Work— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应直接回答问题，避免语法错误，并且表达要完整清晰。比如“I'm a teacher at a junior high school, teaching home economics.”同时避免不完整或含糊的句子。

例: I am currently working as a home economics teacher at a junior high school.

提案: 回答应使用正确时态，表达清晰，避免语法错误和不连贯。应直接说明工作地点，并简要说明其特点。

例: I work at a school located in Dimestore, New Taipei City, which is a very historical area because our country was colonized in the past.

提案: 回答较好，但应注意语法和表达的流畅性。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，如“because the natural scenery is beautiful, so I can relax by the river or seaside after work.”

例: Yes, I think it is a great place to work because the natural scenery is beautiful, so I can relax by the river or seaside after work.

提案: 回答应避免断断续续，表达完整。可以说“I don't really like my workplace because some people there are a bit selfish and don't consider others.”

例: I don't really like my workplace because some people there are a bit selfish and don't consider others.

提案: 回答应更连贯，语法正确。可以说“I plan to teach at a senior high school in the future because I find junior high students a bit difficult to manage.”

例: I plan to teach at a senior high school in the future because I find junior high students a bit difficult to manage.

× I'm earn teacher in junior high school.

✓ I'm a teacher in junior high school.

这里动词 'earn' 用错了，应该用名词 'teacher' 来表示职业。动词和名词的混用是错误的。

× The student nowaday is really.

✓ The students nowadays are really...

'student' 应该用复数形式 'students'，因为指的是一群学生。'nowaday' 拼写错误，正确为 'nowadays'。此外，句子不完整，需要补充内容。

× I worked in a school.

✓ I work in a school.

根据上下文，学生现在仍在工作，应该用现在时 'work'，而不是过去时 'worked'。

× The school is located at Dimestore in New Taipei City.

✓ The school is located in Dimestore in New Taipei City.

表示地点时，'located' 后应使用介词 'in' 而不是 'at'。

× Do you know dance way, I'm sorry is a very historical place, because we are our country was colonized by spent by nearly.

✓ Do you know Danshui? I'm sorry, it is a very historical place because our country was colonized by Spain for nearly...

句子结构混乱，缺少标点和连贯性。'dance way' 应为 'Danshui'，'spent' 应为 'Spain'。需要分句并调整语序。

× because we are our country was colonized by spent by nearly.

✓ because our country was colonized by Spain for nearly...

'we are' 多余且错误，应该直接说 'our country was colonized'。

× the nature, scenery, they're very comfortable so that I can go to the river or the sea seaside after my work.

✓ The natural scenery is very comfortable, so I can go to the river or the seaside after work.

'nature, scenery' 应合并为 'natural scenery'，'they're' 指代不清且用词不当，应改为单数。'sea seaside' 重复，应简化为 'seaside'。

× Because I think the people there is a little bit too.

✓ Because I think the people there are a little bit too selfish.

'people' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。

× They can. They can consider each other.

✓ They cannot consider each other.

句子断裂且意思不清，应该合并并表达否定含义。

× Actually, I'm going to. Attend to Senior High School as a teacher in the future because now I'm in a junior high school but I think the students in Tales to 15 is a little bit too uncontrolled.

✓ Actually, I'm going to attend Senior High School as a teacher in the future because now I'm in a junior high school, but I think the students aged 13 to 15 are a little bit too uncontrolled.

'going to' 后不应断句，'attend to' 应为 'attend'，'Tales to 15' 应为 'aged 13 to 15'，'students' 是复数，谓语动词应用复数 'are'。