Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 질문에 직접 답하려면 주어와 동사를 포함해 완전한 문장을 사용해야 합니다. “I think it’s easy for me to remember people’s names”라고 말해야 하며, “people’s” 뒤에는 반드시 명사인 “names”가 필요합니다. 이유나 간단한 예를 덧붙이면 답변이 더 자연스럽고 효과적입니다.

例: Yes, I think it’s quite easy for me to remember people’s names. I usually repeat a person’s name when I meet them for the first time, so it stays in my memory.

提案: 현재 답변은 의미가 불분명하고 질문에 대한 구체적인 방법을 제시하지 못했습니다. “I remember names by…”와 같은 구조로 시작한 뒤, 이름을 반복하거나 특징과 연결하는 등 실제 기억 방법을 설명해야 합니다. “damn”은 이 문맥에서 부적절하므로 사용하지 않는 것이 좋습니다.

例: I usually remember people’s names by repeating them during the conversation. I also try to connect their names with their jobs or a noticeable feature, which helps me remember them later.

提案: 감정을 표현하려는 점은 좋지만, 문장 구조와 시제가 혼란스럽습니다. “I feel disappointed when people forget my name because…”처럼 조건과 이유를 명확하게 연결하고, “people’s names”와 “they don’t remember”를 정확히 사용하세요. “sad”와 “blue”를 함께 사용하기보다 하나를 선택하고 구체적인 상황을 추가하면 더 자연스럽습니다.

例: I feel a little disappointed when people can’t remember my name, especially if we have met several times. However, I understand that some people are not very good at remembering names, so I try not to take it personally.

提案: “sometimes, but not always”라는 핵심 답변은 적절하지만, “I’m so smart”는 다소 부자연스럽고 자기 자랑처럼 들릴 수 있습니다. “I’m fairly good at remembering names”처럼 더 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, 이름을 잊는 경우와 기억하는 방법을 구체적으로 설명하세요. “people’s names”는 복수형으로 사용해야 합니다.

例: I sometimes forget people’s names, especially when I meet several new people at once. However, I’m fairly good at remembering them because I repeat their names and use them during the conversation.

× Yeah, I think easy for me to remember people's.

✓ Yeah, I think it's easy for me to remember people's names.

The sentence needs the verb 'is' with the dummy subject 'it': 'it's easy.' The noun 'names' is also needed after the possessive 'people's.'

× Umm, if I feel like damn and I remember people's name.

✓ Um, if I make an effort, I can remember people's names.

The plural noun 'names' is required because the speaker is referring to the names of multiple people. Also, 'people's' is a possessive form and must be followed by a noun.

× Umm, if I feel like damn and I remember people's name.

✓ Um, if I make an effort, I can remember people's names.

The original sentence does not form a clear grammatical sentence. 'Feel like damn' is not an appropriate expression here, and the sentence needs a clear subject, verb, and meaning.

× I feel so sad because I always remember people's name but they if they didn't remember my name and I feel so blue.

✓ I feel so sad because I always remember people's names, but they don't remember my name, so I feel very blue.

Use the plural noun 'names' because 'people' refers to more than one person. The phrase 'people's names' means the names belonging to multiple people.

× I feel so sad because I always remember people's name but they if they didn't remember my name and I feel so blue.

✓ I feel so sad because I always remember people's names, but they don't remember my name, so I feel very blue.

The question asks about a general feeling, so the present tense is appropriate. Use 'don't remember,' not 'didn't remember,' unless you are describing a specific past event.

× I feel so sad because I always remember people's name but they if they didn't remember my name and I feel so blue.

✓ I feel so sad because I always remember people's names, but they don't remember my name, so I feel very blue.

The original sentence contains an unnecessary 'if' and several clauses joined incorrectly. Use 'but' to show contrast and 'so' to show the result.

× Yeah, so sometime, but not always because I'm so smart, so I always remember people's name.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, but not often. I'm quite good at remembering people's names.

Use the adverb 'sometimes' when talking about something that happens on some occasions. 'Sometime' usually refers to an unspecified point in time, as in 'I'll call you sometime.'

× Yeah, so sometime, but not always because I'm so smart, so I always remember people's name.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, but not often. I'm quite good at remembering people's names.

The noun should be plural: 'people's names.' Since 'people' refers to multiple individuals, 'names' is needed.

× Yeah, so sometime, but not always because I'm so smart, so I always remember people's name.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, but not often. I'm quite good at remembering people's names.

The original response begins with an incomplete phrase and repeats 'so' in a confusing way. Separate the ideas into complete sentences for greater clarity.