Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly by saying how often you see advertisements. Use clearer grammar and vocabulary: say “I often see ads” rather than “I open the advertisement,” and “pre-roll advertisements” rather than “pre world advertisement.” Explain that the ads are targeted based on your interests. Avoid repeating “advertisement.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements when I use my phone, especially on YouTube. A short pre-roll ad usually appears before my video starts. I think these ads are targeted based on my interests, because I often see products related to technology and entertainment.

Sugerencia: Describe one specific advertisement and explain why you remember it. The phrases “capital advertisement” and “with singing a song” are unclear; use expressions such as “a commercial featuring cute characters” and “a catchy song.” Add a result or personal reaction to make the answer more developed.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember a television commercial for a snack brand. It featured several cute cartoon characters walking down a road and singing a catchy song. Many children, including me, enjoyed it, and I could still remember the tune years later.

Sugerencia: Give a complete answer and avoid stopping mid-sentence. State where you see the advertisements and describe their format, such as posters, screens, or advertisements on the outside of buses. Replace unclear expressions like “broad broading advertisement various” with precise vocabulary.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertising on buses and trains. There are usually posters inside the vehicles, as well as large advertisements on the outside. They often promote mobile services, restaurants, or new films, so passengers see them throughout their journey.

Sugerencia: Your opinion is clear, but improve the grammar and naturalness. Say “advertisements bother me when I’m watching my favorite videos” and “If I could afford it, I would subscribe to an ad-free service.” Add one specific reason, such as interruptions or irrelevant content.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t really like advertisements because they interrupt me when I’m watching my favorite videos. Some of them are also irrelevant and make the viewing experience less enjoyable. If I could afford it, I would subscribe to an ad-free service.

Sugerencia: Give a clear preference first, then explain it with one or two supporting details. The answer contains repetition and unclear phrases such as “advertisements with Sing” and “oral melody.” Use “advertisements with singing or music,” and explain how the music affects your reaction.

Ejemplo: Although I don’t usually enjoy advertisements, I like ones that include singing or catchy music. A memorable melody can make an advertisement more entertaining and easier to remember. I’m also more likely to share it with my friends if the song is particularly creative.

Sugerencia: Answer with a specific product and explain how the advertisement influenced your decision. Use “bought” or “purchased,” not “proposed,” and say “cosmetics” rather than “in the cosmetic.” Replace “the project was very attracted from me” with “the product attracted me” or “the product looked appealing.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I once bought a skincare product after seeing it advertised by a famous influencer. The advertisement showed how the product could improve the skin, and the demonstration made it look very effective. I was curious to try it, so I ordered it online, although I later realized that the advertisement had exaggerated the results.

× Yes, I open the advertisement on my phone for example, when I open YouTube, I usually get pre-world advertisement before my video starts because the platform shows targeted advertisement by still my interest.

✓ Yes, I see advertisements on my phone. For example, when I open YouTube, I usually get a pre-roll advertisement before my video starts because the platform shows targeted advertisements based on my interests.

Advertisement is a countable noun, so it usually needs an article in the singular or a plural form when speaking generally. Use advertisements for general references and interests because the platform uses information about several interests.

× Yes, I open the advertisement on my phone for example, when I open YouTube, I usually get pre-world advertisement before my video starts because the platform shows targeted advertisement by still my interest.

✓ Yes, I see advertisements on my phone. For example, when I open YouTube, I usually get a pre-roll advertisement before my video starts because the platform shows targeted advertisements based on my interests.

Based on is the correct prepositional phrase for explaining what information something uses. By my interest is not appropriate in this context.

× Yes, I open the advertisement on my phone for example, when I open YouTube, I usually get pre-world advertisement before my video starts because the platform shows targeted advertisement by still my interest.

✓ Yes, I see advertisements on my phone. For example, when I open YouTube, I usually get a pre-roll advertisement before my video starts because the platform shows targeted advertisements based on my interests.

Use a before the singular countable noun advertisement when mentioning one advertisement for the first time. Do not use the when speaking about advertisements in general.

× Yes, the advertisement is capital advertisement with singing a song with cute character and walking on the road.

✓ Yes, the advertisement is an animated advertisement featuring cute characters singing a song and walking along the road.

Use an before animated because it begins with a vowel sound. Also, singular countable nouns such as character need an article, while the plural form characters can refer to several characters.

× Yes, the advertisement is capital advertisement with singing a song with cute character and walking on the road.

✓ Yes, the advertisement is an animated advertisement featuring cute characters singing a song and walking along the road.

After featuring, use the present participle forms singing and walking to describe actions performed by the characters. This creates a grammatically complete description.

× So many people enjoy those advertisements, listening the song.

✓ So many people enjoy those advertisements and listen to the song.

The verb listen is followed by the preposition to when referring to something that is heard. The sentence also needs a conjunction to connect the two actions clearly.

× Yes, I could usually see a lot of advertising on buses.

✓ Yes, I can usually see a lot of advertising on buses.

The question asks about a current habit, so can is more suitable than could. Could usually refers to past ability or a less certain possibility.

× No, actually I don't like advertisement because it made me bothered people watching my favorite video.

✓ No, actually, I don't like advertisements because they bother me when I watch my favorite videos.

Use the plural form advertisements when discussing advertisements generally. The plural pronoun they agrees with advertisements, and the verb phrase bother me is the correct structure.

× No, actually I don't like advertisement because it made me bothered people watching my favorite video.

✓ No, actually, I don't like advertisements because they bother me when I watch my favorite videos.

The question asks about your present opinion, so use the present-tense verb bother, not the past-tense form made. The present tense also matches the repeated situation described by when I watch.

× No, actually I don't like advertisement because it made me bothered people watching my favorite video.

✓ No, actually, I don't like advertisements because they bother me when I watch my favorite videos.

Made me bothered people is not a correct sentence structure. Use the pattern subject + bother + object, as in advertisements bother me, followed by a when-clause to explain the situation.

× So if I have a money, I want to subscribe free subscription without advertisement.

✓ So, if I have money, I want to subscribe to an ad-free service.

Money is an uncountable noun, so it cannot be used with the article a. Use have money. The phrase subscribe to also requires the preposition to.

× So if I have a money, I want to subscribe free subscription without advertisement.

✓ So, if I have money, I want to subscribe to an ad-free service.

The verb subscribe is followed by to when referring to a service or plan. Therefore, say subscribe to a service, not subscribe a service.

× Actually, I don't usually really like advertisement but especially in with advertisements with Sing, I enjoy doing those advertisement because with the oral melody makes me more active and feel appreciated so yes I enjoy this reason why.

✓ Actually, I don't really like advertisements, but I especially enjoy advertisements with singing because their melodies make me feel more active and appreciated. That is why I enjoy them.

Use the plural form advertisements when referring to advertisements generally. Their agrees with the plural noun advertisements, and melodies is plural because the speaker is referring to the sounds in several advertisements.

× Actually, I don't usually really like advertisement but especially in with advertisements with Sing, I enjoy doing those advertisement because with the oral melody makes me more active and feel appreciated so yes I enjoy this reason why.

✓ Actually, I don't really like advertisements, but I especially enjoy advertisements with singing because their melodies make me feel more active and appreciated. That is why I enjoy them.

The original phrases in with and with the oral melody use prepositions incorrectly. Use advertisements with singing to describe the advertisements and because their melodies to introduce the reason.

× Actually, I don't usually really like advertisement but especially in with advertisements with Sing, I enjoy doing those advertisement because with the oral melody makes me more active and feel appreciated so yes I enjoy this reason why.

✓ Actually, I don't really like advertisements, but I especially enjoy advertisements with singing because their melodies make me feel more active and appreciated. That is why I enjoy them.

Use but to contrast the general dislike with the specific type of advertisement the speaker enjoys. Use because to introduce the reason, and separate the final conclusion into a new sentence.

× Actually, I don't usually really like advertisement but especially in with advertisements with Sing, I enjoy doing those advertisement because with the oral melody makes me more active and feel appreciated so yes I enjoy this reason why.

✓ Actually, I don't really like advertisements, but I especially enjoy advertisements with singing because their melodies make me feel more active and appreciated. That is why I enjoy them.

The subject melodies is plural, so it must take the plural verb make, not makes. The original structure also lacked a clear subject before makes.

× Yes, I have proposed something because of advertisement.

✓ Yes, I have bought something because of an advertisement.

Use an before the singular countable noun advertisement because it begins with a vowel sound. The present perfect form have bought is appropriate for describing a past experience without giving a specific time.

× For example, in the cosmetic, I could either receive the advertisement with famous persons or influencers.

✓ For example, in cosmetics, I might notice advertisements featuring famous people or influencers.

In cosmetics is the appropriate prepositional phrase for referring to the cosmetics industry or products. The phrase featuring famous people or influencers clearly describes the advertisements.

× For example, in the cosmetic, I could either receive the advertisement with famous persons or influencers.

✓ For example, in cosmetics, I might notice advertisements featuring famous people or influencers.

Cosmetics is normally used as a plural noun when referring to makeup products or the cosmetics industry. Advertisements should also be plural because the answer refers to advertisements in general.

× So the project was very attracted from me so that results.

✓ So the product attracted me, and as a result, I bought it.

Attracted is normally used as a past participle in the passive or adjective structure, such as I was attracted to the product. In this sentence, the active structure the product attracted me is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So the project was very attracted from me so that results.

✓ So the product attracted me, and as a result, I bought it.

Use to, not from, after attracted when describing a person's response: I was attracted to the product. The phrase as a result is the correct expression for showing the consequence.