Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and repetition. Also correct basic grammar (word order, plural/singular, tenses).

例: I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. However, I usually remember short or familiar names easily; for example, I recall my classmates' names because I see them every day. On the other hand, I often forget unusual or long names quickly.

提案: Give a clear method (strategy) and a brief example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and avoid repeating phrases. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and correct grammar (plural forms, articles).

例: I try to remember names by associating them with something familiar. For example, I link the name to a physical feature or a famous person, and I repeat the name in conversation. Because I see some people every day, repetition also helps me remember them.

提案: This answer is relatively coherent and includes contrast, but improve fluency and accuracy. Start with a clear main sentence, use a linking word for contrast, and use correct pronouns and verb forms. Reduce hesitation sounds to sound more natural.

例: I don't mind when strangers forget my name because it's not personal. However, if a close friend or family member forgets it, I feel hurt because it can seem careless and disrespectful.

提案: Provide a direct answer, then give clear reasons with specific details and correct grammar. Use linking words (because, but) and give one concrete example rather than vague phrases. Avoid unclear statements like 'different team.'

例: Yes, I often forget people's names because I rarely use them after the first meeting. I usually remember names only after meeting someone two or three times. For instance, I remember my colleague's names because I work with them daily, but I forget the names of people I meet once.

× No, I don't remember easily people's name.

✓ No, I don't easily remember people's names.

The adverb 'easily' should come before the main verb 'remember' (adverb placement). Also 'people's name' needs plural 'names' because it refers to names of many people (singular/plural issue). Move the adverb before the verb and pluralize 'name' to make the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× Uh, sometimes, uh, if people had a small name, then I remember them easily.

✓ Uh, sometimes, if people have a short name, then I remember it easily.

Use present tense 'have' to match the general statement (present tense issue) and 'short' is a better adjective than 'small' for names (word choice but treated here as adjective use). 'Name' refers to one name so 'it' is the correct pronoun rather than 'them'. Replace 'had' with 'have' and 'them' with 'it' to match singular 'name'.

× But if they have tough one, I, I forgot, I forget immediately.

✓ But if they have a difficult one, I forget it immediately.

This sentence mixes past and present tenses; use present tense 'forget' for a general habit (tense consistency). 'Tough' is not the best adjective for a name; 'difficult' or 'hard to remember' is clearer. Use 'it' to refer to the singular 'one'.

× Uh, once I people, if I meet people daily.

✓ Uh, I remember once I meet people daily.

Original fragment is ungrammatical and missing clear structure. Rewriting to 'I remember once I meet people daily' clarifies the intended meaning: repeated daily contact helps memory. Ensure subject-verb relationship is explicit and the sentence is complete.

× Uh, I usually remember people's name.

✓ Uh, I usually remember people's names.

'People's name' should be plural 'names' when referring to the names of multiple people. Use plural to match the plural possessive 'people's'.

× Uh, sometimes when they have a family familiar or small name, I, I easily remember their name if they have tough one.

✓ Sometimes, when they have a familiar or short name, I easily remember it; if they have a difficult one, I don't.

'Family familiar' is incorrect word order and collocation; use 'familiar' alone. Place 'easily' before the verb 'remember'. Ensure pronouns match singular 'name' with 'it'. Clarify contrast with a concise clause. Also 'tough' replaced by 'difficult'.

× So I don't, I forget them.

✓ So I don't; I forget it.

If referring to a single name, use 'it' rather than 'them'. Also combine into one clear sentence; use punctuation to separate ideas.

× I don't mind uh, when strangers can't remember my name because it is not personal.

✓ I don't mind when strangers can't remember my name because it's not personal.

This sentence is mostly correct; streamline by removing filler 'uh' and contracting 'it is' to 'it's' for natural speech. No major grammar change needed beyond removing disfluency.

× However, if a person close to me, uh, he forget my name then I feel very upset because it uh, it would seem careless or disturbing.

✓ However, if a person close to me forgets my name, I feel very upset because it seems careless or disrespectful.

Use 'forgets' (third person singular) for subject-verb agreement. Remove unnecessary pronoun 'he' unless specifying gender. Use 'seems' (present) rather than 'would seem' to match the immediate reaction. 'Disturbing' is not the best word here; 'disrespectful' or 'careless' fits better.

× Yes, mostly I forget people's name, uh, because I don't remember a person's name, uh, to whom I need more than two or three times, uh, because everyone have got different team.

✓ Yes, mostly I forget people's names because I don't remember a person's name unless I meet them more than two or three times, because everyone has a different routine/team.

Use 'names' for plural. Rephrase to 'unless I meet them more than two or three times' for clarity. Use 'has' (third person singular) instead of 'have' for 'everyone' (subject-verb agreement). 'Different team' is unclear; change to 'different routine' or 'different team' depending on intended meaning.

× But uh, if name is familiar, it remembers to me.

✓ But if a name is familiar, it sticks in my memory.

'It remembers to me' is incorrect because names do not 'remember'; the speaker remembers them. Use an idiomatic expression like 'it sticks in my memory' or 'I remember it'. Also include an article 'a' before 'name'.