Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more concise, fix grammar, and add a clear topic sentence plus one specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

例: I find it difficult to remember people's names if I haven't spoken to them recently. To cope, I keep a small diary where I write down names and add photos, which helps me recall them later. For example, after a meeting I note the person’s role and a few details, so I can recognise them next time.

提案: Provide a clear main sentence describing your method, correct grammar, and use linking words. Give one specific, concise example and avoid sentence fragments.

例: I usually remember names by recalling where and how we met. For example, if I met someone at church, I save their contact with a note like “met at Sunday service” so the context helps me remember their name later.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence about your feeling, then explain briefly why and how you react. Use linking words (however, so) and correct small grammar issues to sound more natural.

例: I feel a bit disappointed when people can't remember my name, but I usually give them the benefit of the doubt. For example, if they hesitate I politely repeat my name and try to smile so the situation stays friendly.

提案: Answer directly and add a short reason with a linking word. Be specific about what ‘lack of communication’ means and provide one example to make the statement concrete.

例: Yes, I often forget people's names because I don't keep in touch with them. For instance, if I meet someone once at a conference and we never communicate afterwards, I usually can't recall their name later.

× Sometimes it is quite difficult for me to remember peoples name officially when I have not spoken to them recently.

✓ Sometimes it is quite difficult for me to remember people's names, especially when I have not spoken to them recently.

The plural possessive of 'people' requires an apostrophe: people's. Also 'name' should be plural 'names' because referring generally to multiple people. Added a comma and clarified 'especially' to improve flow and match context. Suggestion: use 'people's names' when speaking about multiple individuals. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× But I have gotten a diary where I consciously write people's name and sometimes add their pictures to remember.

✓ But I have gotten a diary where I consciously write people's names and sometimes add their pictures to help me remember them.

Again need plural possessive 'people's' and plural 'names'. Also add 'help me' and 'them' for clarity and correct object reference. 'Have gotten' is acceptable in informal American English; keep tense consistent. Suggestion: use 'people's names' and include an object after 'remember'. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× I remember peoples names by. Recollecting how we met, for example, if it was in the church, I would save their contacts and also right where I met them and this helps me to remember their names properly.

✓ I remember people's names by recollecting how we met; for example, if it was at church, I save their contact details and also write where I met them, and this helps me remember their names properly.

Use possessive 'people's' and plural 'names'. Remove incorrect period after 'by' and make 'recollecting' part of the sentence. Use 'at church' (more natural) and 'contact details' as plural. 'Right' is a spelling error for 'write'. Simplified punctuation improves readability. Suggestion: ensure sentence flows and check spelling ('write'). Grammar problem type ID: 1

× for example, if it was in the church

✓ for example, if it was at church

When referring to attending a place of worship in general, English commonly uses 'at church' rather than 'in the church'. Use 'in the church' only when referring to inside a specific church building. Suggestion: use 'at church' for general context. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I remember peoples names by. Recollecting how we met, for example, if it was in the church, I would save their contacts and also right where I met them and this helps me to remember their names properly.

✓ I remember people's names by recollecting how we met; for example, if it was at church, I save their contact details and also write where I met them, and this helps me remember their names properly.

Clarified pronoun reference: 'their' correctly refers to 'people' but ensure consistency and clarity by pluralizing 'names' and 'contacts'. Also changed tense 'would save' to 'save' for a habitual action. Suggestion: keep pronoun references consistent and match tense to habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Sometimes I feel very sad, but I would give them the benefit of doubt that they genuinely did not remember my name and I would tell them my name.

✓ Sometimes I feel very sad, but I give them the benefit of the doubt that they genuinely did not remember my name, and I tell them my name.

Add definite article 'the' in 'the benefit of the doubt'. Use simple present 'give' and 'tell' to indicate habitual reaction rather than conditional 'would'. Suggestion: include 'the' in the idiom and use present tense for habitual behaviors. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Yes, I often forget peoples name and this is as a result of lack of communication between us.

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names, and this is a result of a lack of communication between us.

Use possessive 'people's' and plural 'names'. Add article 'a' before 'lack of communication' and use 'this is a result of' for clarity. Suggestion: remember to pluralize when referring to multiple people and include necessary articles. Grammar problem type ID: 1