Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., use plural/singular correctly and correct tense).

例: Not really. I usually struggle to remember names the first time I hear them because I meet many people quickly. For example, at parties I focus on conversations rather than names, so I often forget them afterwards.

提案: Give a clearer explanation and one specific example of an association technique. Use linking words to link the technique to an example, and keep it to two or three sentences.

例: I usually remember names by making associations. For instance, if someone's name is Lily, I picture a flower with the same name, and that image helps me recall it later.

提案: Respond with a clear topic sentence about your feelings and explain why, using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and use appropriate adjectives (e.g., 'angry' not 'angry about it').

例: I don't get angry when people forget my name because my name is uncommon and I understand it's easy to forget. Besides, I usually reintroduce myself without taking offense.

提案: Answer directly and give a reason plus a brief comment about trying to improve. Avoid filler phrases like 'by the way' and use linking words to make ideas coherent. Correct negative phrasing and tense.

例: Yes, I often forget people's names because I don't focus on names during conversations. However, I'm trying to improve by repeating the name after introduction and using it later in the conversation.

× All I wanted to say that I can't remember people's name from the first time.

✓ All I wanted to say is that I can't remember people's names the first time I meet them.

The noun 'name' should be plural ('names') when referring to people's names in general. Also the clause needs the verb 'is' after 'All I wanted to say' to be grammatically complete, and 'from the first time' is better expressed as 'the first time I meet them' for clarity.

× It's really hard but the names it's not difficult but I can't remember it from the first time.

✓ It's really hard; the names themselves are not difficult, but I can't remember them the first time.

This sentence has poor structure and pronoun agreement. Replace 'it's' with 'the names themselves are' to match plural 'names,' and use 'them' (plural pronoun) instead of 'it.' Use punctuation to separate contrasting ideas.

× I remember them by associations because I can remember it in other ways.

✓ I remember them by association because I can remember names in other ways.

Use the noun 'association' (or the gerund 'associating') rather than the plural 'associations' with 'by' can be acceptable but 'by association' is more natural here. Also 'it' is unclear; replace with 'names' to match the plural object.

× My name is not basic so I don't angry about it and it's absolutely normal because I can remember it for myself I don't angry about it.

✓ My name is not common, so I'm not angry about it; it's absolutely normal because I can remember my own name. I'm not angry about it.

'Angry' is an adjective that needs a verb such as 'be' (I'm not angry). 'Basic' is an unnatural adjective for a name; 'common' or 'simple' is better. 'I can remember it for myself' is awkward; 'I can remember my own name' is clearer. Sentence should be split for clarity.

× By the way, I want to say yes, I forget people's names always it's my problem and I understand it I won't try to fix it but I can't I don't know how.

✓ Yes, I do forget people's names often; it's my problem and I understand it. I want to try to fix it, but I don't know how.

Adverb 'always' was misplaced; 'often' or 'frequently' fits better in this context. Add auxiliary 'do' for emphasis in present simple: 'I do forget.' The long run-on sentence should be divided. Replace 'I won't try to fix it but I can't' which is contradictory, with a clearer intent 'I want to try to fix it, but I don't know how.'