Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (remove extra articles and repeated words) and add a brief reason. Use one or two supporting details and a linking word if needed.

例: Yes, I usually find it fairly easy to remember people's names because I make an effort to focus when I first meet them. For example, I repeat the name in my head and try to use it once in conversation so it sticks.

提案: Clarify and choose correct verbs; avoid vague words like 'hopefully' and 'praise' which are inappropriate here. Give a clear method as topic sentence, then a short example with a linking word (e.g., 'for example').

例: I usually repeat a new name in my head and then use it in conversation to remember it. For example, if someone says 'I'm Sara', I might say 'Nice to meet you, Sara' and repeat the name silently afterwards.

提案: Organize into a clear topic sentence describing your feeling, correct grammar, and avoid confusing phrases. Give one reason and a brief example using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example').

例: I usually don't react strongly when people forget my name because I understand some names are difficult. For example, if someone struggles with my long name, I simply repeat it slowly and suggest a shorter nickname.

提案: Begin with a concise statement about frequency, then give a specific reason and an example. Fix grammar (singular/plural, prepositions) and make the narrative coherent using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: I sometimes forget people's names, especially at work because I meet many customers each day. For example, when a regular customer returns, I may struggle to recall her name even though I've met her before because I see dozens of clients daily.

× Yes, I try to remember the another people name because I would like to remember the name to to speak with them later.

✓ Yes, I try to remember other people's names because I would like to use the names when I speak with them later.

The sentence misuses the definite article 'the' before 'another' and has incorrect noun forms. 'Another' is not used with plural nouns; use 'other' + plural. 'People name' should be the possessive plural 'people's names'. Also 'to to speak' contains a duplicated 'to' and 'remember the name to use the names' is better expressed as 'use the names when I speak with them later'. Suggestions: replace 'the another people name' with 'other people's names' and remove the extra 'to'.

× Well, I hopefully praise a new name in my head or use it in conversation so I don't forget it.

✓ Well, I usually practice a new name in my head or use it in conversation so I don't forget it.

The verb 'praise' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is likely 'practice'. 'Hopefully' is an adverb of manner but doesn't fit; 'usually' or 'normally' suits habitual actions. No -ing correction needed except to note 'practise/practice' as base verb. Suggest replacing 'hopefuly praise' with 'usually practice'.

× To be all male I didn't have any reaction because but it's OK because my name is too long and that's why if they are forget it but I just repeat it to them again and for example my friend from another country they ask my first name and after that they forget it.

✓ To be honest, I don't have any reaction because my name is long, so if they forget it I just repeat it for them. For example, a friend from another country asked for my first name but then forgot it.

This sentence has multiple structural and grammatical errors: incorrect phrase 'To be all male' (likely 'To be honest'), mixed tenses ('didn't have' vs present context), unnecessary conjunctions, incorrect word order ('they are forget it'), and awkward repetition. Also change 'ask my first name' to past 'asked for my first name'. Suggestions: simplify into two clear sentences, fix tense consistency and use 'forget it' not 'are forget it'.

× Actually sometime I forget the people name.

✓ Actually, sometimes I forget people's names.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'The people name' is incorrect: use the possessive plural 'people's names'. Also plural 'names' fits general reference. Suggest using 'sometimes I forget people's names'.

× For example I work in the Thailand too long, I have so many customer per day and after that customer come back they ask tell me her name that I remember but I can't say sorry I forget it because they have many person come in.

✓ For example, I worked in Thailand for a long time. I had so many customers per day, and when those customers came back they would ask me to tell them the name I remembered, but I couldn't say it because many people came in.

Multiple errors: 'in the Thailand' should be 'in Thailand' (no 'the'); tense should be past 'worked' to match 'too long' (duration); 'so many customer' needs plural 'customers'; 'after that customer come back' should be 'when those customers came back'; 'they ask tell me her name that I remember' is ungrammatical — likely 'they would ask me to tell them the name I remembered' or 'they asked me to tell them her name'; 'I can't say sorry I forget it' should be 'I couldn't say it because I had forgotten' or simplified as corrected. Also 'many person come in' should be 'many people came in'. Suggestions: correct articles, plural forms, tense consistency, and word order.