Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence addressing the question, then give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct plural and article errors (e.g., "people's names").

例: Yes, it's fairly easy for me to remember people's names. For example, if I meet someone two or three times and hear their name in conversation, I usually recall it later because repeated exposure helps me link the name to the person.

提案: Give a clear method and use coherent linking words. State one main technique and give a concise specific example. Avoid filler words (like "like") and repeated words.

例: I remember names by associating them with the situation where I met the person. For instance, if I meet someone during a project meeting and we speak face to face, I link their name to the role they played in the project, which helps me recall their full name later.

提案: Use correct grammar and expand slightly to explain your feeling with a reason. Start with a topic sentence about your emotion, then add one brief reason using a linking word such as "because".

例: I feel a bit disappointed when someone can't remember my name because it makes me think they didn't pay attention during our previous conversation.

提案: Answer directly and give a specific condition and brief reason. Use linking words like "usually" or "often" and improve grammar and word order.

例: Yes, I often forget people's names if I meet them only once and we don't talk much, because I don't have enough interaction to form a memory link.

× Yeah, it is easy to remember people names when I meet them people two to four times and I heard that name and phrase also.

✓ Yes, it is easy to remember people's names when I meet them two to four times and hear the name and phrase as well.

This sentence has several issues: missing possessive form, redundant words, incorrect tense and word order. Change 'people names' to the possessive form 'people's names' (grammar problem: possessive/word form falls under sentence structure and article errors). Remove duplicated 'people' and reorder to 'when I meet them two to four times' for clarity. Use parallel verb forms 'meet' and 'hear' in simple present to match habitual action. Suggestion: simplify and keep verbs consistent for habitual routines.

× I exactly remember with like a project work or a meeting with a face to face and talkative in that type of way. I really Remember Remember the types of a full name.

✓ I remember people exactly when I work on a project with them or meet them face to face and they are talkative. I really remember their full names.

Original has awkward phrasing, incorrect prepositions and capitalization, repetition, and unclear reference. Replace 'remember with' by 'remember people when I' and use 'work on a project' and 'meet them face to face'. Use 'they are talkative' to describe why names stick. Change 'types of a full name' to 'their full names' to be clear and grammatically correct. Ensure verbs and pronouns agree and remove duplicated words.

× When people cannot remember my name, I feel that the person don't know me.

✓ When people cannot remember my name, I feel that the person doesn't know me.

The error is subject-verb agreement: 'person' is singular, so use 'doesn't' (does not) rather than 'don't' (do not). Also 'cannot' is fine; keep the clause structure but correct the auxiliary verb to match the singular subject.

× Yeah, I forget people and when I meet only one time and no more talkative person.

✓ Yes, I forget people when I meet them only once and they are not very talkative.

This sentence has incorrect word order, missing pronouns and awkward expressions. Replace 'meet only one time' with 'meet them only once' and 'no more talkative person' with 'they are not very talkative' to convey meaning clearly. Use consistent tense (simple present) for habitual actions and include the object pronoun 'them'.