Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly and use correct noun forms and sentence structure. Use “people’s names,” not “people names” or “people’s name.” Explain that you often meet people only once and do not have enough opportunities to communicate with them. Use a linking word such as “because” to connect your reason clearly.

例: No, it isn’t easy for me to remember people’s names. I often meet people only once, so I don’t have much chance to talk to them again. As a result, their names quickly slip my mind.

提案: Give a clear method for remembering names and use accurate grammar. The phrase “by communicating” is more natural than “buyer communicate,” and “discussing or speaking” should be replaced with a specific action. You could mention repeating the name, asking questions, or associating the name with a personal detail.

例: I try to remember people’s names by using them during the conversation. For example, I repeat the person’s name a few times and ask them some questions. This helps me remember the name more easily.

提案: Express your feeling directly and avoid unclear phrases such as “don’t speak me” and “prepare well.” You could say that you feel slightly disappointed or unimportant, but you should also acknowledge that forgetting names is normal. Organize the answer with a clear feeling followed by a reason or balanced opinion.

例: I feel a little disappointed when people can’t remember my name because it makes me think they were not paying attention. However, I understand that remembering names can be difficult, especially after meeting someone only once. I usually just remind them of my name politely.

提案: Answer directly, then explain when you tend to forget names. Use “people” or “someone” instead of “pupils,” unless you are specifically talking about students. Correct the structure to “people I meet only once” and use “don’t communicate with” for the reason. Add a specific example to make the answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I often forget the names of people I meet only once. If we don’t communicate again, I usually forget their names quite quickly. For instance, I may remember their face but not their name when I see them several weeks later.

× No, it is not easy to remember people names because when do we meet peoples only one time and no communicate then we don't know the people name.

✓ No, it is not easy to remember people's names because when we meet people only once and do not communicate with them, we do not remember their names.

People's names needs the possessive form people's and the plural noun names. Peoples is incorrect here because people is already the plural form of person. The clause when do we meet has incorrect question word order; in a statement, use when we meet. The verb communicate needs the subject we and the preposition with: communicate with them. Their names is more appropriate than the people name because their refers back to people and names must be plural. Use a comma before the final independent clause to make the sentence structure clearer.

× I remember people names buyer communicate and some discussing or speaking.

✓ I remember people's names by communicating and having some discussions or conversations with them.

People's names requires the possessive form people's and the plural noun names. After by, use a gerund, so communicate becomes communicating. Buyer is incorrect; the preposition by expresses the method. The phrase some discussing is not grammatically correct because discussing is normally a verb; use some discussions or conversations instead. Adding with them clarifies who you communicate with and makes the sentence complete.

× When people cannot remember my name, I can feel that the people, uh, literally, uh, don't speak me like, uh, so prepare well.

✓ When people cannot remember my name, I feel that they do not really speak to me, so I prepare well.

I feel is more direct and natural than I can feel in this context. The people is unnecessarily specific; use they to refer back to people. Speak requires the preposition to when referring to the person being addressed, so speak to me is correct. Really is placed before the main verb speak, which is the natural adverb position. The original sentence contains an unclear structure, so removing the fillers and using two connected clauses makes the meaning easier to understand.

× Yes, I often forget pupils that the people who went I meet only one time and no communicates.

✓ Yes, I often forget the names of people I meet only once and do not communicate with.

The names must be included because the question asks about forgetting people's names. People is the appropriate plural noun in this context, while pupils refers specifically to students. Once is more natural than one time for describing frequency. The phrase who went is incorrect and unnecessary. Because the subject is I, use do not communicate, not communicates. The preposition with is needed after communicate. The revised sentence uses a clear object, the names, and a relative clause describing the people.