Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也提到了刷 TikTok 时看到推荐内容。注意“many times”前不加“in”；“直播”可说“livestream”；讲过去的经历时统一使用过去时。建议说明具体买过什么，以及广告为什么吸引你。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I once bought a phone case after seeing it in a TikTok livestream. The design looked attractive, and the seller demonstrated how well it protected the phone.

Sugerencia: 回答表达了经常看到广告，并提供了电脑弹窗的例子。避免重复“when”和“on the computer”；“information”是不可数名词；描述过去的习惯时用一般过去时，并可补充现在手机上的情况。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see them quite often, especially when I use my phone. For example, ads often appear between videos or while I’m browsing websites. When I was younger, I also used to see lots of pop-up ads on my computer.

Sugerencia: 你提到了广告的媒介和家庭故事，但“我记得”和“我记不起具体内容”之间需要表达清楚；“beside the A series”不自然，“recommend the virtue”也不符合英语习惯。可以说明广告传递的具体价值观，例如关爱家人。

Ejemplo: Yes. I remember a TV commercial I saw as a child, although I can’t recall all the details. It told the story of a family helping one another and encouraged people to value family relationships. That message stayed with me.

Sugerencia: 回答提到火车上的推销，但问题主要问交通工具上的广告；可以先说车厢内的海报或屏幕广告，再用具体例子展开。“advertising”通常不可数；过去式应为“took”，但这里描述常见情况应使用一般现在时。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertising on trains. There are often posters above the seats and video ads on screens inside the carriage. I also sometimes see vendors promoting local snacks to passengers.

Sugerencia: 观点明确：是否喜欢取决于广告是否有用、真实。注意“广告不真实”可说“the claims in ads aren’t always accurate”；“欺骗消费者”应说“mislead consumers”；表达感受时用“annoyed”，而不是“annoying”。

Ejemplo: It depends. I find advertisements useful when I’m looking for something because they can introduce products I might like. However, some ads exaggerate what a product can do, which can mislead consumers and annoy me.

Sugerencia: 回答直接说出了偏好，但句子结构不完整。“真实地展示产品”可说“show the product honestly”；“各个方面”可说“different features”。建议补充一个具体例子，说明这类广告为什么对你有帮助。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements that show products honestly and clearly. For example, a video showing how a kitchen appliance works is more useful than one that only makes big claims. It helps me understand the product’s features before I buy it.

× Yes of course in many times I was scrolling through the TikTok and the the streaming of a store would be recommended to me and if I was attracted I will take it and buy their products.

✓ Yes, of course. Many times, I was scrolling through TikTok, and a store's stream would be recommended to me. If I was attracted to it, I would take it and buy their products.

表示“很多次”时，many times 前不加介词 in。建议记住固定表达 many times，而不是 in many times。

× Yes of course in many times I was scrolling through the TikTok and the the streaming of a store would be recommended to me and if I was attracted I will take it and buy their products.

✓ Yes, of course. Many times, I was scrolling through TikTok, and a store's stream would be recommended to me. If I was attracted to it, I would take it and buy their products.

TikTok 是平台名称，通常直接使用，不加定冠词 the。建议在专有名称前慎用 the，只有名称本身需要定冠词时才保留。

× Yes of course in many times I was scrolling through the TikTok and the the streaming of a store would be recommended to me and if I was attracted I will take it and buy their products.

✓ Yes, of course. Many times, I was scrolling through TikTok, and a store's stream would be recommended to me. If I was attracted to it, I would take it and buy their products.

if 引导的条件句需要与主句的时态搭配。这里描述过去反复发生的情况，可用 If + 一般过去时，主句用 would + 动词原形。建议练习“if + 过去式，would + 动词原形”的结构。

× Yes of course in many times I was scrolling through the TikTok and the the streaming of a store would be recommended to me and if I was attracted I will take it and buy their products.

✓ Yes, of course. Many times, I was scrolling through TikTok, and a store's stream would be recommended to me. If I was attracted to it, I would take it and buy its products.

这里的 products 属于单数名词 store，因此用 its 指代该商店更一致。建议先确认代词所指对象的单复数，再选择相应的物主代词。

× Definitely, especially on computers when when I was younger, I often search informations on the websites on the computer and there will be so many, uh, small, uh, windows to, to recommend items or other things.

✓ Definitely, especially on computers. When I was younger, I often searched for information on websites on the computer, and there were many small windows recommending items or other things.

information 是不可数名词，不能加 -s 表示复数。建议使用 a piece of information 表示“一条信息”，或直接使用 information。

× Definitely, especially on computers when when I was younger, I often search informations on the websites on the computer and there will be so many, uh, small, uh, windows to, to recommend items or other things.

✓ Definitely, especially on computers. When I was younger, I often searched for information on websites on the computer, and there were many small windows recommending items or other things.

when I was younger 表示过去，因此后面的 search 应改为 searched，there will be 应改为 there were。描述过去的经历时，句中的主要动词应保持过去时态。

× I think there is, but I can remember the exact content. But I can remember it was on the TV beside the A series.

✓ I think there was, but I can remember the exact content. But I can remember it was on TV beside the series.

问题问的是童年时期给人留下印象的广告，谈论的是过去的事，因此这里的 there is 应改为 there was。建议根据问题所指的时间选择时态。

× Yes I do. I always see many advertising on trains.

✓ Yes, I do. I always see many advertisements on trains.

many 后面需要接可数名词复数。这里表示多则广告，应使用 advertisements；advertising 通常是不可数名词，表示“广告活动”或“广告业”。

× Every time the train man will took a a small small box full of many snacks or local products and recommend to all the passengers excitedly.

✓ Every time, the train attendant will take a small box full of snacks or local products and recommend them excitedly to all the passengers.

情态动词 will 后面必须接动词原形，因此 will took 应改为 will take。建议记住“情态动词 + 动词原形”的结构。

× Every time the train man will took a a small small box full of many snacks or local products and recommend to all the passengers excitedly.

✓ Every time, the train attendant will take a small box full of snacks or local products and recommend them excitedly to all the passengers.

这里两个动词 take 和 recommend 共用主语 the train attendant。使用 will 时，两个动词都应保持原形；不能在同一结构中让 recommend 与主语或前面的动词形式不一致。建议检查并列动词是否使用一致的结构。

× They are lying and they are lying the the the buyers.

✓ They are lying, and they are lying to the buyers.

表示“对某人说谎”时，lie 后面需要接介词 to，即 lie to someone。建议记住 lie to somebody 这一搭配。

× That made me very annoying.

✓ That makes me very annoyed.

annoying 表示“令人恼火的”，通常描述事物；annoyed 表示“感到恼火的”，用于描述人的感受。这里描述说话者的感受，应使用 annoyed。

× I like advertising that was a describing their products in the real camera and show their all aspects.

✓ I like advertisements that describe their products on camera and show all their aspects.

that was a describing 结构不成立：描述广告内容时应使用定语从句 that describe...，不需要在 describe 前加 was a。建议使用“名词 + that + 动词”来构成定语从句。

× I like advertising that was a describing their products in the real camera and show their all aspects.

✓ I like advertisements that describe their products on camera and show all their aspects.

all 应放在物主限定词 their 前面，正确顺序是 all their aspects，而不是 their all aspects。建议记住“all + 物主限定词 + 名词”的顺序。