Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，结构清晰，并且用 because 和 For example 补充了原因和具体情境，符合基本结构和连贯性要求。可以把 “associate names with wrong faces” 改为更自然的 “associate the wrong names with people’s faces”，并将 “when I see them in the corridor” 改为更准确的 “when I run into them in the corridor”。此外，第一句和第二句的意思略有重复，可以适当压缩，使表达更有效。

例: No, I often struggle to remember people’s names. I sometimes associate the wrong names with their faces, so I may accidentally call someone by another person’s name. For instance, this has happened to me when I ran into classmates in the corridor.

提案: 回答内容相关，使用了 repeating、connect 和 For example，细节也比较具体。但有明显语法和表达问题： “it helps me helps” 应改为 “it helps me make the name stick” 或 “it helps the name stick”；“remember the name”在泛指时更自然地说 “remember someone’s name”；“I might think Mr Lee, the teacher”需要改为完整表达，如 “I associate Mr Lee’s name with the fact that he is a teacher”。建议使用更自然的连接方式，并避免重复表达。

例: I usually repeat a person’s name when I first hear it because this helps it stick in my mind. I also connect the name with something about the person. For example, if the person is a teacher named Mr Lee, I remember him as “Mr Lee, the teacher,” which makes his name easier to recall.

提案: 回答表达了“已经习惯了”的观点，也尝试解释名字难记的原因，但存在较多语法、词汇和句子组织问题。“have got to use to it”应改为 “I’ve got used to it”；“fringer”不是合适的词，可能想表达 “foreigner”；“read backwards my name”应改为 “pronounce my name incorrectly”；“I know he is calling me is enough”应改为 “I’m satisfied as long as I know they are calling me”。建议先给出清晰的感受，再用一到两个具体细节解释，避免过长且不连贯的句子。

例: To be honest, I’ve got used to it because my name is quite difficult for foreigners to pronounce. People sometimes pronounce it incorrectly, but I don’t feel offended. As long as I know they are trying to get my attention, I’m fine with it.

提案: 回答了问题，但 “Yes, one hundred percent” 过于绝对且不够自然；应说 “Yes, quite often” 或 “Yes, I’m quite forgetful”。“I don't have very good memory”缺少冠词，应改为 “I don’t have a very good memory”。后半部分有严重的搭配和代词问题：“simplify his name”以及 “perform very close”意思不清，可能想表达使用昵称或避免直接称呼对方。建议使用清晰的逻辑连接词，并提供一个简单、具体的应对方法。

例: Yes, I forget people’s names quite often because I don’t have a very good memory. When I meet someone whose name I can’t remember, I usually avoid using their name or politely ask them to remind me. Sometimes I also use a friendly nickname until I remember it.

× I usually mix up names because I tend to associate names with wrong faces.

✓ I usually mix up names because I tend to associate names with the wrong faces.

“wrong faces”在这里指特定的、对应错误的脸，因此通常需要使用定冠词“the”，构成“the wrong faces”。

× I do this because it helps me helps the name stick in my head and I also try to connect the name with something about the person.

✓ I do this because it helps the name stick in my head, and I also try to connect the name with something about the person.

“helps me helps”中重复使用了“helps”，造成句子结构错误。使用“help + 宾语 + 动词原形”结构时，应改为“helps the name stick”。

× To be honest I have got to use to it because my name is really difficult to remember and almost every time a fringer might read backwards my name but anyway I know he is calling me is enough.

✓ To be honest, I have got used to it because my name is really difficult to remember. Almost every time, a foreigner reads my name backwards, but anyway, knowing that he is calling me is enough.

“have got to use to it”结构不完整，表达“习惯于”应使用“get used to”。另外，“read backwards my name”语序错误，应改为“read my name backwards”；“I know he is calling me is enough”缺少清晰的主句结构，可改为动名词短语“knowing that he is calling me”。

× To be honest I have got to use to it because my name is really difficult to remember and almost every time a fringer might read backwards my name but anyway I know he is calling me is enough.

✓ To be honest, I have got used to it because my name is really difficult to remember. Almost every time, a foreigner reads my name backwards, but anyway, knowing that he is calling me is enough.

“backwards”修饰“read my name”，应放在宾语“my name”之后，形成“read my name backwards”，而不能放在动词和宾语之间。

× To be honest I have got to use to it because my name is really difficult to remember and almost every time a fringer might read backwards my name but anyway I know he is calling me is enough.

✓ To be honest, I have got used to it because my name is really difficult to remember. Almost every time, a foreigner reads my name backwards, but anyway, knowing that he is calling me is enough.

“I know he is calling me is enough”把两个句子结构混在了一起。可以使用“Knowing that he is calling me is enough”，其中“Knowing...”作主语，句子结构完整。

× Yes, one hundred percent because I don't have very good memory so every time I come across a person and I don't remember his or her name I would simplify his name by myself or just to perform very close but avoid calling her name.

✓ Yes, one hundred percent, because I don't have a very good memory. Every time I meet someone and don't remember their name, I either make up a name for them or avoid calling them by name.

“memory”是可数名词，表示“一段/一种很好的记忆力”时需要不定冠词“a”，所以应说“a very good memory”。

× Yes, one hundred percent because I don't have very good memory so every time I come across a person and I don't remember his or her name I would simplify his name by myself or just to perform very close but avoid calling her name.

✓ Yes, one hundred percent, because I don't have a very good memory. Every time I meet someone and don't remember their name, I either make up a name for them or avoid calling them by name.

这句话描述的是经常发生的习惯，应使用一般现在时。条件或时间从句“Every time...”后面使用“meet”和“don't remember”，主句也使用“make up”或“avoid”，不应使用“would”。

× Yes, one hundred percent because I don't have very good memory so every time I come across a person and I don't remember his or her name I would simplify his name by myself or just to perform very close but avoid calling her name.

✓ Yes, one hundred percent, because I don't have a very good memory. Every time I meet someone and don't remember their name, I either make up a name for them or avoid calling them by name.

原句在“his or her”“his”“her”之间前后不一致，而且不知道性别时反复使用不同代词不自然。可以使用单数中性代词“they/their/them”，保持指代一致。

× Yes, one hundred percent because I don't have very good memory so every time I come across a person and I don't remember his or her name I would simplify his name by myself or just to perform very close but avoid calling her name.

✓ Yes, one hundred percent, because I don't have a very good memory. Every time I meet someone and don't remember their name, I either make up a name for them or avoid calling them by name.

英语中表示“称呼某人的名字”通常使用“call someone by name”，因此应说“avoid calling them by name”，而不是“avoid calling her name”。