Plants— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers, then give one or two brief supporting reasons using linking words. Correct verb forms and avoid repetition (e.g., "for me" twice).

Ejemplo: No, I don't keep plants at home. I find gardening difficult because I rarely manage to keep plants alive, though my father is very good at it. Therefore I prefer to leave plant care to him.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the plant and one or two specific details about the experience. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., "bean sprouts" or "green beans", "didn't need soil"). Avoid unclear phrases like "bean juice."

Ejemplo: When I was young I grew green beans. I sprouted them on a wet tissue instead of soil, which was exciting because the beans quickly produced shoots and I could watch the roots and stems develop in just a few days.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize the response: give a general statement and then one clear example. Use correct grammar ("plants have different ways to grow") and linking words (e.g., "for example"). Finish complete sentences and avoid trailing off.

Ejemplo: I know a little about growing plants: different species need different methods. For example, many vegetables and flowers are grown from seeds, while some plants are propagated from cuttings or bulbs, so the technique depends on the plant.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more accurate. Start with a direct answer, then give a specific example with correct nouns and grammar. Avoid filler words ("hmm") and unclear phrases ("board some lucky plan"). Use linking words like "for example" and be specific about occasions and plant types.

Ejemplo: Yes, many Chinese people give plants as gifts, especially at New Year. For example, my father's Chinese friend gives him lucky plants like small potted money trees or lucky bamboo every Lunar New Year.

× For me, planting is really hard for me, I never plant something successful.

✓ For me, planting is really hard; I never plant anything successfully.

Using 'for me' twice is repetitive and 'something successful' is unidiomatic. Replace the second 'for me' with a semicolon to connect clauses and use 'anything' as the correct pronoun and 'successfully' (an adverb) to modify the verb 'plant'. Suggestion: Avoid repeating phrases and use appropriate pronouns and adverbs to describe actions.

× But my dad really love planting so he plant everything very well.

✓ But my dad really loves planting, so he plants everything very well.

When the subject is third-person singular ('my dad') the verbs require an -s ending in the simple present. Add 's' to 'love' and 'plant'. Also add a comma before 'so' linking two independent clauses. Suggestion: Remember to add -s for he/she/it in present simple.

× What plant did you grow when you were young?

✓ What plants did you grow when you were young?

The question uses past tense correctly with 'did', but 'plant' should be plural or specific. Use 'plants' to ask generally about multiple kinds. No tense change needed. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when asking about types or multiple items.

× I planted the green bean to go up to the bean juice and that time really excited for me because I don't need the soil I just need the tissue or cotton with water to plant them.

✓ I planted green beans to get bean sprouts, and that time was very exciting for me because I didn't need soil; I just used tissue or cotton with water to grow them.

Several issues: 'the green bean' should be plural 'green beans' when speaking generally; 'to go up to the bean juice' is unclear and likely means 'to get bean sprouts'; 'that time really excited for me' needs a past-tense verb 'was' and an adjective 'exciting'; 'I don't need the soil' should be past 'I didn't need soil' to match past context; 'to plant them' is better as 'to grow them'. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent (past) and use appropriate nouns and verbs for clarity.

× Do you know anything about growing a plant?

✓ Do you know anything about growing plants?

Sentence is mostly fine, but 'a plant' sounds singular when asking generally. Use plural 'plants' to ask about general knowledge. No modal change needed. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general questions.

× I know just every plant they have different way to plan.

✓ I only know that every plant has a different way to be planted.

Original has incorrect word order and pronoun use: 'just' should be 'only'; 'they' is unnecessary and causes a mismatch with 'every plant' (singular); 'way to plan' should be 'way to be planted' or 'way of planting'. Suggestion: Use 'every' with singular verbs and structure as 'every X has a different way to...'.

× For example the flower that have seed or the food that have seed you will plant them by seed but the.

✓ For example, flowers that have seeds or food plants that have seeds are planted from seeds.

Errors: 'the flower' and 'the food' are awkward—use plural 'flowers' and 'food plants'; 'have seed' should be 'have seeds'; 'you will plant them by seed' is unidiomatic—use 'are planted from seeds'. The sentence was also unfinished; corrected to a complete statement. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and idiomatic phrasing 'planted from seeds'.

× Yes I think so because hmm my dad friend is from Chinese so every New Year's Day he will board some lucky plan for my dad like lucky 3.

✓ Yes, I think so because my dad's friend is Chinese, so every New Year's Day he gives my dad some lucky plants, like lucky bamboo.

Multiple issues: 'my dad friend' needs the possessive 'my dad's friend'; 'is from Chinese' is incorrect — use 'is Chinese'; 'will board some lucky plan' is meaningless—likely 'gives some lucky plants'; 'lucky 3' is unclear—probably 'lucky bamboo'. Adjusted to natural English and corrected possessive, nationality, and verb choice. Suggestion: Use possessive forms, correct nationality adjectives, and clear vocabulary for gifts.