Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 答えは直接的だが文法や語順の誤りが多く、発言が途中で終わっているため明瞭さが欠けます。改善点：1) 主語・動詞の一致や時制を正す（例："It is"→"It is/It has become"）。2) 文を簡潔にし、1文で主旨を述べる（最大5文）。3) 不完全な表現を避け、最後まで述べる（"ask people to..." の後に目的を続ける）。4) 接続表現を使って理由を補う（"because" の後に具体的理由）。具体練習：短く正確なトピックセンテンス＋理由を付ける。

例: It’s become difficult for me to remember people’s names. I often get confused, so I sometimes ask someone to repeat their name. This usually helps me remember it better.

提案: 回答は方法を述べようとしているが、語彙や文法の誤用があり、論理が繋がりにくいです。改善点：1) 動詞や名詞（"memo"→"note"/"make a note"）を正しく使う。2) 意図を明確にする（"check the start" の意味を具体化）。3) 接続語（"for example", "also"）で情報を整理する。4) 具体例や手順を短く述べる。

例: I usually make a note of the name on my phone right after I meet someone. I also try to link the name to a familiar face or to someone I already know with the same name, which helps me recall it later.

提案: 内容は明確で自然ですが、文法の小さなミスがあり、言い換えでより自然にできます。改善点：1) 冠詞や単数・複数の一致（"people's name"→"people's names"）を直す。2) 短い理由や感情の程度を加えると説得力が増す（"because" で説明）。3) 接続詞の使い方は適切だが簡潔にまとめる。

例: At first I’m not upset because I also forget people’s names sometimes. However, if someone repeatedly forgets my name, I feel hurt and a bit uncomfortable because it seems impersonal.

提案: 答えは肯定しており対策も述べているが、冗長で文法的な誤りが目立ちます。改善点：1) 繰り返しを避ける（同じ内容を二度述べない）。2) 正しい語句を使う（"memorize on my phone"→"save the name on my phone"）。3) 具体的にどのようにチェックするか短く述べる。

例: Yes, I often forget people’s names, especially recently. To cope, I save new names on my phone and review them later so I can remember them more easily.

× Now it is difficult for me to remember people's name because I often was confused remembering the name so I sometimes ask people to

✓ Now it is difficult for me to remember people's names because I am often confused when remembering names, so I sometimes ask people to repeat them.

'people's name' should be 'people's names' because 'people' is plural; use plural possessive. 'was confused' should be 'am often confused' to match present tense. Add 'when' before 'remembering' for clarity and 'repeat them' completes the sentence. Use consistent present tense for general habits.

× Sometimes I memo to my phone and I often check the start so I can't remember.

✓ Sometimes I make a note in my phone and I often check it later when I can't remember.

'memo to my phone' is not natural; use 'make a note in my phone'. 'check the start' is unclear; use 'check it later'. Add 'when' clause to show condition. Use base verb forms appropriately.

× In addition, I often imaginate other people who have the same name.

✓ In addition, I often imagine other people who have the same name.

'imaginate' is not a correct English verb; the correct verb is 'imagine'. This fixes the wrong adjective/adverb form and uses the correct verb form.

× At first, I don't feel sad because I also can't remember people's name.

✓ At first, I don't feel sad because I also can't remember people's names.

Again, 'people's name' should be 'people's names' because 'people' is plural and you mean names in general.

× But if they forgot my name again, I feel sad and uncomfortable.

✓ But if they forget my name again, I feel sad and uncomfortable.

Conditional sentence about a possible future event requires present simple 'forget' in the if-clause, not past 'forgot'. Keep main clause in present 'I feel' for general reaction.

× Yes, I often forget people's name especially for now it is difficult for me to remember the name so I often memorize the name on my phone until I check it.

✓ Yes, I often forget people's names. Especially now it is difficult for me to remember names, so I often save them on my phone and check them.

Use 'people's names' plural. Split into two sentences for clarity. 'memorize the name on my phone' is unnatural; use 'save them on my phone'. 'until I check it' should be 'and check them' to refer to plural 'names'.