Plants— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Ответ в целом понятен и содержит прямой ответ и причину, но есть несколько проблем. Используйте существительное "plants", а не "plans". Фраза "And so and can't forget to water them" грамматически неверна и нелогична; лучше сказать "so I often forget to water them". Также избегайте лишнего "And" и сформулируйте ответ более естественно: сначала ответ, затем причина и конкретный пример.

Ejemplo: I don’t keep many plants at home because I’m usually very busy and often forget to water them. I spend a lot of time running errands, so I can’t take good care of plants. I only have one cactus because it doesn’t need much water.

Sugerencia: Ответ трудно понять из-за неполной структуры, повторов и ошибок во времени и порядке слов. Начните с чёткого предложения, например: "When I was young, my father gave me a rose." Используйте прошедшее время: "It bloomed beautifully" и "something went wrong". Завершите мысль и добавьте результат, например, что растение завяло или погибло. Не повторяйте "it was" и избегайте незаконченного предложения.

Ejemplo: When I was young, my father gave me a small rose plant. It had beautiful red flowers and bloomed very well at first. Unfortunately, something went wrong after a few days, and the rose eventually died.

Sugerencia: Вы дали прямой ответ, но грамматика и формулировки требуют исправления. Вместо "Actually not" скажите "Actually, not really" или "No, not really". Фраза "I was growing in a city" должна быть "I grew up in a city", а "grow in a plant" — "grow plants". Добавьте конкретную причину или небольшой контраст, чтобы ответ был более содержательным.

Ejemplo: Actually, not really. I grew up in a city, so I never had a garden or much experience with plants. I only know that they need enough sunlight, water, and suitable soil.

Sugerencia: Ответ выражает мнение и содержит сравнение с цветами, что соответствует вопросу, но структура предложения неестественная. Начните с ясного ответа: "Yes, I think some Chinese people do." Используйте правильные формы: "a more practical gift" и "flowers that will die after a few days". Уберите лишние союзы "But" и "And", а также добавьте конкретный пример растения, например суккулент или орхидею.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think some Chinese people do send plants as gifts. A plant can be a more practical and longer-lasting present than a bouquet of flowers, which may die after a few days. For example, people might give a succulent or an orchid for a birthday or housewarming.

× Unfortunately not so many plans at home because I'm very busy and I'm always running errands And so and can't forget to water them. That's why I have just one cactus.

✓ Unfortunately, I don't have many plants at home because I'm very busy and always running errands, so I often forget to water them. That's why I have only one cactus.

The word plans should be plants. Because you are talking about more than one plant, the plural form plants is required. Also, I often forget expresses the intended meaning more clearly than I can't forget.

× Unfortunately not so many plans at home because I'm very busy and I'm always running errands And so and can't forget to water them.

✓ Unfortunately, I don't have many plants at home because I'm very busy and always running errands, so I often forget to water them.

The original sentence contains unnecessary conjunctions and an incomplete structure. Use because to give the reason and so to show the result. The sentence should have a clear subject and verb: I don't have many plants.

× When I was younger, my father some day And gave me a gift that was red with a rose it was It was blooming so beautiful, but in a few days unfortunately something goes wrong and it's

✓ When I was younger, my father gave me a red rose one day. It was blooming beautifully, but after a few days, unfortunately, something went wrong and it died.

The story is about a completed event in the past, so go must be changed to went. The past-tense verb went agrees with the past-time expression after a few days.

× It was blooming so beautiful.

✓ It was blooming so beautifully.

Beautiful describes a noun, but blooming is a verb. An adverb is needed to describe how the rose was blooming, so beautifully is correct.

× When I was younger, my father some day And gave me a gift that was red with a rose it was It was blooming so beautiful, but in a few days unfortunately something goes wrong and it's

✓ When I was younger, my father gave me a red rose one day. It was blooming beautifully, but after a few days, unfortunately, something went wrong and it died.

The original response contains repeated words, unnecessary conjunctions, and an unfinished clause. Divide the ideas into complete sentences and give each clause a clear subject and verb.

× Actually not But I was growing in in a city and have no idea how to grow in a plant.

✓ Actually, no. I grew up in a city, so I have no idea how to grow a plant.

I was growing does not correctly express the general experience of being raised in a city. Use the past-tense expression I grew up. The present-tense phrase I have no idea is appropriate because this remains true now.

× I was growing in in a city and have no idea how to grow in a plant.

✓ I grew up in a city, so I have no idea how to grow a plant.

Use in only once before a city. The verb grow can take a direct object when referring to cultivating something, so say grow a plant, not grow in a plant.

× Actually not But I was growing in in a city and have no idea how to grow in a plant.

✓ Actually, no. I grew up in a city, so I have no idea how to grow a plant.

The original answer begins with disconnected words and uses but incorrectly. Use the complete response Actually, no, followed by a clear sentence explaining your lack of experience.

× I guess why not But And maybe they think that it's more practical thing and instead of just giving flowers that in a few days will gone.

✓ I guess so. Maybe they think it is more practical than just giving flowers that will be gone in a few days.

But and and are used unnecessarily and create an unclear connection between the ideas. Use two clear sentences, or connect the ideas with so. The comparison should use more practical than, not more practical and instead of.

× Maybe they think that it's more practical thing and instead of just giving flowers

✓ Maybe they think it is more practical than just giving flowers.

The phrase more practical thing needs an article if thing is retained: a more practical thing. However, the natural sentence uses the adjective practical directly, so no article is needed before it.

× Flowers that in a few days will gone.

✓ Flowers that will be gone in a few days.

After the future modal will, use the base form be. Gone is a past participle, so the correct structure is will be gone.

× Flowers that in a few days will gone.

✓ Flowers that will be gone in a few days.

The future structure requires will + base verb. Because gone cannot follow will directly, add be: will be gone.