Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly by saying whether it is generally easy or difficult for you. Avoid repeating words such as “name” and avoid unclear phrases like “what type of name you have.” Use accurate expressions such as “common names” and “unusual names,” and complete your final sentence. Add one specific reason or example, using a linking word such as “whereas.”

例: It is usually easy for me to remember common names, such as Ben or Sarah. However, I sometimes forget unusual names because they are less familiar to me. For example, I may need to hear a distinctive name two or three times before I remember it.

提案: Give a clear method instead of saying that you do not know how to answer. The response should focus on your personal strategy, not whether a name is simple or unusual. Use natural collocations such as “remember a name,” “repeat it,” and “associate it with someone,” and finish your explanation with a complete example.

例: I usually repeat a person’s name immediately after meeting them. I also try to associate the name with the person’s appearance or job. For instance, if I meet a teacher called Elena, I silently repeat “Elena, the new English teacher” to help me remember it.

提案: State your feeling more directly and then explain it. The phrase “they should just memorize it” does not express how you feel, and “where I have been lived” is grammatically incorrect; say “where I have lived.” Use a natural reason, such as understanding that people meet many others, and avoid irrelevant references to culture or country unless they clearly help explain your name.

例: I feel slightly disappointed when people cannot remember my name, but I do not take it personally. People meet many new people, so forgetting a name is understandable. I usually remind them politely, especially if we are going to speak again.

提案: Answer with a clear frequency, such as “not very often” or “sometimes,” before explaining when you forget names. Correct the sentence structure and avoid switching from “I” to the general pronoun “you.” Explain a practical strategy, and use a linking word such as “especially” or “because” to connect the reason to your answer.

例: I sometimes forget people’s names, especially when I meet several new people at once. Common names are usually easy to remember, whereas unusual names can be more difficult. In that case, I repeat the name during the conversation and associate it with the person’s appearance or personality.

× If you call it like Hloya Max Ben so it's easy it's simple to remember your name name but if you have a unique name that otherly have a difference from other names like Ben, so it's hard to

✓ If you have a common name, such as Chloe, Max, or Ben, it is easy to remember. However, if you have a unique name that is different from other names, it is hard to remember.

The original sentence contains several clauses joined incorrectly, repeated words, and an incomplete ending. Use separate complete sentences and connect contrasting ideas with however or but.

× a unique name that otherly have a difference from other names

✓ a unique name that is different from other names

Otherly is not correctly used here. The adjective different should follow the verb is to describe the name.

× let's say if you named Ben, it's simple to memorize your name

✓ Let's say your name is Ben; it is easy to remember.

The question refers to a general situation, so use the present tense is, not the past-tense form named.

× But if you called, for example, Napoleone from Franca

✓ But if your name is, for example, Napoleone, you just need to memorize it.

Use the present-tense structure your name is when describing a person's current name. Called is not appropriate in this context.

× so you just need to memorize it you need to form

✓ You just need to memorize it and form an association with it.

The original contains two independent clauses without a conjunction and ends with an incomplete phrase. Join the ideas with and and complete the verb phrase.

× the country where I have been lived for a long time

✓ the country where I have lived for a long time

Have lived is the correct active present perfect form. Have been lived would mean that someone or something lived the speaker, which is not the intended meaning.

× and just associated with this place

✓ and just associate it with this place

After should, use the base form of the verb: associate, not the past-tense or past-participle form associated.

× If you called simple? Remember it would be simple.

✓ If you have a simple name, it is easy to remember.

This describes a general situation, so use the present tense have and is. The original conditional structure is also incomplete and unclear.

× If you called unusual in different ways

✓ If you have an unusual name

Use the article an before the vowel sound in unusual. The phrase also needs the present-tense verb have to express a general situation.

× you should just associate it with the culture with the country where it is

✓ You should just associate it with the culture or the country it comes from.

Use or to present two alternatives, and use comes from to express the origin of the name. The repeated preposition with is incorrect in this structure.