Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答直接，但“fairy star sponsor”表达不自然，可能想说“favorite celebrity”或“a celebrity I admire”。“because my ... sponsor”句子结构错误，应说明广告中的名人如何影响你的购买决定。建议使用“especially when...”补充具体例子，并避免重复使用“buy something”。

Ejemplo: Yes, I have. I once bought a skincare product because it was endorsed by my favorite actress. I trust her recommendations, so I wanted to try it myself.

Sugerencia: 回答有明确观点，但“play with my phone”应改为“use my phone”，“stream the video”表达不完整；“That's really upset me”和“want some disturbed”语法错误。建议使用“However”连接，并具体说明广告如何打扰你，例如打断视频或占用时间。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see them quite often, especially when I watch videos on my phone. However, I find them annoying because they sometimes interrupt the video and waste my time.

Sugerencia: 回答尝试提供具体广告，但内容不完整，听众难以理解“theory”“Zijang”和“children's dream of being”的含义。“I really impressed”应改为“I was really impressed”。建议先说明广告是什么，再描述画面或主题，最后解释它为什么令人印象深刻。

Ejemplo: Yes. I remember an advertisement for a children’s clothing brand called Zijang. It showed children chasing their dreams and enjoying themselves. I was impressed by its colorful images and encouraging message.

Sugerencia: 回答切题，也提到了地铁广告，但“going for work”重复，时态和句子结构不自然。建议用“when I commute to work or go home”概括场景，并用“although”或“but”说明你通常不会认真看广告的原因。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements in the subway, especially when I commute to work or go home. They are usually placed on the walls and inside the carriages. However, I often ignore them because I’m busy using my phone.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但“Definitely know”应改为“Definitely not”，“the advertisement is”应根据泛指改为“advertisements are”，“lack of satisfaction didn't catch me”意思不清。建议直接说明不喜欢的原因，并补充广告太吵、重复或打断内容等具体细节。

Ejemplo: Definitely not. I usually find advertisements annoying because they are repetitive and sometimes too loud. They often interrupt the videos I am watching, so I tend to skip them.

Sugerencia: 回答没有完成，且“which is exaggerate”语法错误，应改为“that highlights its features”或“that presents its features creatively”。“exaggerate”通常带有负面含义，不适合表达喜欢的广告。建议明确说明喜欢的广告类型，并给出一个具体特点或例子。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements that are creative and clearly show a product’s main features. For example, I enjoy short advertisements with humor or attractive visual effects because they are easy to remember.

× Yes, of course. I often buy something because my fairy star sponsor for the advertisement and also I will follow her and buy something.

✓ Yes, of course. I often buy something because my favorite star sponsors the advertisement, and I follow her recommendations and buy the products.

“because”后面需要完整的句子，原句中的“my fairy star sponsor”缺少正确的谓语结构。“star”是第三人称单数，所以现在时动词应使用“sponsors”。这里描述的是经常发生的行为，后面应保持一般现在时，因此将“will follow”改为“follow”。

× Yes, I often see many advertisements when I play with my phone and stream the video. That's really upset me and I don't really want some disturbed when I play with my phone.

✓ Yes, I often see many advertisements when I use my phone and stream videos. They really upset me, and I don't really want to be disturbed when I use my phone.

“advertisements”是复数，后面应使用代词“They”，而不是“That”。描述广告通常带来的影响时，应使用一般现在时“upset”。“want”后面需要接不定式，“be disturbed”表示“被打扰”，因此不能说“some disturbed”。

× Yes, of course I remember an advertisement of theory and the name is Zijang and I really impressed on the children's dream of being

✓ Yes, of course. I remember an advertisement called Zijang about children's dreams. I was really impressed by it.

这个回答描述的是童年时看到的广告，因此相关动作可以使用过去时。“I impressed”表示“我给别人留下了深刻印象”，但这里想表达“我被感动或留下深刻印象”，所以应使用被动结构“I was impressed”。固定搭配是“be impressed by”，不能使用“impressed on”。原句最后缺少完整结构，改为“I was really impressed by it”后句子完整。

× Yes, I often see many advertisements in the subway when I'm going home or go for work going for work and sometimes I just didn't watch them and just play with my phone.

✓ Yes, I often see many advertisements in the subway when I'm going home or going to work. Sometimes I don't pay attention to them; I just use my phone.

“when”后面两个动作需要保持平行结构，所以“go”应改为“going”。这里描述日常习惯，应使用一般现在时“don't”，而不是过去时“didn't”。主语是“I”，所以应使用“play”或更自然的“use”，不能写成不完整或重复的结构。

× Definitely know because I think the advertisement is so noisy and lack of satisfaction didn't catch me.

✓ Definitely not, because I think advertisements are so noisy and unsatisfying that they don't catch my attention.

否定回答应使用“Definitely not”，而不是“Definitely know”。谈论一般性的广告时，使用复数“advertisements”更合适，因此系动词应为“are”。“lack of satisfaction”不能直接作形容词使用；“unsatisfying”表示“令人不满意的”。主语“they”是复数，所以应使用“don't”，并保持一般现在时。

× I like the advertising which is exaggerate its features and such as

✓ I like advertisements that exaggerate their features.

“is exaggerate”结构错误；这里表示“广告夸大它们的特点”，应使用主动语态“advertisements that exaggerate”。“advertising”通常是不可数名词，而这里指具体的广告，所以使用复数“advertisements”更合适。“and such as”没有完成句子结构，因此应删除，或后面补充具体例子。