Friends— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayıp geçmişte ve şimdi buluştuğunuz yerleri karşılaştırın. “Different person” yerine “different places” kullanın; arkadaşlarınızın kişilikleriyle ilgili kısmı kısa ve anlaşılır biçimde açıklayın. Aynı fikri tekrarlamayın.

Ejemplo: Yes, there is a difference. I used to meet my friends at school, but now we usually go to cafés. I still choose friends with similar personalities because we understand each other well.

Sugerencia: Önce bazı yerlerin neden uygun olduğunu açıklayın; ardından kendi tercihinizden tek bir örnek verin. “Every people” yerine “everyone” veya “different people” kullanın. “Noisy streets” gibi yerlerin neden uygun olmadığını da belirtin ve cümleyi tamamlayın.

Ejemplo: Some places are suitable because they are comfortable and easy to reach. I prefer a central café where my friends and I can sit and talk. Noisy streets or crowded markets are less suitable because it can be difficult to hear each other.

Sugerencia: Tercihinizi ilk cümlede net ifade edin ve “I prefer spending time…” yapısını kullanın. Tek bir arkadaş mı yoksa bir grup mu kastettiğinizi tutarlı biçimde belirtin. Kahve dükkânı örneğini bir kez verin; tekrarları ve “I think” gibi gereksiz ifadeleri çıkarın.

Ejemplo: I prefer spending time with one or two close friends because it’s easier to have a proper conversation. We often go to a café, where we chat and enjoy a few hours together.

Sugerencia: Yanıtınız anlaşılır ve gerekçeniz uygun. “Invite my friends my home” yerine “invite my friends to my home” deyin. Başlangıçtaki “And” kelimesini çıkarıp evinizin arkadaşlarınız için neden rahat olduğunu biraz daha doğal ifade edin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home. It’s spacious and comfortable, so we can relax and talk privately.

Sugerencia: “France” yerine muhtemelen “friends” demek istiyorsunuz; kelime telaffuzuna dikkat edin. Soruyu tam bir cümleyle yanıtlayın ve arkadaşlarınızın sizin için neden önemli olduğunu kısa bir gerekçeyle açıklayın. Aile ve arkadaşları karşılaştırırken dilbilgisel olarak tamamlanmış cümleler kullanın.

Ejemplo: Friends are very important to me, although my family comes first. My close friends support me and make difficult days more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Sıklığı belirtmeniz iyi, ancak “I going out” yerine “I go out” kullanın. Sinema ve kafeye gitme örneklerini bağlaçlarla düzenleyin; “go at coffee shops” yerine “go to cafés” deyin. Geçmiş zaman yerine düzenli yaptığınız bir etkinlik için geniş zaman kullanın.

Ejemplo: Yes, I go out with my friends every week. We sometimes go to the cinema, but we usually meet at a café on Saturdays. Spending time with them helps me feel relaxed.

Sugerencia: Buluşma yerini doğrudan söyleyin: “near my school” veya “at a café near my school.” “In near” ve “there are a coffee shop” ifadelerini düzeltin. “Everyone is here” gibi belirsiz bir ifade yerine mekânın neden uygun olduğunu açıklayın; yarınla ilgili örneği doğru zaman yapısıyla verin.

Ejemplo: We usually meet at a café near my school because it’s convenient for everyone. It’s a pleasant place to talk, and we’re planning to go there again tomorrow.

Sugerencia: Etkinliği net biçimde anlatın: “go to coffee shops” ve “it helps us” yapılarını kullanın. Aynı kahve dükkânı fikrini tekrarlamayın; arkadaşlarınızla orada ne yaptığınızı somut bir ayrıntıyla ekleyin.

Ejemplo: I usually go to cafés with my friends. We chat over coffee and catch up on what’s been happening in our lives. We have a favourite café that we visit often.

Sugerencia: Yanıtınız yarım kaldığı için soruya tam cevap vermiyor. “Secondary friends” yerine, eğer okul arkadaşlarınızı kastediyorsanız “a friend from secondary school” deyin. Bu kişiyi ne zamandır tanıdığınızı ve hâlâ görüşüp görüşmediğinizi ekleyin.

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a friend I’ve known since secondary school. We’ve been friends for several years, and we still meet whenever we have time.

× They are different person but similar personally because I choose my friends similar personally because I can't can understand this type of personality too much.

✓ They are different people but have similar personalities because I choose friends with similar personalities. I can't understand this type of personality very well.

People is the plural form of person. Use people when referring to more than one person. Personalities is also plural because the sentence refers to multiple people and their personalities.

× They are different person but similar personally because I choose my friends similar personally because I can't can understand this type of personality too much.

✓ They are different people but have similar personalities because I choose friends with similar personalities. I can't understand this type of personality very well.

Can't and can are both modal forms and cannot be used together in this way. Use can't understand to express inability.

× I think the main reason every people prefer another place.

✓ I think the main reason is that everyone prefers a different place.

Every is used with a singular countable noun, as in every person. Alternatively, use everyone. Everyone is grammatically singular, so it takes prefers, not prefer.

× I think the main reason every people prefer another place.

✓ I think the main reason is that everyone prefers a different place.

The original sentence is missing a linking verb and a clause marker after the subject phrase. Use is that to introduce the explanation of the main reason.

× For example, I prefer central location and sit and talk have a conversation we have in a comfortable place but not so quiet but some people prefer nosy streets, crowded markets and not easy to get

✓ For example, I prefer a central location where we can sit and talk in a comfortable place that is not too quiet. Some people prefer noisy streets or crowded markets, which are not easy to get to.

Central location is a singular countable noun phrase, so it needs an article. Use a before central location.

× For example, I prefer central location and sit and talk have a conversation we have in a comfortable place but not so quiet but some people prefer nosy streets, crowded markets and not easy to get

✓ For example, I prefer a central location where we can sit and talk in a comfortable place that is not too quiet. Some people prefer noisy streets or crowded markets, which are not easy to get to.

The original combines several ideas without clear clause boundaries, making the sentence difficult to follow. Separate the contrasting ideas into complete sentences and use where to connect the place with the activity.

× I prefer I spending time with my close friend, my best friends.

✓ I prefer spending time with my close friends, especially my best friends.

After prefer, use a gerund, such as spending, or a to-infinitive. Do not put I directly before the gerund in this sentence.

× For example, we go out for a coffee shop and it's so enjoyable I think we sit in a coffee shop and we spend a few hours chating chating, chatting

✓ For example, we go to a coffee shop, and it's very enjoyable. We sit in a coffee shop and spend a few hours chatting.

Use go to when naming a destination. For example, go to a coffee shop. Go out for is not the correct preposition pattern for this meaning.

× For example, we go out for a coffee shop and it's so enjoyable I think we sit in a coffee shop and we spend a few hours chating chating, chatting

✓ For example, we go to a coffee shop, and it's very enjoyable. We sit in a coffee shop and spend a few hours chatting.

The original joins several independent ideas without clear punctuation or clause connections. Dividing them into complete sentences makes the answer grammatically clear.

× And yes, I usually invite my friends my home because my home is really big and it's so comfortable to talk privately

✓ Yes, I usually invite my friends to my home because it is really big and comfortable for talking privately.

Use invite someone to a place. The preposition to is needed between friends and my home.

× One of my family and two of my close friends.

✓ My family and two of my close friends are very important to me.

The original is a fragment because it has no main verb. Add a verb, such as are, to form a complete sentence.

× Yes I going out with my friends every week for example sometimes we go to the cinema and we usually go at coffee shops we prefer meats in on Saturday and when I met with my friends I feel so relaxed.

✓ Yes, I go out with my friends every week. For example, sometimes we go to the cinema, and we usually go to coffee shops. We prefer to meet on Saturdays, and when I meet my friends, I feel relaxed.

The sentence describes a regular habit, so use the simple present tense: I go out. The present simple is also needed in when I meet to match the habitual meaning.

× Yes I going out with my friends every week for example sometimes we go to the cinema and we usually go at coffee shops we prefer meats in on Saturday and when I met with my friends I feel so relaxed.

✓ Yes, I go out with my friends every week. For example, sometimes we go to the cinema, and we usually go to coffee shops. We prefer to meet on Saturdays, and when I meet my friends, I feel relaxed.

Use go to a place, not go at a place. Use on with days of the week, as in on Saturdays.

× I usually meet with my friends in near my school because there are a coffee shop and everywhere and everyone is here and is so enjoyable. For example tomorrow we will go here

✓ I usually meet my friends near my school because there is a coffee shop nearby, and it is an enjoyable place. For example, we will go there tomorrow.

In and near cannot be combined here. Use near my school to show the location.

× I usually meet with my friends in near my school because there are a coffee shop and everywhere and everyone is here and is so enjoyable. For example tomorrow we will go here

✓ I usually meet my friends near my school because there is a coffee shop nearby, and it is an enjoyable place. For example, we will go there tomorrow.

Use there is with a singular noun, such as a coffee shop. There are is used with plural nouns.

× I usually meet with my friends in near my school because there are a coffee shop and everywhere and everyone is here and is so enjoyable. For example tomorrow we will go here

✓ I usually meet my friends near my school because there is a coffee shop nearby, and it is an enjoyable place. For example, we will go there tomorrow.

The original joins ideas in an unclear way, and the clause everyone is here and is so enjoyable does not have a clear subject for is enjoyable. Use a complete clause such as it is an enjoyable place.

× I usually go coffee shops with my friends because it's help us to be in conversation and we have a coffee shop, we always go here.

✓ I usually go to coffee shops with my friends because it helps us have conversations. We always go to the same coffee shop.

Use go to before a destination. The preposition to is required in go to coffee shops.

× I usually go coffee shops with my friends because it's help us to be in conversation and we have a coffee shop, we always go here.

✓ I usually go to coffee shops with my friends because it helps us have conversations. We always go to the same coffee shop.

The subject it is third-person singular, so the present-tense verb must take -s: it helps.

× I usually go coffee shops with my friends because it's help us to be in conversation and we have a coffee shop, we always go here.

✓ I usually go to coffee shops with my friends because it helps us have conversations. We always go to the same coffee shop.

The original has a comma splice: two complete clauses are joined with only a comma. Separate them with a period or connect them with a suitable conjunction.