once. However, this can sometimes annoy my husband because I also remember small details that he has forgotten.

× Yes of course I always remember people's name very quickly because people's name is just like a picture with a lot of colors and a lot of lines.

✓ Yes, of course, I always remember people's names very quickly because people's names are just like pictures with a lot of colors and a lot of lines.

“People's”表示“人们的”，后面的名词应根据语境使用复数“names”。因为主语“people's names”是复数，所以系动词也应使用“are”，而不是“is”。

× You just need to remember it with your mouth.

✓ You just need to remember them by saying them aloud.

前文的“people's names”是复数，因此不能用单数代词“it”，应使用复数代词“them”。“by saying them aloud”也比“with your mouth”更准确地表达“通过大声说出来”。

× their names with their characters, just like some people's name is Sinni and I will remember Sinni with her smile.

✓ I remember their names by associating them with their characteristics. For example, if someone's name is Sinni, I remember Sinni by her smile.

原句开头“their names with their characters”没有主语和谓语动词，是一个句子片段。补充主语“I”和谓语“remember”后，句子才完整。

× some people's name is Sinni

✓ someone's name is Sinni

“some people's name”表示“某些人的名字”，其中“people's”是复数所有格，但后面只举了一个人的名字，因此使用“someone's name”更符合单数语境。如果指多个人，则应说“some people's names are ...”。

× people always make it mistaken with other people's name.

✓ People often mistake it for other people's names.

固定搭配是“mistake A for B”，表示“把A误认为B”，不能使用“make it mistaken with”。此外，“other people's names”应使用复数形式。

× So when they cannot remember my name, I always say that I will say to them you can just remember my English name.

✓ So when they cannot remember my name, I always say to them, “You can just remember my English name.”

原句混用了间接引语和直接引语。“say that”后面需要完整的间接引语结构；如果直接引用对方要说的话，应使用逗号和引号，并直接说“You can ...”。

× No, I usually remember people's name I have good memory and my good memory maybe is not a good character for my husband.

✓ No, I usually remember people's names. I have a good memory, and my good memory may not be a good thing for my husband.

“people's name”应改为“people's names”，因为这里泛指许多人的名字。“a good memory”前需要不定冠词“a”，因为“memory”在这里是可数名词单数。

× No, I usually remember people's name I have good memory and my good memory maybe is not a good character for my husband.

✓ No, I usually remember people's names. I have a good memory, and my good memory may not be a good thing for my husband.

原句把多个独立分句直接连接在一起，缺少句号或适当的连接词，造成句子结构错误。应将意思分成两个句子，并用“and”连接相关分句，使结构清晰。

× my good memory maybe is not a good character for my husband.

✓ Maybe my good memory is not a good thing for my husband.

表示“可能”的副词“maybe”通常放在句首，或者使用情态动词“may”放在主语之后。不能在这里使用“my good memory maybe is”的不自然语序。