Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答基本切题，但“when I use some apps in my phone”应改为“when I use some apps on my phone”；“watch advertisements”重复两次，且“a terrible experience for me to watch”表达不自然。建议先直接回答频率，再说明广告出现的场景和你的感受，并使用“especially”和“because”等连接词补充细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use apps on my phone, especially free video and shopping apps. They usually appear between videos or when I am browsing products. I find them slightly annoying because they interrupt what I am doing.

Sugerencia: 回答中存在严重的语法、词汇和句子完整性问题，导致意思不清楚。“where was a child”应改为“When I was a child”，“a advertisement”应改为“an advertisement”。需要清楚说明广告是什么、何时看到、为什么令人印象深刻；不要重复“car”，也不要以“but it's between”这种未完成的短语结尾。

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember an advertisement for a toy car from my childhood. I often saw it after watching cartoons on television. The car could transform into a robot, which fascinated me because I loved action toys. I wanted to have one, although my parents did not buy it for me.

Sugerencia: 观点明确，但“in a transport”不自然，应使用“on public transport”或“when I am travelling”。“hotel advertisement”应使用复数“hotel advertisements”，而且“many people will travel on transport”表达生硬。建议用现在时回答一般情况，并具体说明广告通常出现在哪里，例如车厢、车站或机场。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertisements on public transport. They are usually displayed inside buses and trains, or on screens at stations. Travel agencies, hotels and restaurants advertise there because commuters and tourists are a large audience.

Sugerencia: 回答直接表达了不喜欢，但存在明显语法和词汇错误。“the advertisement”应改为“advertisements”，“watching advertisements wastes my time”，“a table experience”应为“a terrible experience”，“on airport”应为“at the airport”。建议说明广告令人讨厌的具体原因，并避免重复使用“sometimes”。

Ejemplo: To be honest, I do not really like advertisements because they often waste my time. I find them particularly annoying when they interrupt short videos or appear repeatedly at the airport. However, I do appreciate advertisements that provide useful information about new products.

Sugerencia: 回答切题，并给出了喜欢智能手机广告的原因，但应注意名词复数和形容词形式：“advertisements about smartphones”，“technology products”，“new smartphones make me excited”。建议进一步说明你关注广告中的哪些信息，例如相机、续航或新功能，使内容更具体。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements for smartphones because I am interested in technology. I especially enjoy seeing demonstrations of new cameras, batteries and artificial-intelligence features. These advertisements help me compare different models before I decide what to buy.

Sugerencia: 回答有清晰的经历、原因和结果，但时态需要统一。因为是在讲过去的经历，应使用“bought” and “watched”；“after I watched the advertisement”可以改为“after seeing an advertisement for it”。另外，避免在同一句中重复“bought”，并具体说明相机对你有什么用途。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once bought a DJI Pocket camera after seeing an advertisement for it. The advertisement showed that it was small, easy to carry and suitable for recording travel videos. I thought it would be useful for my trips, so I decided to buy it.

× Definitely when I use some apps in my phone.

✓ Definitely, I usually see advertisements when I use some apps on my phone.

表示使用手机上的应用程序时，通常使用介词“on”，而不是“in”。“on my phone”表示“在我的手机上”。

× Definitely when I use some apps in my phone.

✓ Definitely, I usually see advertisements when I use some apps on my phone.

原句中的“Definitely when...”只是一个不完整的短语，缺少主句的谓语动词。可以补充“I usually see advertisements”，使句子结构完整。

× Definitely where was a child where finish watched a cartoon? There's a advertisement about a car twice makes me a great impression because I really like this car twice but it's between

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, after I finished watching a cartoon, there was an advertisement about a car that made a great impression on me because I really liked this car.

原句包含多个句子成分混乱的问题，例如“where was a child”和“where finish watched”不能构成正确的从句；“car twice”和句末的“but it's between”也使句子结构不完整。应使用“When I was a child”表示“当我还是孩子时”，并用“that made...”连接定语从句。

× Definitely where was a child where finish watched a cartoon? There's a advertisement about a car twice makes me a great impression because I really like this car twice but it's between

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, after I finished watching a cartoon, there was an advertisement about a car that made a great impression on me because I really liked this car.

问题描述的是童年时发生的事情，因此应使用过去时。“was”“finished”“was”“made”和“liked”都使用过去时，保持整段叙述的时态一致。

× Definitely where was a child where finish watched a cartoon? There's a advertisement about a car twice makes me a great impression because I really like this car twice but it's between

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, after I finished watching a cartoon, there was an advertisement about a car that made a great impression on me because I really liked this car.

固定搭配是“make an impression on someone”，所以应使用介词“on”，不能说“make me an impression”。

× Definitely where was a child where finish watched a cartoon? There's a advertisement about a car twice makes me a great impression because I really like this car twice but it's between

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, after I finished watching a cartoon, there was an advertisement about a car that made a great impression on me because I really liked this car.

“advertisement”以元音音素开头，因此前面应使用“an”，即“an advertisement”，不能使用“a advertisement”。

× Definitely when I was in a transport I watched some advertisements about the hotels because many people will travel on transport.

✓ Definitely, when I am on public transport, I see advertisements about hotels because many people travel by public transport.

表示乘坐公共交通工具时，常用“on public transport”或“by public transport”，不能说“in a transport”。此外，“advertisements about hotels”在泛指酒店广告时不需要使用“the”。

× Definitely when I was in a transport I watched some advertisements about the hotels because many people will travel on transport.

✓ Definitely, when I am on public transport, I see advertisements about hotels because many people travel by public transport.

问题询问的是你平时是否看到广告，因此应使用一般现在时。“am”“see”和“travel”表示通常发生的情况，而不是某一次过去或未来的活动。

× So there is a lot of hotel advertisement in transport.

✓ So there are a lot of hotel advertisements on public transport.

“advertisements”是可数名词复数，因此应使用“There are”，不能使用“There is”。同时应使用复数形式“advertisements”。

× So there is a lot of hotel advertisement in transport.

✓ So there are a lot of hotel advertisements on public transport.

“a lot of”后面可以接可数名词复数，所以“advertisement”应改为“advertisements”。“hotel advertisements”表示“酒店广告”。

× To be honest, I don't like the advertisement because watch some advertisements is with my time.

✓ To be honest, I don't like advertisements because watching them wastes my time.

当动词短语充当主语时，应使用动名词形式“watching”。例如，“Watching them wastes my time”表示“观看它们浪费我的时间”。

× To be honest, I don't like the advertisement because watch some advertisements is with my time.

✓ To be honest, I don't like advertisements because watching them wastes my time.

这里是在泛指广告，而不是指某一个特定的广告，所以不应使用定冠词“the”。应说“advertisements”。

× To be honest, I don't like the advertisement because watch some advertisements is with my time.

✓ To be honest, I don't like advertisements because watching them wastes my time.

原句中“because watch some advertisements is with my time”的结构不完整且表达方式错误。应使用“because + 动名词短语 + 谓语”，即“because watching them wastes my time”。

× Sometimes it always gives me a table experience when I watch some short videos or travel on airport.

✓ It always gives me a terrible experience when I watch short videos or travel at the airport.

“sometimes”和“always”同时使用会造成逻辑冲突，通常应保留其中一个。这里保留“always”，并将其放在主语之后、主要动词之前。

× Sometimes it always gives me a table experience when I watch some short videos or travel on airport.

✓ It always gives me a terrible experience when I watch short videos or travel at the airport.

表示在机场时，应使用“at the airport”，不能说“on airport”。“at”用于表示人在某个地点。

× I like some advertisement about smartphone because I am interested in some technologies product.

✓ I like some advertisements about smartphones because I am interested in some technology products.

“some”后面如果接可数名词，名词通常要用复数形式，因此应说“advertisements”“smartphones”和“products”。“technology”在这里作名词修饰“products”，不需要变成“technologies”。

× Some new smartphone make me excited and I really want to watch the advertisement.

✓ Some new smartphones make me excited, and I really want to watch the advertisements.

“some”后面的可数名词应使用复数，所以“smartphone”改为“smartphones”。因为前面谈的是多个广告，后面的“advertisement”也应使用复数“advertisements”。

× Some new smartphone make me excited and I really want to watch the advertisement.

✓ Some new smartphones make me excited, and I really want to watch the advertisements.

主语“Some new smartphones”是复数，因此谓语使用“make”是正确的；原句的问题在于单数主语“smartphone”与复数形式谓语“make”不一致。改成复数后，主谓保持一致。

× Definitely, I buy a DJI pocket camera after I watched the advertisement because I think this camera is useful and suitable for me so I bought it.

✓ Definitely, I bought a DJI Pocket camera after I watched the advertisement because I think this camera is useful and suitable for me, so I bought it.

“after I watched the advertisement”描述的是过去发生的购买行为，因此主句也应使用过去时“bought”，不能使用现在时“buy”。

× Definitely, I buy a DJI pocket camera after I watched the advertisement because I think this camera is useful and suitable for me so I bought it.

✓ Definitely, I bought a DJI Pocket camera after I watched the advertisement because I think this camera is useful and suitable for me, so I bought it.

原句把“because”从句和“so”连接的结果分句连续放在一起，句子过长且缺少清晰标点。应在“me”后加逗号，明确原因和结果之间的关系。