Advertisement— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Answer the question directly in the first sentence: say that you often see advertisements on both your phone and computer. Avoid repetition such as “advert advertisements” and “I do see.” Use a complete example and finish your answer clearly. Add a linking word such as “for example” before describing YouTube advertisements.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on both my phone and my computer. For example, when I scroll through YouTube, I frequently see ads for different businesses and products. They can sometimes be distracting, but occasionally they introduce me to something useful.

Sugerencia: Use the past tense consistently because the question asks about childhood: “when I was a child,” “I didn’t use,” and “I saw.” Instead of saying you have no idea about advertisements, mention one memorable example and explain why it made an impression. Avoid contradictory linking, such as “So but,” and use a clear structure with a specific detail.

Ejemplo: Yes, I remember seeing colorful advertisements for new movies when I was a child. I often noticed them on large billboards beside the roads when my family was traveling. The bright pictures and famous actors caught my attention, and they made me curious about the films.

Sugerencia: State clearly whether you see a lot of advertising and identify the types of transport. Replace unclear phrases such as “bus transports” and “paint some kind of their business” with precise language, such as “advertisements are painted on the sides of buses.” Give one specific example and explain whether these advertisements attract your attention.

Ejemplo: Yes, I see quite a lot of advertising on buses and trains, especially in large cities. Companies often place posters inside vehicles or paint advertisements on the outside of buses. Some of them are colorful and eye-catching, so I usually notice them during my journey.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion first, then explain the contrast between advertisements you dislike and those you notice while traveling. Correct the grammar in “it is so distract through” and “on the car”; use “they are distracting” and “when I am traveling by car or bike.” Avoid unnatural expressions such as “attract my eyes to double.”

Ejemplo: I have mixed feelings about advertisements. I usually dislike online ads because they interrupt me when I am working on my phone or laptop. However, I sometimes enjoy seeing creative posters on the roadside when I am traveling by car or motorcycle because they can be visually appealing.

Sugerencia: Answer by naming the type of advertising you like, rather than discussing what you might do in the future. Use accurate vocabulary such as “digital advertisements,” “social media campaigns,” and “posters.” Avoid repeated and incomplete phrases, and support your preference with a specific reason, such as attractive design or useful information.

Ejemplo: I like creative digital advertising, especially short advertisements on social media. They are usually colorful, informative, and easy to share with other people. I also appreciate advertisements that clearly explain a product instead of exaggerating its benefits.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with “Yes” and describe one purchase clearly. Use the past tense consistently: “I saw,” “I needed,” and “I bought,” and replace “brought” with “bought.” Explain how the advertisement influenced your decision and avoid repetition such as “which I require” and “I have requirement.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I have bought something because of an advertisement. I once saw an online advertisement for a pair of running shoes while I was looking for suitable shoes for the gym. The advertisement showed a discount and explained the shoes’ features, so I decided to buy them from the website.

× Coming to the advert advertisements I see I do see advertisements in my mobile and the on the laptop.

✓ Regarding advertisements, I do see advertisements on my mobile phone and laptop.

Advertisement is countable, so advertisements is needed when referring to advertisements in general. Also, mobile phone and laptop should be used without unnecessary articles in this general statement.

× I do see advertisements in my mobile and the on the laptop.

✓ I do see advertisements on my mobile phone and laptop.

Use on, not in, with electronic devices such as phones and computers when describing where you see something.

× So for example if I if I am scrolling on YouTube.

✓ For example, if I am scrolling through YouTube, I can see advertisements.

The original sentence is incomplete because the if-clause has no main clause. The repeated words were also removed, and scrolling through YouTube is the natural structure.

× So I can see some ads regarding their businesses.

✓ I can see some advertisements for different businesses.

Use for to show what the advertisements promote. Their is unclear because no specific owners have been mentioned.

× Honestly speaking when I when I am child, I don't use social media.

✓ Honestly speaking, when I was a child, I did not use social media.

The question asks about childhood, so the past tense is required. Use was with the singular noun child, and use did not use for a past negative action.

× When I am child, I don't use social media.

✓ When I was a child, I did not use social media.

A singular countable noun such as child needs an article. The correct expression is a child.

× So I don't have any idea about the advertisement in my childhood.

✓ Therefore, I did not have any clear memories of advertisements from my childhood.

Because the sentence refers to childhood, did not have is more appropriate than do not have. The phrase memories of advertisements is also grammatically clearer.

× So but I do remember when I'm traveling on the road I can see some advertisements beside these streets.

✓ However, I do remember seeing advertisements beside the road when I was traveling.

So and but should not be used together here. However correctly introduces a contrast, and the sentence needs a past-tense clause because it refers to a childhood memory.

× When I'm traveling on the road I can see some advertisements beside these streets.

✓ When I was traveling, I could see some advertisements beside the road.

The memory is about the past, so was traveling and could see are more suitable than the present forms. Beside the road is the natural expression.

× I can see some advertisements beside these streets.

✓ I could see some advertisements beside the road.

Beside the road is the natural collocation in this context. These streets is not the appropriate expression for describing roadside advertisements.

× So at that time I can see some kind of movie promotions.

✓ At that time, I could see some movie promotions.

At that time refers to a past period, so could see is required instead of can see.

× Well, I do see some advertisement on bus transports.

✓ Well, I do see some advertisements on buses and other forms of public transport.

Advertisements should be plural because some refers to more than one item. Buses and public transport are the natural nouns for this meaning.

× I do see some advertisement on bus transports.

✓ I do see some advertisements on buses and other forms of public transport.

Use on buses to describe advertisements displayed on buses. Bus transports is not a natural noun phrase.

× They paint some kind of their business business.

✓ They paint advertisements for their businesses on the buses.

Business was unnecessarily repeated, and businesses should be plural if several companies are being discussed. The phrase advertisements for their businesses clearly expresses the intended meaning.

× So however I can with my it can be so attractive for me catch my attention where the what are the advertisements?

✓ However, these advertisements can be attractive and catch my attention.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and incorrectly ordered phrases. The correction uses a clear subject, modal verb, adjective, and verb phrase.

× It depends upon the advertisements which high requirements.

✓ It depends on the type of advertisement and how appealing it is.

High requirements does not describe advertisements correctly. Appealing is the appropriate adjective for something that attracts interest. Depends on is also the more common expression.

× It is so distract through while doing some work on mobile and laptops.

✓ They are so distracting when I am working on my mobile phone or laptop.

The adjective should be distracting because advertisements cause distraction. Distract is a verb, not the correct adjective in this sentence. The subject advertisements is plural, so use are.

× It is so distract through while doing some work on mobile and laptops.

✓ They are so distracting when I am working on my mobile phone or laptop.

Advertisements is plural, so the pronoun and verb should be they are. Use laptop in the singular when referring to one device at a time.

× When I am traveling on the car or bike I can see some advertisement posters on roads.

✓ When I am traveling in a car or on a bike, I can see advertisement posters along the roads.

Use in a car but on a bike. Along the roads is the natural prepositional phrase for posters located beside roads.

× I can see some advertisement posters on roads.

✓ I can see some advertisement posters along the roads.

The plural noun roads is appropriate when speaking generally about more than one road. Some also correctly modifies the plural noun posters.

× They can attract my eyes to double.

✓ They can really attract my attention.

Attract my eyes is not the natural expression in this context. Attract my attention is the correct collocation, and really is the appropriate adverb.

× Well advertisements I would like to see in future.

✓ The advertisements I would like to see in the future are digital advertisements and poster advertisements.

Use in the future, including the definite article the. The original phrase is also incomplete, so a main verb is needed.

× If I have started my own business I would like to promote my own product.

✓ If I start my own business, I would like to promote my own products.

In a first conditional sentence, use the present tense after if: if I start. Use would like in the main clause to describe the result or intention.

× I would like to promote my own product while advertising it is either a digital advisement or poster advisement.

✓ I would like to promote my own products through either digital advertisements or poster advertisements.

Products, advertisements, and posters should be plural when referring to these categories generally. The structure either...or must connect two parallel noun phrases.

× While advertising it is either a digital advisement or poster advisement.

✓ I could advertise them through either digital advertisements or poster advertisements.

While does not connect the ideas correctly here. The correction uses through to introduce the advertising methods and keeps the either...or structure parallel.

× I would like I will see some posture vibrations.

✓ I would like to see some poster advertisements.

After would like, use the to-infinitive: would like to see. Poster advertisements is the correct noun phrase; posture vibrations changes the intended meaning.

× Well, I bought a lot of things while seeing the advertisements.

✓ Well, I have bought a lot of things after seeing them in advertisements.

After seeing them is the clearer structure for explaining that the purchases happened as a result of seeing advertisements. The pronoun them avoids unnecessary repetition.

× I have seen some random shoes which I require which I have requirement for the gym purpose.

✓ I saw some shoes that I needed for the gym.

Use saw and needed to describe a completed past purchase. The phrase have requirement for is incorrect; needed is the natural verb.

× I have requirement for the gym purpose.

✓ I needed them for the gym.

Use for the gym to express purpose. Have requirement for is not a natural English construction; use needed instead.

× I have been going through the website and I have seen shoes and I brought the shoes in office.

✓ I was browsing a website, saw the shoes, and bought them for use at the gym.

The actions happened in a completed sequence in the past, so was browsing, saw, and bought are appropriate. Bought means purchased, while brought means carried something to a place.

× I brought the shoes in office.

✓ I bought the shoes for use at the gym.

For use at the gym correctly expresses the purpose of the shoes. In office is not appropriate here, and bought is required for the meaning purchased.