Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答基本切题，但句子过长，存在明显的语法、搭配和时态问题，如“every time I scroll... maybe scrolling”“the advertisement just showed up”以及“fifty minutes”。建议先直接回答频率，再说明广告通常出现在哪里以及为什么令人烦恼。注意使用“ads interrupt me”和“unskippable ads”等自然表达，并用“especially”或“because”连接细节。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see advertisements almost every time I use my phone or computer. They often appear while I am watching short videos or browsing social media. I find unskippable ads particularly annoying because they interrupt what I am doing.

Sugerencia: 内容和结构较好，也给出了童年广告令人难忘的原因，但有语法和词汇搭配问题，如“it catches jingle”应改为“its catchy jingle”，“hold it years later”不自然。建议明确说明广告是什么或广告中的具体元素，并使用过去时描述童年经历。

Ejemplo: Yes, I still remember a television advertisement I saw when I was a child. I cannot remember the product very clearly, but its catchy jingle and simple slogan have stayed in my mind. The tune was so memorable that I could still sing part of it today.

Sugerencia: 回答没有直接使用“Yes”或“No”回应问题，且重复、停顿和句子结构问题较多。“print their advertisement”应改为“put up advertisements”，“what the advertisement writes”应改为“what the advertisements say”。建议采用“是的，尤其是在……”，然后具体说明广告的位置以及乘客为什么会注意到它。

Ejemplo: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertisements on public transport. They are usually displayed inside buses and trains, as well as on their exterior. Although passengers only see them briefly, eye-catching posters can still attract their attention.

Sugerencia: 回答立场清楚，并进行了正反对比，但“handing out flyers”指发传单这一行为，不完全等于喜欢某类广告；“printing the advertisements of available”表达不清。建议直接说喜欢设计精美、提供有用信息的广告，并准确说明不喜欢视频中的弹窗或不可跳过广告。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements that are attractive and informative, such as well-designed posters or flyers. However, I dislike intrusive advertisements, especially pop-ups and unskippable ads during online videos. They are annoying because they interrupt my entertainment.

Sugerencia: 回答了喜欢的广告类型，但“bitter eye catching”应为“bright and eye-catching”，“by having a slogan...”结构不自然，且观点重复。建议使用“eye-catching designs”和“memorable slogans”等准确搭配，并加入一个具体效果，例如让广告更容易被记住或分享。

Ejemplo: I like advertisements with bright, eye-catching designs and simple, memorable slogans. They are easy to understand and usually stay in people’s minds for a long time. A humorous advertisement is even better because it makes people feel happy and more willing to share it.

Sugerencia: 回答切题，并提供了购买鞋子的例子，但前两句更像泛泛而谈，缺少个人经历的具体细节；“appeal to customers' emotion”应为“appeal to customers’ emotions”，“browsing my phone”应改为“browsing on my phone”。建议先直接回答，再说明广告展示了什么、你为什么被吸引以及购买结果。

Ejemplo: Yes, I once bought a pair of shoes because of an advertisement. I saw the ad while browsing on my phone, and I liked the shoes because they looked comfortable and stylish. The advertisement also offered a small discount, which encouraged me to buy them.

× Yes, every time I scroll on my phone maybe scrolling some reels and watching some videos then the advertisement just showed up and interrupted me at all and they have to force me to watch like fifty minutes and I can't skip it.

✓ Yes. Every time I scroll on my phone, perhaps while scrolling through some reels and watching videos, an advertisement just shows up and interrupts me. It forces me to watch it for about fifty minutes, and I can't skip it.

这里描述的是经常发生的情况，所以应使用一般现在时。将“showed up”和“interrupted”改为“shows up”和“interrupts”。建议描述习惯或重复发生的事情时使用一般现在时。

× Yes, every time I scroll on my phone maybe scrolling some reels and watching some videos then the advertisement just showed up and interrupted me at all and they have to force me to watch like fifty minutes and I can't skip it.

✓ Yes. Every time I scroll on my phone, perhaps while scrolling through some reels and watching videos, an advertisement shows up and interrupts me. It forces me to watch it for about fifty minutes, and I can't skip it.

原句把多个动作连续堆在一起，缺少清晰的句子结构，而且使用了不恰当的连接方式。建议把一个很长的句子拆成几个短句，并使用“while”和“and”连接相关动作。

× Yes, every time I scroll on my phone maybe scrolling some reels and watching some videos then the advertisement just showed up and interrupted me at all and they have to force me to watch like fifty minutes and I can't skip it.

✓ Yes. Every time I scroll on my phone, an advertisement shows up and interrupts me. It forces me to watch it for about fifty minutes, and I can't skip it.

“advertisement”是单数，后面应使用单数代词“it”，不能使用复数代词“they”。建议先确认先行词的单复数，再选择相应的代词。

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, there is.

问题是“Is there an advertisement...?”，询问是否存在某个广告，因此回答应使用“There is”，而不是“Yes, I do”。建议回答“There be”结构的问题时，保留相同的“There is/There are”结构。

× I've always remembered TV advertisements from my childhood not because I knew the product, but because it catches jingle and slogan stuck in my mind.

✓ I've always remembered TV advertisements from my childhood, not because I knew the product, but because their catchy jingle and slogan stuck in my mind.

“jingle”和“slogan”是可数名词，这里需要限定词。“their”表示这些广告的歌曲和口号，比“it”更准确。建议名词前检查是否需要冠词、物主代词或其他限定词。

× I've always remembered TV advertisements from my childhood not because I knew the product, but because it catches jingle and slogan stuck in my mind.

✓ I've always remembered TV advertisements from my childhood, not because I knew the product, but because their catchy jingle and slogan stuck in my mind.

这里讲的是童年时广告给人留下的印象，属于过去发生的事情，所以应使用过去式“stuck”，而不是现在时“catches”。同时，“stuck”已经是句子的主要谓语，不需要再使用“catches”。

× I've always remembered TV advertisements from my childhood not because I knew the product, but because it catches jingle and slogan stuck in my mind.

✓ I've always remembered TV advertisements from my childhood, not because I knew the product, but because their catchy jingle and slogan stuck in my mind.

原句中“it catches”和“slogan stuck”出现了两个不协调的谓语结构。改为“their catchy jingle and slogan stuck in my mind”后，主语和谓语关系清楚。建议一个从句中明确安排主语和主要谓语，避免重复使用谓语。

× They always print their advertisement just outside the train or a bus like they probably think that people will look look at their look and see what the advertisement writes but I always can see the words on it. It's just passing.

✓ They always print their advertisements just outside trains or buses. They probably think that people will look at them and read what is written in the advertisements, but I can always see the words on them. The vehicles just pass by.

“advertisements”“trains”和“buses”表示一般情况，通常使用复数形式。相应的代词也应使用“them”。建议描述一类事物时检查名词是否应使用复数。

× They always print their advertisement just outside the train or a bus like they probably think that people will look look at their look and see what the advertisement writes but I always can see the words on it.

✓ They always print their advertisements just outside trains or buses. They probably think that people will look at them and read what is written in the advertisements, but I can always see the words on them.

广告中的文字是“被写出来”的，因此应使用被动结构“what is written”，而不是“what the advertisement writes”。建议当主语是动作的承受者时使用“be + 过去分词”的被动语态。

× It's just passing.

✓ The vehicles just pass by.

原句中的“It”指代不清，而且“just passing”不能准确表达车辆经过的完整动作。改为“The vehicles just pass by”后，句子有明确的主语和谓语。建议每个完整句子都检查是否包含清楚的主语和谓语。

× For example, printing the advertisements of available or unskippable ad during the videos.

✓ For example, I dislike advertisements that pop up during videos, especially unskippable ads.

原句是一个短语，没有完整的主语和谓语，因此是句子片段。加入主语“I”和谓语“dislike”后，句子完整。建议避免用“-ing”短语单独作为句子，除非它有明确的句法功能。

× I like advertisements that have bitter eye catching designs or just a simple memorable slogan by having a slogan people will always talk about and just make it the fun.

✓ I like advertisements that have very eye-catching designs or a simple, memorable slogan. A slogan that people always talk about can make an advertisement more fun.

“a slogan people will always talk about”指一个口号，后面的表达需要清楚的数量和结构。改写后使用“a simple, memorable slogan”和“A slogan”，使单数可数名词的限定更清楚。建议使用单数可数名词时检查前面是否有“a/an/the”或其他限定词。

× I like advertisements that have bitter eye catching designs or just a simple memorable slogan by having a slogan people will always talk about and just make it the fun. So it's makes people more happy.

✓ I like advertisements that have very eye-catching designs or a simple, memorable slogan. A slogan that people always talk about can make an advertisement more enjoyable. This makes people happier.

“bitter eye-catching”不能表达“非常吸引眼球”，这里应使用“very eye-catching”。“more happy”虽然可以理解，但比较级“happier”更自然。建议注意副词“very”和形容词的正确搭配，并掌握形容词的比较级形式。

× So it's makes people more happy.

✓ So it makes people happier.

“it”是第三人称单数，后面直接使用一般现在时第三人称单数形式“makes”，不能在“it”后再加“is”。建议记住一般现在时中，第三人称单数主语后直接接动词的“-s”形式。

× So it's makes people more happy.

✓ So it makes people happier.

“happy”以辅音字母加“y”结尾，比较级应将“y”变为“i”再加“-er”，所以是“happier”，而不是“more happy”。建议熟记以“y”结尾的形容词的比较级变化规则。

× Yes, advertisements today are often designed to appeal to customers' emotion which makes people more likely to buy things they are interested in.

✓ Yes, advertisements today are often designed to appeal to customers' emotions, which makes people more likely to buy things they are interested in.

这里指顾客的情感，一般应使用复数“emotions”。“customers'”已经是复数名词的所有格，后面的名词也应根据语义使用复数。建议表达一般概念时检查可数名词是否需要复数形式。

× For example, I see shoe ads when I'm browsing my phone and I just bought it.

✓ For example, I see shoe ads when I'm browsing on my phone, and I just bought a pair of shoes.

英语中通常说“browse on my phone”，而不是“browse my phone”。表示使用手机进行浏览时，应使用介词“on”。建议积累固定搭配，例如“search on the Internet”和“browse on my phone”。

× For example, I see shoe ads when I'm browsing my phone and I just bought it.

✓ For example, I see shoe ads when I'm browsing on my phone, and I just bought a pair of shoes.

“shoe ads”是复数，而“it”是单数代词，指代不一致；此外，购买的是鞋子，而不是广告。改为“a pair of shoes”后，指代对象清楚。建议确认代词所指的名词及其单复数。

× Yes, advertisements today are often designed to appeal to customers' emotion which makes people more likely to buy things they are interested in.

✓ Yes, advertisements today are often designed to appeal to customers' emotions, which make people more likely to buy things they are interested in.

如果“which”指代前面的复数名词“advertisements”，谓语应使用复数形式“make”，不能使用“makes”。建议先判断关系代词所指的先行词是单数还是复数，再决定谓语形式。