Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, avoid fillers and grammar mistakes (use plural 'names' and correct articles). Add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, it's usually easy for me to remember people's names. For example, I often meet people through work and I pay attention when they introduce themselves, so their names stick with me.

提案: Correct grammar and be specific about your method. Use linking words (so, therefore, for example) and avoid contradictions ('don't have a technique' then describing one). Limit to 2–3 sentences and correct pronoun/capitalization errors.

例: I usually repeat the person's name several times during the first conversation, so it becomes familiar to me. For example, I might say, 'Nice to meet you, Anna,' and later ask, 'Anna, what line of work are you in?'

提案: Organize your response with a clear main sentence and one brief reason. Use linking words (however, although) and correct small errors ('a little disappointed', 'a bit impolite'). Be concise and avoid repetition.

例: I don't mind much if someone forgets my name; people are often busy. However, I feel a little disappointed because it can come across as slightly impolite.

提案: Give a direct answer, then provide a specific reason or example. Fix grammar (plural 'names') and avoid vague phrases like 'I don't know how.' Use linking words (because, for example) and keep to 2–3 sentences.

例: No, I don't often forget people's names because I make an effort to use them when I meet someone. For example, at networking events I repeat each name once or twice and write it down later, which helps me remember.

× Yeah, it is easy to remember people's name for me because it's not hard thing, it's just name like you know it's a piece of cake.

✓ Yeah, it is easy to remember people's names for me because it's not a hard thing; it's just a name, you know, it's a piece of cake.

Plural nouns must agree with the possessive 'people's'; use 'names' not 'name'. Also include articles 'a' before 'hard thing' and 'a' before 'name' for correct grammar. Suggestion: check noun plurality and include necessary articles.

× Actually I don't have a specific technique to remember people's name, but when I first meet someone I usually We use the name several times during the conversation.

✓ Actually I don't have a specific technique to remember people's names, but when I first meet someone I usually use the name several times during the conversation.

Remove the erroneous capitalized 'We' and change 'name' to plural 'names' to match 'people's'. The issue flagged as present participle because 'use' should be in base form after 'usually' (adverb + base verb), not 'We'. Suggestion: keep subject consistent and follow adverbs with base verbs (I usually use).

× Actually, I don't think it's a big deal if someone forgets my name because people are often busy and may forget my name, still I feel little disappointed because I think it seems impolite a little.

✓ Actually, I don't think it's a big deal if someone forgets my name because people are often busy and may forget names; still, I feel a little disappointed because I think it seems a bit impolite.

Change 'my name' in the general clause to plural or nonpossessive 'names' when speaking generally. Add articles 'a little' and 'a bit' for natural English. Use punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: use general nouns when speaking about people in general and add small modifiers like 'a' before 'little' or 'bit'.

× No, I do not forget people's name. I don't know how but I remember people's name and I think it's a good thing because most people forget names because they're too busy.

✓ No, I do not forget people's names. I don't know how, but I remember people's names and I think it's a good thing because most people forget names because they're too busy.

Use plural 'names' to agree with 'people's'. Also add a comma before 'but' to separate clauses. Suggestion: ensure possessive plural forms are used with 'people' (people's names).