Name— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 발음·어휘 선택에 오류가 있어 의미 전달이 불명확합니다. 먼저 간단한 주제문으로 직접 답한 뒤, 이유와 감정을 구체적으로 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 반복을 줄이고 문법(예: "quite"와 "quiet", 시제·관사)을 바로잡아야 합니다. 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 논리적으로 이어가세요.

例: It's not easy for me to remember people's names. I often forget both their faces and names because I meet many people at work, so I sometimes worry it might seem rude.

提案: 답변이 직접적이지만 구문과 표현이 어색합니다. 먼저 방법을 간단히 제시한 뒤, 구체적 전략(연상법, 반복, 메모 등)을 하나나 두 개 예로 들어 보세요. 또한 성별 표현 대신 중성 표현을 쓰고, 'literally'는 이 상황에서 적절치 않습니다. 연결어(such as, for example)를 사용해 구조를 명확히 하세요.

例: I don't use any special techniques usually, but if I really like someone I tend to repeat their name several times. For example, I might say, "Nice to meet you, Anna," and use her name again in conversation to help me remember.

提案: 표현이 중복되고 어색한 부분(예: "I'm I feel")을 고쳐야 합니다. 감정 표현을 더 자연스럽게 하고 이유를 덧붙여 구체성을 높이세요. 연결어(although, but, so)를 사용해 문장 흐름을 매끄럽게 만드세요.

例: If someone forgets my name, I usually feel a bit disappointed at first, but I try to be understanding because people meet many others and it can be hard to remember everyone.

提案: 문장에 발음·철자 실수와 불명확한 표현(예: "quiet Oprah")이 있어 내용이 혼란스럽습니다. 먼저 빈도를 직접적으로 말하고, 구체적인 방법(외모·특징·별명과 연관짓기 등)을 하나 제시하세요. 연결어(so, therefore)를 사용해 이유를 명확히 하고, 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 제한하세요.

例: Yes, I often forget people's names, so I try to link a name to a distinctive trait, such as "John with the glasses," which makes it easier to recall later.

× Not that quiet easy, I usually forget their faces and names.

✓ Not that quite easy; I usually forget their faces and names.

The student used 'quiet' (an adjective) instead of the adverb 'quite' to modify 'easy'. Use 'quite' to mean 'fairly' before an adjective. Also replace the comma with a semicolon or a conjunction to join two independent clauses: 'Not that quite easy; I usually forget...' or 'It's not that quite easy, because I usually...'. Suggestion: replace 'quiet' with 'quite' and connect clauses properly.

× I don't know the reasons but I'm worried it could be quite rude.

✓ I don't know the reason, but I'm worried it could be quite rude.

Use the singular 'reason' instead of the plural 'reasons' when referring generally to the cause of a single situation. Also add a comma before 'but' joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'reason' and include proper punctuation.

× I don't do special things for remembering their names, but if I like him or her then I call their names a lot and literally just remember.

✓ I don't do anything special to remember their names, but if I like someone I say their name a lot and literally remember it.

The sentence uses awkward verb forms: use 'to remember' (infinitive) instead of 'for remembering'. Replace 'him or her' with 'someone' for naturalness and use 'say their name' rather than 'call their names' when meeting people. Ensure pronoun consistency: 'it' refers to the name. Suggestion: use 'to remember' and more natural phrases like 'say their name a lot'.

× Sometimes I'm I feel sorry for them after they can't remember my name, but normally I try to understand their situations.

✓ Sometimes I feel sorry for them when they can't remember my name, but normally I try to understand their situation.

Remove the extra 'I'm'. Use 'when' rather than 'after' to indicate the time of the feeling. Use singular 'situation' or 'their situation' to refer collectively; 'situations' sounds odd here. Suggestion: delete the extra word and use 'when' and 'situation'.

× That helps me a lot to understand people.

✓ That helps me a lot to understand people.

No grammatical correction required; sentence is acceptable. No change needed.

× Yes, I quiet Oprah forget their names.

✓ Yes, I quite often forget their names.

'Quiet' should be 'quite' (adverb). 'Oprah' is incorrect; likely meant 'often'. Place adverb 'quite often' before the verb. Suggestion: use 'quite often' to express frequency.