Friends— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 過去と現在の違いは比較の形で明確に述べましょう。"our friend" は複数なら "my friends"、"in the school" は通常 "at school" とします。また、"my friend isn't in the university that I commute to" は不自然なので、"my friends attend different universities" のように簡潔に言い換えられます。最後に、現在どこで会うのかを具体的に説明すると、回答がより効果的になります。

Ejemplo: Yes, there is a difference. When I was in elementary, junior high, and high school, I usually met my friends at school. Now that we attend different universities, we usually meet at cafés, restaurants, or shopping malls instead.

Sugerencia: 理由を述べる構成はよいですが、"rowdness" は "noise level"、"the place too much load" は "the place is too loud" とします。"silent coffee" ではなく "quiet cafés"、"lesteran" ではなく "restaurants" が適切です。"because" と "so" の重複を避け、場所の条件と結果を一文ずつ明確に述べましょう。

Ejemplo: I think quiet places are more suitable because we can have a proper conversation. If a place is too noisy, it is difficult to hear each other and communicate comfortably. That is why I usually choose a quiet café or a small restaurant.

Sugerencia: 最初に "I prefer spending time with a group of friends" と直接答えましょう。"friend of group" や "prefer spend" は文法的に不自然なので、"a group of friends" と "prefer spending" を使います。大人数の利点を一つ具体例で示し、"because" の繰り返しを避けると、より自然で簡潔になります。

Ejemplo: I prefer spending time with a group of friends. When we are together, we can share stories, play games, and create memorable experiences. I also enjoy hearing different opinions, so group activities are usually more fun for me.

Sugerencia: 回答の内容は質問に関連していますが、最後が "so" で終わっているため、結論を完成させましょう。"my friend" はここでは複数の "my friends" が自然です。また、将来は招待したいのか、それとも今後も難しいのかを加えると、質問への答えがより明確になります。

Ejemplo: I have never invited my friends to my home because I live with my parents, and they prefer not to have guests over. However, I have visited some of my friends’ homes since starting university, and I really enjoyed spending time there. In the future, I would like to invite my friends if I have my own place.

Sugerencia: 重要性と理由が明確で、具体例として留学を挙げている点はよいです。"important for me" より "important to me" が自然です。"not only happy time but also sad time" は "in both happy and difficult times"、"encourage me to decide" は "encourage me to take on challenges" とすると、より自然で正確になります。

Ejemplo: Friends are very important to me because they support me in both happy and difficult times. They also encourage me to take on new challenges, such as studying abroad. I probably would not have considered studying abroad without their support.

Sugerencia: 頻度への直接回答はできていますが、文が長く、接続詞が重複しています。"we are going different universities" は "we attend different universities"、"living far distance" は "live far away from each other" とします。最後の "each once time mouse" は不明確なので、実際の頻度を "once a month" などで正確に述べましょう。

Ejemplo: Not very often, but we do meet occasionally. We attend different universities and live quite far from each other, so it is difficult to get together every weekend. We usually hang out about once a month.

Sugerencia: 場所と理由は具体的ですが、"Izakaya with a Japanese bar" は "an izakaya, which is a Japanese-style bar" と説明できます。"good menu" は "a good menu" または "a wide range of food"、"alcohol drink" は "alcoholic drinks" とします。最後の不明確な語句は削除し、いつ会うのかを自然な表現でまとめましょう。

Ejemplo: I often meet my friends at an izakaya, which is a traditional Japanese-style bar. It has a wide range of food and drinks, so everyone can find something they like. We usually go there in the evening after our classes.

Sugerencia: 大学生活について話すという内容は具体的で、理由もあります。"alcoholic drink" は一般的に "alcoholic drinks" または具体的な飲み物にし、"what kind of life is they live" は "what their university lives are like" とします。会話の内容を一つ追加すると、より豊かな回答になります。

Ejemplo: I usually talk with my friends about our university lives while having a few drinks. We discuss our classes, part-time jobs, and what we do in our free time. It is interesting because every university has a slightly different atmosphere.

Sugerencia: 長い付き合いの友人について答え、十年以上という具体性がある点はよいです。ただし、"my best friend and I or have known" は "my best friend and I have known each other"、"when I was in junior high school high school" は "since junior high school" とします。食べ物の好みについては、"We know each other’s likes and dislikes, especially when it comes to food" と簡潔に表現できます。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have a best friend whom I have known for more than ten years. We first met in junior high school, and we have stayed close ever since. We understand each other’s likes and dislikes, especially when it comes to food, so choosing a restaurant is easy.

× I usually met our friend in the school

✓ I usually met our friends at school

Friends is plural because you are referring to more than one friend. School is used without the definite article when referring to the general activity or location of attending school.

× I usually met our friend in the school

✓ I usually met our friends at school

Use at school rather than in the school when describing the usual place where students meet or study.

× because if the place too much load

✓ because if the place is too loud

Loud is the correct adjective for a place with too much noise. The sentence also needs the verb is before the adjective.

× because if the place too much load

✓ because if the place is too loud

The original sentence is missing the linking verb is. English sentences need a verb after the subject the place.

× I prefer used silent coffee or other lesteran to meet my friend

✓ I prefer using a quiet coffee shop or another restaurant to meet my friends

After prefer, use a gerund with -ing when describing a general preference: prefer using. Also, quiet is the correct adjective for a place with little noise.

× I prefer used silent coffee or other lesteran to meet my friend

✓ I prefer using a quiet coffee shop or another restaurant to meet my friends

Singular countable nouns such as coffee shop and restaurant need determiners. Use a before a quiet coffee shop and another before restaurant.

× I prefer to spend time with group

✓ I prefer to spend time with a group

Group is a singular countable noun, so it needs the indefinite article a.

× So I prefer spend friend of group normally

✓ So I normally prefer spending time with a group of friends

Prefer should be followed by to plus the base verb or by a gerund. Here, prefer spending is the natural structure. The phrase spending time with a group of friends is also grammatically complete.

× this is very happy for me

✓ this makes me very happy

Happy describes a person, not an experience or situation in this meaning. Use makes me very happy to explain that something causes your happiness.

× not only happy time but also sad time they are willing to stay with me

✓ not only during happy times but also during sad times, they are willing to stay with me

Use the plural noun times for repeated periods in life. The preposition during is needed to show when your friends stay with you.

× they encourage me to decide challenging things like study abroad

✓ they encourage me to make challenging decisions, such as studying abroad

The natural collocation is make a decision, not decide a thing. After such as, studying is appropriate because it names an activity.

× we are going different universities

✓ we are going to different universities

The preposition to is required after go when indicating a destination.

× we are living far distance

✓ we live far away from each other

Far distance is not a natural English expression. Use far away from each other to describe people who live in distant places.

× we hang out each once time mouse

✓ we hang out once a month

The correct expression for an activity that happens one time during every month is once a month. Each once time is not used in English.

× I often meet my friend at Izakaya with a Japanese bar

✓ I often meet my friends at an izakaya, a Japanese bar

Izakaya is a singular countable noun in this sentence, so it needs the article an. Use a Japanese bar when giving an additional description of the izakaya.

× because they have good menu and also alcohol drink

✓ because they have a good menu and alcoholic drinks

Drinks should be plural because you are referring generally to alcoholic beverages. Menu is singular and countable here, so it needs the article a.

× because they have good menu and also alcohol drink

✓ because they have a good menu and alcoholic drinks

Alcoholic is the adjective that describes drinks. Alcohol drink is not the usual adjective-noun combination in this context.

× So I prefer go to Izakaya with my friend at night

✓ So I prefer going to an izakaya with my friends at night

Prefer can be followed by a gerund, so use prefer going. The place name also needs an article when it is used as a common noun.

× while drinking alcoholic drink

✓ while drinking alcoholic drinks

Drinks should be plural when referring to beverages in general rather than one specific drink.

× I can know what kind of life is they live in their university

✓ I can learn what kind of life they live at university

In an indirect question, do not use question word order. Use subject plus verb: what kind of life they live. Learn is more natural than can know in this context.

× my best friend and I or have known each other for more than ten years

✓ My best friend and I have known each other for more than ten years

Use the present perfect have known for an action or relationship that began in the past and continues until now. The word or is unnecessary.

× because we know each other long when I was in junior high school high school

✓ because we have known each other since I was in junior high school

Use have known because the relationship began in the past and continues now. Since introduces the starting point of the relationship. Junior high school and high school should not be placed together without a conjunction.

× we completely understand what food do they like, what food do I like

✓ we completely understand what food the other person likes

Indirect questions use normal statement word order, not question word order. Therefore, use what the other person likes rather than what food do they like.