Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子结构混乱，时态与语法错误较多，信息重复且不够连贯。需要先用一句话直接回答问题，再用1–2句补充原因或未来计划，注意主谓一致、时态和连贯性，避免重复单词（如“develop. Game.”）。可练习用简单清晰的句子表达专业和职业目标并加上连接词如 because 或 so that。

例: I am currently a student at Macao Polytechnic University, majoring in Computer Science. I chose this major because I enjoy programming and want to learn how software systems are built. In the future, I hope to work in a software development team, possibly focusing on game development.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法（如haven't work/I'm current students）和句子衔接错误较多。应先直接回答（I don't work yet.），然后用一至两句说明选择学校的原因，使用连词（because，so）并把从句组织完整。注意动词形式和名词单复数。

例: I don't work at the moment; I am a student in Macao. I chose Macao Polytechnic University because it offers many classes taught in English, which helps me improve my English skills.

提案: 总体意思能理解，但句子碎片多，信息重复且部分词汇使用不当（student is an activity / Commutating）。建议先给出明确评价，然后用两到三句具体举例说明（teachers, atmosphere, activities），用连词连接观点，避免不完整的短句。

例: Yes, it is a good place to study and work. Although the campus is small, it has a strong academic atmosphere and professional, patient teachers. The university also organizes many student activities that help us learn and build teamwork skills.

提案: 回答表达积极，但语法和句子连接问题影响流畅性。建议先明确回答，然后用一两句具体说明带来的好处（confidence, problem-solving skills, employability），使用because或which 引导的完整从句，合并短碎句以增强连贯性。

例: Yes, I like it very much. Since I started studying here, I have become more confident and developed problem-solving skills. These skills will help me adapt to future challenges and improve my chances of finding a job.

提案: 内容表达不清且重复，句式断裂和语法错误较多。建议先直接说明是否有明确计划，然后列出可能的方向并用连接词（for example, or, and）说明原因或准备做的事。避免重复词汇，句子控制在最多三到四句内。

例: To be honest, I don't have a definite plan yet. I might work in a software development team, possibly focusing on game development. I am also interested in studying finance so I could consider a role in the financial sector as an alternative.

× I am cur students. At Macao Polytechnic University and I am majoring in Computer Science.

✓ I am a current student at Macao Polytechnic University, and I am majoring in Computer Science.

句子结构不完整且名词单复数错误。应使用单数 'student' 并在句子中合并短片段，使用冠词 'a'，将 'current' 放在 student 前，并将地点短语与主句连成完整句。建议把碎片句合并为主从句以保持语法完整性。

× I choose this subject because I have patience for computer software.

✓ I chose this subject because I have a passion for computer software.

原句中 'choose' 时态与语境不符（应为过去时），并且 'patience for' 用法不当，通常应为 'passion for'（对…的热情）。建议使用过去式 'chose' 表示选择的动作已发生，且将 'patience' 改为 'a passion'。

× In the future, I want to work in software department to develop. Game.

✓ In the future, I want to work in a software department to develop games.

句子被不恰当地分成碎片且缺少冠词与名词复数。应使用 'a software department' 和复数 'games'，并将分散的短句合并为完整句。

× I haven't work yet.

✓ I haven't worked yet.

使用现在完成时态时，助动词 'have' 后需接过去分词 'worked'，不能用原形动词 'work'。建议掌握现在完成时的结构 'have/has + past participle'。

× I'm current students in Macao.

✓ I'm currently a student in Macao.

'current' 需要用副词形式 'currently' 修饰系表结构，且 'students' 与主语不一致，应为单数 'a student'。建议使用 'I'm currently a student in Macao'。

× The reason why I choose this place so is that. This university. Offering a lot of. Class tough in. English, this can help me improve my English skill.

✓ The reason why I chose this place is that this university offers a lot of classes taught in English; this can help me improve my English skills.

存在时态错误（应为过去式 'chose'）、碎片句与动词形式不正确（'offering' 应改为 'offers'），以及名词复数与搭配问题（'class tough in English' 应为 'classes taught in English'，'skill' 改为复数 'skills'）。建议把分散片段合并为完整句并注意主谓一致。

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Is it a good place to work?

该句无语法错误。保持原句即可。

× Yes, although the school is small, it has a great academic atmosphere.

✓ Yes, although the school is small, it has a great academic atmosphere.

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× The teacher is professional and patient.

✓ The teachers are professional and patient.

如果指代学校中多名教师，应使用复数 'teachers' 与复数谓语保持一致。若指单一教师则需 'The teacher is...'; 根据上下文应为多名教师，故改为复数。建议注意单复数一致。

× And student is an activity that they often organize a lot of activities. To let us study. Commutating. And.

✓ The student association is active; they often organize many activities to help us study and communicate.

原句严重碎片化且词汇使用错误（'student is an activity'、'commutating'），应使用 'student association' 或 'students are active'，并用 'communicate' 表达交流。建议合并短句并使用正确名词和动词形式。

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you study?

问题与上下文不符：学生并未工作而是在学习，应将 'work' 改为 'study'。此外，疑问句常用 'Do you like...' 来询问喜好。建议根据语境选择合适动词。

× Of course I do. I feel better and better since I came to the school.

✓ Of course I do. I have felt better and better since I came to the school.

描述从过去某时持续到现在的状态，常用现在完成时 'have felt'，而 'since I came' 表示动作起点。建议使用现在完成时表示持续影响。

× Through the study in here. I feel more confidence.

✓ Through studying here, I feel more confident.

'study in here' 用法不自然，应改为动名词短语 'studying here'；'confidence' 是名词，需改为形容词 'confident' 来描述感觉。建议使用 'feel confident'。

× And there are a lot of skills. To solve problems which can adapt me, make me adapt the future. And let me find job.

✓ And I have learned many skills to solve problems, which help me adapt to the future and find a job.

原句有结构混乱和不正确的动词搭配（'which can adapt me' 应为 'which help me adapt'，并且需加介词 'to'：'adapt to the future'），名词 'job' 前缺冠词 'a job'。建议使用完整从句并注意动词搭配与介词。

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

该句语法正确，无需修改。

× To be honest. I haven't had a clear plan yet.

✓ To be honest, I haven't had a clear plan yet.

原句为断裂的短句，建议将两部分合并成一个完整句，使用逗号连接并保持现在完成时 'haven't had'。

× Maybe I will work in a software department to develop. Develop. Game.

✓ Maybe I will work in a software department to develop games.

句子被重复断开并缺少复数 'games'。保持不定式 'to develop' 后接复数名词 'games'，并删除多余重复词。建议合并为完整句。

× Or? I will also learn some knowledge about finance to find a finance job like.

✓ Or I will also learn about finance to find a job in finance.

句子中有多余问号和不完整短语（'a finance job like' 不完整）。应去掉问号，使用 'learn about finance' 或 'study finance'，并用 'a job in finance' 表达目标职业。建议把句子补完整并使用自然搭配。