Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar and fluency: use a clear topic sentence, avoid repetitions and fragments, and correct verb forms. Add a linking phrase to explain method. Be concise (max 3–4 sentences).

例: Yes, I find it quite easy to remember people's names because I have a strong visual memory. For example, I often link a name to a distinctive facial feature. Also, if someone mentions something about themselves, I use that detail to help me recall their name later.

提案: Organize steps clearly and correct sentence structure. Use linking words (first, then, finally) and give specific, short examples. Avoid unclear fragments and extraneous phrases.

例: When I meet someone new, I first repeat their name and use it in conversation so it sticks. Then I connect the name to someone I already know with the same name. Finally, if it's important, I quickly save the name in my phone so I don't forget it.

提案: Focus on producing a clear topic sentence about your feelings and give a brief reason. Fix grammar (use simple past/present correctly) and avoid repetition. Use a linking phrase to show understanding or reaction.

例: I feel a little embarrassed when people forget my name, but I understand because it can be difficult to pronounce. However, I usually laugh it off and gently repeat my name to help them remember.

提案: Answer directly and clearly: say yes or no, then briefly explain. Remove hesitations and repetitions. Provide one clear strategy you use to avoid forgetting names.

例: Not really — I generally remember names because I use visual associations. If I do forget, I try to prompt myself by recalling where I met them or by asking about a shared context, and then I use their name in conversation to reinforce it.

× Yes, I quite finding easy to remember people name.

✓ Yes, I find it quite easy to remember people's names.

The original uses the progressive form 'finding' incorrectly; after 'I' a simple present 'find' is appropriate to state a general ability. Also 'people name' needs plural possessive 'people's names'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual abilities and possessive + plural for names of multiple people.

× Yes, I quite finding easy to remember people name.

✓ Yes, I find it quite easy to remember people's names.

'people name' is singular but refers to names of multiple people; use plural 'names' and possessive 'people's'. Also adjust surrounding structure as above.

× Because I have sharp visual memory, I usually link a person's name to a distinctive feature of their face, or sometimes they told me which helped me to recall it later.

✓ Because I have a sharp visual memory, I usually link a person's name to a distinctive feature of their face, or sometimes they tell me, which helps me recall it later.

'sharp visual memory' needs indefinite article 'a'. 'told me' (past) conflicts with present habitual 'usually' and should be 'tell me'. 'helped' should be 'helps' to match present habitual tense. Also remove redundant 'to' in 'helps me recall'.

× Because I have sharp visual memory, I usually link a person's name to a distinctive feature of their face, or sometimes they told me which helped me to recall it later.

✓ Because I have a sharp visual memory, I usually link a person's name to a distinctive feature of their face, or sometimes they tell me, which helps me recall it later.

Missing article 'a' before 'sharp visual memory'. Use consistent present tense as this is a habitual action.

× Well, I usually try to repeat their name someone else when I first meet them and use it in a conversation because that helped me to remember it.

✓ Well, I usually try to repeat their name to someone else when I first meet them and use it in a conversation because that helps me remember it.

Missing preposition 'to' before 'someone else' (preposition error). 'helped' is past tense but the rest is present habitual; use 'helps'. Also omit 'to' before 'remember' when using 'helps me' + verb.

× Well, I usually try to repeat their name someone else when I first meet them and use it in a conversation because that helped me to remember it.

✓ Well, I usually try to repeat their name to someone else when I first meet them and use it in a conversation because that helps me remember it.

The phrase requires the preposition 'to' after 'repeat their name' to indicate the indirect object. Also adjust tense consistency to present.

× For example, if I meet Anna, I might say, notice, nice to see, nice to meet you Anna, and then think of the friends with the same name.

✓ For example, if I meet Anna, I might say, 'Nice to meet you, Anna,' and then think of friends with the same name.

Original includes fragmented spoken filler 'notice' and awkward punctuation. Use a clear quoted greeting, place the name after a comma, and simplify 'the friends' to 'friends' for naturalness. Ensure sentence flow.

× I also write names quickly on my phone. It's a group of people.

✓ I also quickly write names on my phone when meeting a group of people.

'It's a group of people' is disconnected and unclear. Combine into one sentence and place adverb 'quickly' before the verb for natural adverb placement. Clarify context: writing names when meeting a group.

× When I'm feeling so embarrassed if nobody and like if the people is not remembering my name, because I know my name is a little hard to remember and complex complex to pronounce.

✓ I feel embarrassed if nobody remembers my name, because I know my name is a little hard to remember and hard to pronounce.

Remove awkward conditional 'When I'm feeling so embarrassed if'. Use simple present 'nobody remembers' for general situations. 'the people is' is wrong: use 'nobody' or 'people' with correct verb. 'complex complex' is repetition; use 'hard to pronounce'.

× When I'm feeling so embarrassed if nobody and like if the people is not remembering my name, because I know my name is a little hard to remember and complex complex to pronounce.

✓ I feel embarrassed if nobody remembers my name, because I know my name is a little hard to remember and hard to pronounce.

'people is' is incorrect: plural 'people' takes 'are'. The corrected version avoids the agreement error by using 'nobody' with 'remembers'. Also use consistent simple present tense.

× So I understand that. But every time I meet somebody who didn't might remember I.

✓ So I understand. But if I meet someone who doesn't remember me, I am okay with it.

Original mixes negatives and modal verbs incorrectly ('didn't might remember I'). Use correct negative 'doesn't remember me' and a coherent follow-up clause. Place object pronoun 'me' after the verb.

× But every time I meet somebody who didn't might remember I.

✓ But if I meet someone who doesn't remember me, I am okay with it.

Pronoun position is wrong: 'remember I' should be 'remember me'. Also modal and tense errors; use simple present negative 'doesn't remember'.

× Yes, I I I as I earlier say, I I I'm I'm quite pers. I'm like, I quite find easy to remember person name as I have more visualized memory and I try to uh, I try to call their name again.

✓ Yes, as I said earlier, I find it quite easy to remember people's names because I have a strong visual memory, and I try to call them by their name again.

Remove repeated fillers and hesitations. 'as I earlier say' should be 'as I said earlier' (past reference). 'person name' should be 'people's names' (plural possessive). 'more visualized memory' is unnatural; use 'strong visual memory'. Simplify 'try to call their name again' to 'call them by their name again'.

× Yes, I I I as I earlier say, I I I'm I'm quite pers. I'm like, I quite find easy to remember person name as I have more visualized memory and I try to uh, I try to call their name again.

✓ Yes, as I said earlier, I find it quite easy to remember people's names because I have a strong visual memory, and I try to call them by their name again.

Use 'said' (past) when referencing a previous comment. Ensure tense consistency: general abilities use simple present 'find'.