Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğrudan, ancak dilbilgisi ve akıcılık sorunları var. "Personally speaking" yerine daha doğal ifadeler kullanabilir ve gereksiz kelime tekrarlarından kaçınmalısınız. Ayrıca cümlenin yapısını basitleştirip bir ana fikir cümlesi ve kısa destekleyici detay ekleyin. Örneğin: neden kolay olduğunu bir örnekle açıklayın ve bağlaç kullanın.

例: Yes, I find it quite easy to remember names because I often use visual cues, such as associating a person's face with a distinctive feature. For instance, I remember my colleague Sarah because she always wears bright scarves.

提案: Cevap belirsiz ve bazı ifadeler yanlış kullanılmış ("keep it to myself", "a people"). Daha açık bir yöntem açıklayın ve adım adım anlatın. Bağlaçlarla mantığı netleştirin ve somut örnek verin.

例: I usually use association techniques: first I link a new name to a visual image or a hobby, and then I repeat the name mentally a few times. For example, I memorized Tom by imagining him holding a guitar because he mentioned he plays music.

提案: Duyguyu ifade etme doğru ama cümle yapısı ve dilbilgisi bozuk. Duyguyu net bir ana cümleyle ifade edin ve ardından neden böyle hissettiğinizi kısa bir gerekçeyle açıklayın. Zararlı ifadelerden kaçının ve uygun bağlaçlar kullanın.

例: I feel a little disappointed if someone forgets my name, but I understand because many people struggle with names. So I usually politely remind them and move on.

提案: Kısa ve net cevap iyi, ancak destekleyici bir neden veya örnek eklemek konuşmayı zenginleştirir. Bir bağlaç kullanarak neden unutmadığınızı açıklayın (ör. tekrar etme, not alma).

例: Not usually; I rarely forget names because I repeat them after meeting someone and sometimes write them down in my phone for reference.

× Personally speaking, yes it is for me because I'm good at remembering something like anything, and so it is easy to me recall people's names.

✓ Personally speaking, yes it is for me because I'm good at remembering things, so it is easy for me to recall people's names.

The preposition usage is incorrect: 'easy to me' should be 'easy for me' and 'remembering something like anything' is ungrammatical; use 'remembering things'. Also add 'to' before 'recall'. Use clearer noun plural 'things' for general items.

× I have a good memory so I can keep it to myself and when I see a people I can recognize their name.

✓ I have a good memory, so I can remember names, and when I see a person I can recognize their name.

'Keep it to myself' is odd here; better 'remember names'. 'A people' is incorrect: use 'a person'. Use comma before 'so' for clarity. 'Their' is acceptable as singular gender-neutral pronoun.

× It might be feel me bad but I wouldn't mind it's much because not everyone's memorize is good.

✓ It might make me feel bad, but I wouldn't mind much because not everyone's memory is good.

'Might be feel me bad' is ungrammatical; use 'might make me feel bad'. 'It's much' is incorrect; use 'wouldn't mind much'. 'Not everyone's memorize is good' uses wrong word and form: use noun 'memory' rather than verb 'memorize'.

× Mainly, I don't forget people's names.

✓ Mainly, I don't forget people's names.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It properly uses present tense to answer the question about frequency.