Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question more directly and avoid repeating the same idea in the opening sentence. Use the plural form "names" and say "from my high school years" rather than "back in my high school years." The final clause, "but not the other people who are not," is incomplete and unclear. Add a specific reason, such as remembering people who made a strong impression on you.

例: It depends on the person. I can easily remember the names of people who made a strong impression on me, such as my close high school friends. However, I often forget the names of people I only meet once or twice.

提案: Use the plural form "people's names" and the natural phrase "by using my smartphone" or "by saving them in my phone." The expression "by art" is incorrect; you may mean "by heart." Also, keep the verb forms parallel: "memorized them by heart or wrote them down." Explain how this method helps you remember names more clearly.

例: I usually save people's names in my phone shortly after meeting them. If the person is important to me, I also repeat the name a few times during the conversation. In the past, before smartphones were common, I memorized names by heart or wrote them down on a piece of paper.

提案: Use the correct structure "I never get mad at people" and avoid repeating the same feeling in two consecutive sentences. "React originally" is not natural in this context; use "I react calmly" or "I usually understand." Give a direct explanation for your attitude and mention what you normally say or do when this happens.

例: I don't usually feel offended when people forget my name because it happens to everyone. I simply remind them of my name and continue the conversation. In my opinion, it is understandable, especially when we have only met once.

提案: This answer is clear and directly responds to the question, and the example supports your main point. However, "those people" sounds slightly distant and unnatural when referring to classmates. Say "I wasn't very close to them" or "I didn't know them well." You could also add a linking phrase such as "As a result" to make the relationship between the reason and the example clearer.

例: Yes, I often forget people's names if I don't know them very well. For instance, I can hardly remember the names of most of my university classmates because I wasn't close to them and rarely spoke to them. As a result, I usually need to ask them to remind me of their names.

× For example, I still remember some people's name back in my high school years extremely well, but not the other people who are not.

✓ For example, I still remember some people's names from my high school years extremely well, but I do not remember the names of the others.

People's is plural because it refers to the names of several people. Therefore, name should be changed to names. Also, the corrected sentence makes the plural reference clear.

× For example, I still remember some people's name back in my high school years extremely well, but not the other people who are not.

✓ For example, I still remember some people's names from my high school years extremely well, but I do not remember the names of the others.

The phrase but not the other people who are not is incomplete and does not clearly express the intended meaning. Use a complete clause with a subject and verb: but I do not remember the names of the others.

× I remember people's name by using smartphones.

✓ I remember people's names by using smartphones.

People's refers to more than one person, so the noun name should be plural: names.

× Back in the days when smart phones were not common, I memorized people's name by art or write them down on a piece of paper.

✓ Back in the days when smartphones were not common, I memorized people's names by heart or wrote them down on a piece of paper.

The phrase people's names refers to the names of several people, so names is required instead of name.

× Back in the days when smart phones were not common, I memorized people's name by art or write them down on a piece of paper.

✓ Back in the days when smartphones were not common, I memorized people's names by heart or wrote them down on a piece of paper.

The sentence describes actions in the past, so the second verb should also be in the past tense. Use wrote instead of write. The two past actions are memorized and wrote.

× I never get mad people when they can't remember my name.

✓ I never get mad at people when they can't remember my name.

The adjective mad is followed by the preposition at when describing anger toward someone. Therefore, say get mad at people, not get mad people.

× I will react Originally when people can't remember my name.

✓ I will react calmly when people can't remember my name.

Originally means at the beginning or in an original way, so it does not express a suitable reaction here. Calmly is the appropriate adverb because the context shows that the speaker does not become angry or embarrassed.